Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 57

43 n 44

clouds are clearing from brij's mind after talking with sam.

dev said geet that now she is able to grey shed in relations which is good change in her

brij confess geet that she is the much better reason to sacrify his love for naintara

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I think Brij could take a decision for himself .Dev and Geet r changing .Anne should choose vicky who cares more for her and there is no garantee that Arjun has changed. I like the siblings and their love for each other.what kind of parents r they ? Hurting their own children.they hurt geet for nothing .they hurt Brij ?It was a worthful talk between Sameera and brij .Nice updates

Part 43

Emotional and Excellent

Parents are the type of human that just loves their

children unconditionally

they sacrifice they everything for the happiness of their

children , they protect their children no matter the age

and here Brij parents were actually selfish because they loved

their son only because he is responsible and dutiful one that

follows every word every command of theirs and yet they held back

on their love , yet Brij's mother made him sacrifice his love

its strange that a mother can see her son single unhappy for so many years

and still do nothing about it

Brij carries the guilt of sacrificing his love , he carries the guilt of not

protecting his little sister

and somewhere deep within he carries the guilty of allowing his parents

not to give him the freedom to decide his will

Brij carries heavy burdens yet at the same time he does not want to be

selfish and leave his parents and this fact is understandable

Sameera feels if Brij leaves home he will at least be able to be in peace

he can than slowly move on in his life

I believe Brij has much more deep pain and burdens within him

and this must be the first time he actually spoke his problem out

Dev had come to visit Muskaan and I'm glad that he did so the little girl

should not be burden by her parents divorce

and hopefully she does not get much effected

Dev telling Geet she has changed and it was rather interesting to know

this fact about Geet

she distance herself from someone that hurts her , and Dev says in life

in every relation there is some kind of hurt but she should be able to

forgive a person

I now think if Geet is this way then she probably saw this before her as

a growing child perhaps seeing her parents or parent does not forgive

it will take Geet a long time to actually be a free person without hurtful

skeletons and ways to protect herself from socializing and making friends

Amazing updates.

Brij is having clear mind after talking with sam.

Sam is able to clear d concept of love to brij.

Dev n geet become mature.

Dev make geet understand grey shade in relation n see that new change in geet.

Geet is free from burden while talking with brij that she was the reason of break up brij with tara.

Part 44

Outstandingly Fantastic

I'm actually liking Pari and Rehaan

though she has loved Yash so much that its difficult to move on from him

Rehaan he likes Pari's company but it almost feels like

he is getting serious about her

Arjun wanting to know when Annie will return , and Rehaan telling him

that she left to sort out all the mess and make a perfect decision

the phrase that says set someone free if they love you they will return

otherwise they were never yours , Rehaan trying his best

he doubt he realized just how easy it was for him to say those words

and how difficult it would be for Arjun to sacrifice his love

It truly is amazing that even Geet knew Brij is in some kind of turmoil

and Geet asking him if she was the reason that he left Naintara

and I truly loved Brij's words that because of Geet it was was worth

breaking up with Naintara

he wants to actually look at his separation from Naintara in a positive light

and when he says it cannot be because of their parents its rather painful

because we as children do everything we can for our parents and here Brij

is saying its because he had that chance to see his Geetu been strong

Both Brij and Geet have a lot of deep pain heavy burdens that they need

to let go slowly and heal in their life be happy and love simply

Both chapters well updated. Each and every character is undergoing some or the other turmoil and trying to overcome the same.

Brij is really restless he need some peace sam trying to make him burden free he can arrange servant and have touch with them his mom only want control on him and that is not love brij was relax and he can think on her suggestion that way he get some peace geet too have burden on her heart so she talked to brij and he was honest with her he consoles her he loved her more

Pari knows Rehaan is nice guy and like his relations with his sis

Dev too came fr muskan and talked to geet he found geet calm and relaxed he told her she changed and try to convey that not every relations have white and black some time grey is to exist

Geet to found dev get mature

Part 44

Incredible update.... nicely written

Brij and Sameera share a lovely bond and understand each other.

great that Sameera prodded Geet to open up.

can understand Brij's thoughts.

he does need some time alone.

its natural for Brij to feel overwhelmed.

at least Sameera assured him.

Brij feeling guilty and wants to take care of his parents as he owes it to them.

well Sameera was brutally honest and direct with him.

of cos Maan will understand Brij.

Sameera was correct that Brij deserves to be happy.

great that Sameera made understand that Tara never wanted him to chose.

yes his mom wanted to control him.

hate that his mom....

nice that Dev came to visit Muski.

so Dev has noticed that Geet has changed.

Dev showed Geet how judgmental she was and does not forgive easily.

nice that they were able to have a civil convo.

Part 44

stupendous update. brilliantly written

Can Arjun just allow Annie the time that she needs>

if he really loves her then he should understand her.

at least Rehaan was honest with him.

he was correct that Arjun needs to respect Annie's decision.

loved his advice to Arjun.

Rehaan seems to be falling for Pari.

adore how he teases her.

Rehaan is not that subtle lol.

nice that Rehaan will always support Annie.

can understand Pari's curiosity about Vicky.

nice response from Rehaan.

Annie does have a difficult decision to make.

of cos Pari knows what Rehaan is trying to convey about his feelings.

she is not ready for this....

she needs to move on....

liked that Geet knew Brij was disturbed.

Geet's question is reasonable.

loved Brij's response and assurance.

the decision was worth it... and he does not want Geet to feel guilty.

hate his parents....

Brij is an amazing bro

Geet and Brij are making progress and dealing with issues

update soon