Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 23

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Thank you for updating part even you are not fully recover.

Maan & Brij are friends from childhood. Brij sent Maan to bring Geet. He knows that Geet not come. Let see how Maan bring them.


My recovery will take time and I doubt I will fully recover ever but I will fight.

I will try updating as frequently as my health allows. Thank you.smiley1

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 25

Congrats on 25 updates!!

thanks for the pm!

Fascinating emotional update! superbly written.

glad that Brij called Maan! liked their bond! Maan is there for Brij!

hope Brij's dad gets better soon! glad that Brij confided in Maan!

Aww Brij playing matchmaker!

Hmm at least Maan knows Brij well! of cos Maan warned Arjun! but Arjun seems sincere!

Brij was correct that Maan loves Geet! when will Maan realise?

as expected Pari is shocked seeing Maan there!

Maan broke the news to Geet about her dad!!

can understand why Geet refuses to go!

will Maan manage to convince Geet?

update when time allows!

Realization will take time cause both are in denial about the depth of their connection..... Whether Maan would be able to convince Geet or not will come out in the next chapter.

Update depends more on my health than time really. I will try updating as frequently as my health allows. Thank you.smiley1

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: IMA9167

didnt expect uodate this soon

u really surprised all

nice part

thanks for pm

brij called maan as his father was in hospital ,brij parents were never a loving couple but thier mom bad mouthing geet made thier father temper to loose

mayb he should have had this argument when yash and geet left home

maan was tempting to strangke arjun but the situation stopped him

brij playing match naker is funny and ironic in the situation given,loved the way brij gtrated the divorces sure a divorce is a second chance to love

wow brij knew even about geet and maan a meeting in airport gave him much needed opening to play cupid

brij is a true friend he gave both his friends a chnace to gain thier love

he too needs a happily ever after

I had written an update before writing that note.

About Geet's father's pov more is there to that story but it was like a dam had finally broken for him. Maan had told Brij about their meeting when they met at the airport. And Brij would get his happily ever after I am sure.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

as expected another beautiful part thoda tense and sad yet your flavor.....


we can see more than 90% couple like brije ma papa always mismatch pata nahi kaha galat ho jate hai some time situation some time ego and me myself thought anyways it think geet mother is example of that ....


brije in crises he doing match making but maan caught him poor fellow i lkie maan dhamki part to arjun great and brije hope for anni arjun as well as geet maan good


in last maan so caring about little one anjali he don"t want she hear it ...



all over again a master stroke


so its called come with BANG ....



welcome back again thnks for update

It is sad that so many people stay unhappy maybe because they stop trying to think from their spouse's perspective. Thank you for your lovely compliments.

Brij was not just a cupid but things would be revealed more.

I think you meant Muskaan as there is no Anjali here in this story. May be I will get an Anjali as well. ;😉the name is giving me ideas.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree


Amazing n emotional update

Thank you for the lovely compliments my dear 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: priyasree

Maan n Brij knows each other very well....

Hope Mr. Handa get well soon and Geet n Pari visit him

Let's see what the future holds....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Awesome pt

Maan was standing with his friend on his emotional time but brij try to fool him but he also MSK he told him straight and warned arjun and then went to Geet he was not sure about his feelings bz he recently break one relation and not ready fr another so soon but he have soft corner fr Geet which soon transfer to love

Geet not ready to come after listening about hr father hope Maan manage everything

Both Maan and Geet will take time to move on. They have been burnt badly by love and with Muskaan things are even more complicated.

I am sure MSK will make things work.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

Interesting.

Brij called maan as his father suffered a heart attack.

His mom was the one who triggered him.

Maan n arjun were present for brij to support him in this situation.

Brij tried playing Cupid between arjun n annie, maan n geet.

Arjun n maan talked about annie. Arjun said he wouldn't give up without trying enough n would respect Annie's decision.

Brij n Maan talked, where brij shared with maan about his parents n his siblings. How none of them have much feelings for their parents.

Maan went to bring geet n pari to the hospital.

He informed them about Mr. Handa.

Geet though shocked but refused to go to the hospital, as she had muskaan to care of.

Brij has other motives behind his action other than playing cupid. Things would be revealed soon.

In next update more will be revealed regarding Geet's reactions.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

Welcome bck dear...an jaldi shuru kardo likhna


Ek update toh diya... Did you miss part 25?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi234

Nice update

Brij's parents were arguing n dis brij's father had a heart attack ...n now in hospital

Maan n arjun were with brij in hospital ...brij's mother was also very worried. ..brij suggested to send his mother with arjun to km...knowing arjun wanted to talk to annie

Maan agreed but warned arjun to respect her decision

Brij tied to being Cupid to maaneet too but maan got it...embarrassing him

Maan went to bring geet along with him to hosita ....Geet was shocked worried listening about her dad condition but denied to see him

Waiting for nxt

Brij has some other motives beside playing cupid and all but I am sure you will enjoy the coming updates.

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