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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: leena63

Fabulous update
Maaneet dance was the most beautiful thing in the world
Now dinner date uhoon...


Thank you! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aditi.kesari

Harmony they are trying to make with each other is shattering every time

But this bitterness has to go out before they start fresh
Awesome update


Thank you!
Yes, they need to remove all traces of bitterness to start afresh.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

maan was hurt by geet so mch in th past that sometimes th past overpowers his present happiness...definitely he was so mch broken in those years which made him todays maan sing khurana...geet now starting to read maans eyes wow...eagerly wtng fr the dinner or say dinner date...i finally abled to finish this update which took my whole day coz i was at office...evrytime i was reading two or three lines in middle of my works


Aww! The update was longer than usual as is.

Yes, Maan was definitely broken and it was a big reason what made him today's Maan.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Thanks for the update
Hope ur feeling better
Amazing update ... apologies...
Very difficult to accept & express


Thanks, Muskan. I'm better.

Very rightly said! Apologies are the hardest to be said and accepted.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: fict

Loved the update. Past keeps cropping up between them and threaten the fragile relation they have now. Best thing is that Geet is now able to read him and his pain. waiting for next.


I'm glad to know you loved the update.
The fragile thread of their relationship definitely needs a lot of strengthening from both their sides.
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Posted: 7 years ago
An excellent part and a lovely story
Please do update soon
Take care
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maansi25

Ch 49
Beautiful update after a long wait
Fulfilling our wish of some moments of happiness for Geet
Maan always the one to remain in control
Is emotionally unstable sometimes
And reacts uncontrolled
Geet feeling guilty
Thanks for Anaya and Raya to bring her out from melancholic mood
And
There she apologized
And my my
The answer as expected
It is business and eant the best
It clearly indicates that along with the head designer for the company
He himself wants designer
He wants her back in his life
He is pretending he has moved on
But love is difficult to die
Fire need to be rekindled
And should not be visible
Be disclosed or open
To make him feel wanton
How he manipulated in Geet joining the company
Making her office in the backyard
With same decorated office
Floor to ceiling glas wall to see her to his full anytime
But his unstable behaviour makes things odd for geet many times
And at the sa.e time is praiseworthy for her with others
Nice talk of Geet with Ranbir which gave her strength to go on further with her work with full zeal and heart
Again some sad memories engulfing them to strain their relationship or should I say relation
Then they meet again
And
Sudden change in the demeanor
Conveying the message
Which geet is not able to grasp
And then the text came
And wow
Mr tough is apologizing
Taking a step ahead
Waiting for the sweet refreshing and reuniting dinner
Which will bring some colour to their blank canvas
Needs to be done something for them
They have lost their beautiful Eight years of togetherness with Geet's one folly
Which could not be undone but could be relived
Waiting as always all the time for the next one
PS
Hope you will like the comment
Compulsion of commenting for the update is teaching us novices to use our little bit of language power.
Thanks for updating


Thank you so much!
It's a pleasure knowing you enjoyed it. And I'm grateful to you for leaving your feedback as well. Definitely makes a writer's day when the readers think the story is worth commenting on!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: its_me

FANTABULOUS...


First of all a big Thank you for updating... that too such a longer one 😊

This story being one of my personal favourite... made me bug you at more than one occasion...

I actually read the entire update twice... Coz when I found the update I was at work & couldn't keep myself from reading... although with too much interruption...

So read it again as soon as I was back...

Coming to update...

Well when I started... I was expecting a prolonged cold war types between Maan & Geet... But you have surprised us again...

It was very humble at the same time courageous of Geet to actually go and apologize... It's always easy to blame others for your actions... Feeling and accepting guilt is tough... And atonement is the toughest...

It was so cute when Maan was trying to cover up each time Ranbir tried to spill the beans...

That rain dance I guess... might work as the most awaited Ice breaker...

No matter how much they try to block those old memories... their past is very much there between them ... keeping them away ... not letting them look into their own hearts and realize what exactly it needs... especially Geet... coz we are not aware of Maan's thought process... so can't say how is he feeling and analyzing

Looking forward to their "Dinner after seminar"...

Don't make us wait for so long again please...

Once again... Thanks for updating...😊😊



Thank you so much! It's always good to read your comments.

I don't mind being bugged as long as the readers understand that a writer is as much human wig a personal life as the readers are.

Must have taken you quite a lot of time to read this chapter, especially reading it twice. The only time I read the whole chapter in one go was to proofread and my, my! It was so long! 😆

Hmm... they can't be together if they try to block old memories and pretend nothing happened at all. The only way for them to be happy together is to face their past and accept what it was instead of trying to overlook it.

Thanks to leaving your feedback every time! I appreciate it. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks 4 updating! spectacular update! beautifully written! after much persistence Geet reveals wt happened! loved that she took the initiative and apologized! Maan stupefied! liked that Maan appreciated her work! great seeing Maan enjoy! wow Maan offered dinner as an apology! update soon


Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


🤗

I'm so happy you enjoyed it, Sheen!

Aapkay maasumana sawal ka jawab hai, jee haan. Aur bohat jald! 😉


Yep.. I enjoyed it.. ab dobara mouqa do enjoy karne ka.. Update soon 😉😆

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