Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 22

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Loved the update. It was everything. A nice update. Amazing update.Superb update.Very beautiful update. Don't have words to explain.Pls update soon.🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: Alamelu

ha ha this maan is full of surprises...loved the end about him having some fun...beautiful and de3serving office for geet

Originally posted by: sanum23

maan surprised hr showing full department

which so classy

Originally posted by: kshubhangi

Wonderful story. I like your way of expressing. Fabulous. Continue it

Originally posted by: honeygrape

Haa. The last line just blew my mind away. Hayeee. This s getting more n more interesting.

Originally posted by: DaftGirk

Sorry for being late, had a number of assignments to hand in this week.
No need for sorry!

Designers Den, honestly I had expected something along the lines of Dragons Den (a show here). You know the scary, high on fear and excitement, the unusual first-time meeting kind of scenario and Maan for sure didn't live it down either, blimey he's one intimidating boss. Glad Geets equally rigid, she doesn't get fazed by his coochy coo looks although he has his effects i.e. the Beautiful' moment. I wonder what would have happened had the other guy not stepped in, would they have continued this eye match or the retina test lol. Yeah I know they're gazing romantically, otherwise known as the Maaneet eye-lock, now that was intense; at times I was forced to skip forward during the epic MAHI moments lol yep I don't do romance. Now it's a different story that I'm the biggest rom-com fanatic at home, there isn't a movie I haven't watch. Even before my sisters stop to watch a movie, I've already given them the plot and my thoughts hehehe. Bless my sisters taking me as a judge although they do tend to love everything I love. Even my brother in the old days wasn't spared of my charms lol actually he'd make me massage his legs/head etc in exchange of a movie, Rom-com/teen/animation etc (he paid for FilmFlex back then, although it wasn't called that then I don't think). Poor bhai used to sleep off, I remember High School Musical 2, he almost went berserk but needed to wait out his promise and then I blamed him for his bad movie choice, his face was well worth it. Ahhh good fond memories.

Haha! Such memories are the ones that you can never forget and the essence of them never gets old. Every time you think about them, your reaction is almost the same as it was the first time, isn't it?

Anyway sorry, where was I, yep Maan has this deviously enchanting character. Its tough to stay angry at times, reading him now I was like was that me going bonkers during the last updates. I so get why Avi's in love with him. His lovable in a twisted way, cause naturally me being me I don't like challenging male characters hence twisted lol, I want them to fall on the floor with fair maiden' kinda stuff lol. Quite the chauvinist, female kind hehehehe. So seriously reading it with a filtered mind plus possessive Avi might be scary, and I don't do scary lol (Avi I love you, you know that right).

😆 I am literally laughing as I type this out. A chauvinist female amongst us, or more specifically, a feminist. 😆 Honestly, who doesn't like the fall on the floor with the maiden kinda stuff? I do, for one. 😳

Ok I get Geets feeling guilty for her reaction, maybe I'm probably experiencing the same, but like her I'm not going to admit that, now am I? Hell no? That time called for those reactions, Maan had it coming, ofcourse he had. How dare I find faults in myself when Maan's readily available lol.

Absolutely! You mustn't think you were over reacting or anything. Not at all! 😆

Might I add I love how descriptive this chapter was, anyone would kill to work in such an office that's also personally designed by Maan, ok maybe not kill lol. You know I was like thinking the same, why did he need Geet then, if he was so fantastic at designing and then of course he was busy, like darn that guy for making it out as if me and Geet are dumb. He sure don't need reasons to enter my hit list, does he? With that attitude is racing through to my list lol.

Lol! Which hit list? 😉

He wanted to show it himself, a major part of me is like awww but... You know what there's no buts its aww all the way from mind and heart. Shoot this guy's charming my socks off quite literally lol, since I've got my slipper socks on lol. It's far too cold not to be wearing them. Naturally though, I can so imagine Maan dancing on pins to know her reaction, although he doesn't show it, I can so tell. I'm good at telling emotions, ok I'm not but its sounds more believable when I say so or act so lol. Geet's impressed, Maan's impressed which equals to me being impressed.

Finally an aww from you which stays aww all the way!

who doesn't like a little bit of fun' ooo the GALL of the man, how dare he? Hehehe

It's not fair how he makes you feel so many emotions at the same time, he should be arrested in some Fiction cell. I'm telling you, he sets off far too many reactions and makes you feel all gooey too. The types criminals are made of lol ok romantic heroes but ignore the last bit ok, don't what an egoistic Maan to reach for the roof.

Oh, he already is through that roof!

Geet better watch out, if he's getting to me then what's in her? He's impressed Avi already and maybe half your other readers. This is a gone case, is there any point fighting it. Should I just succumb to his charms, but I can't, I don't roll like that lol, I like weirdos and this guy's not weird hehehehe.

You, miss, are one out of all the readers who's going to get a kick after reading the next chapter.

Ok jokes to one side. Let's get down to the grit: This was one short update, I'm complaining to writers association, not fair. Writers such as yourself should be limited to 3000 words minimum lol.

Lol! 3000 words is not really a hard task. The next chapter is 6000. But I go by the scenes. Only those that fit together come in the same chapter, no extra stuff so the word count doesn't matter. Besides, did you forget the earlier chapters of WH? 😆

Thank you for a great update and for silencing the raging bull that escaped during the last 2 updates lol. Not that I'm a bull nor I'm a raging one at that lol

Thank you for being here and always leaving such a enjoyable comments! Theyre greatly appreciated!

Previous note: I'm from the UK, it was hard initially at Sixth form, I was like Sir/Miss but got told off a lot lol (but in a sweet kinda way), by the end of half-term I went to Jackie, Steve, Linda etc. and now its prof Nasser or Dr Berry basically Dr with first name lol but it depends on age, the older lot mind the first name thing. As for the movie, I reckon its Main Hoon Na -SRK cause violins, dupatta, leaves etc was over-exercised in that movie but I kinda liked it. Love obviously isn't that but I like over exaggeration. And true being calm answers a lot more than anger lol, I believe in the quote the tongue is sharper than the knife' so technically try to watch my words, typing is a different thing altogether though lol.

I see! Never really heard the first name basis though, not that I've ever been to the UK, let alone studying there. 😆

Lol. I've forgotten the movie myself but I know for sure it's not Main hoon na. Let me get back to you after going through my reply to your previous comment. 😆

Originally posted by: WhiteRussian

He really put a great effort in doing this and Geet seems very impressed to his satisfaction both ways , he managed to get her riled up and fascinate by showing what he did

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Just loved it Mari.. It was perfect!

Maan sure knows how to make someone's first day at work most memorable..It was mean, it was fun, it was entertaining and it was also sweet!

Maan is such an enigma... love him. And even after knowing him for so many years, Geet gets frazzled by him so easily... it is so cute, it is so endearing...

Originally posted by: its_me

OMG...

Awesome... Fantabulous... Mind blowing...

None of us would have thought that such a surprise will be waiting for us ...

It was too good...

Each detail was so beautifully described...

And if the first line showed the sparks between them... Then the last line was icing on the cake...

Thanks for updating... Continue soon...

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

Part-47

It's the new maan all over the update😆.

A brilliant surprise to geet.
But this line stole the show, "Who doesn't like just a little bit of fun?"😉😆