Will You Marry Me ?(Maan-Groom Side)

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Geet phone received voice message from DD(Dust Danab)

Geet: DD voice message this time
with confused face

Voice message

Miss Geet, we have important meeting tonight .You have 1 hour time .Your dress already arrived in your apartment door.change your dress and come soon .my driver waiting for u outside with car.Already ten minutes over so you have only 50 minutes
with bossy tone

Voice message end

Geet : What he thinking in his mind, I am just secretary of him not his wife.He is ordering me.I am not going anywhere
with angry face but I am not stay from him also with puppy face

Geet : Geet stop ur bhak bhak .u have less time


Geet wore white saree that give by him and coming out her apartment.Already driver waiting for her

Driver open car back door: Mam plz sit inside , Sir waiting for you

Geet sit inside comfortably and driver drive the car

Geet: Bhai where r u going

Driver:

Geet: Bhai I talked only you

Driver : No reply
only concentrate his driving

Geet (In Mind) : Hey babaji see even driver bhai also same like DD .DD never show his feeling to anyone.He make everyone like him.No Geet what u think he not make everyone like him because ur exception case


Car stop destination place and geet come out of her thought

Driver: Mam your place arrived


Geet step down to car and driver went away from place
Geet look like angle straightly come from heaven.without make up she look like adorable
Geet seeing dark place and only hears rolling waves sound
Geet(in mind): Why he bring me beach side , yeha pe kounsi meeting hone wali hai ?with little bit scared and confused face

Geet: Maan sir ,where r u
with slow voice

Geet step forward two steps and her sandal pressed button




Light turn on one by one.dark place become glowing place
Big heart shape entrance placed with decorated made of red roses

Geet enter the place through heart entrance.
The place fully decorated by red roses , colourful light , fragnance candles.ground placed red carpet with full of rose petals.

Geet walking in red carpet.suddenly roses petal fallen on her like roses rain .Geet looking at sky

Roses petals fallen through helicopter .Geet open her arms and enjoyed rose rain with closed eyes.After some time roses rain are stopped.

One side beautiful open tent . Her eyes caught beautifully designed small table with red color covering .Tent under dinner table with opposite chairs arranged neatly but everything in white colour.Above table champagne bottle with two glass and beautiful flowers arranged in flower vase and other side music instruments arranged but no one here...

Geet: Maan sir
with lovely voice

Geet hears only voice from one side

Geet know very well who's owner of that voice

Geet: Maan sir where r u..
.but this time his voice isn't come. So she approached to first table and saw here is one gift box with white rose

This is for you Mishti


Again his voice come with smile she is looking here and there

Geet : Thank u
Maan voice: Geet , white rose symbol of purity and innocence.I never see anyone purity human being like You are white rose


Geet become emotional and open the gift box with a anxious she dropped that blank wrap and saw a beautiful teddy...



with smile moist eyes she hugged that teddy .Next she goes another table and saw again one gift with pink rose

Maan voice:Pink rose symbol of perfect happiness, u make everyone happiness You are pink rose


Geet also kissed it and open the gift wrap to see one chocolate box with heartshape...



This time she turn restless where from Maan sounds coming...

Geet : Maan sir aap ho kaha ?

Maan : Not now Geet. Go ahead


With pouting she approached another table

Maan voice: Peach color symbol of sincerity , some time ur sincerity make me speechless You are peach rose

Geet: Now u only make me speechless

Again goes to another

Maan voice: Yellow rose symbol of friendship, you stay with me whenever I need friend shoulder to share my pain, You are yellow rose

Geet : But u never share ur pain with me
with moist eyes
With heavy heart she goes another table

Maan voice: Orange symbol of desire, I desire with u Geet, u make me insane for u

Geet: Maan u only make me insane
with blushing face
Next table Lavender rose

Maan voice: Lavender symbol of love at first sight , when I met u I lost myself with u .You are lavender rose


When she goes another table she shocked to see a black rose

Maan voice: Black rose symbol of death, u think why i give black rose, that rose not indicates u that black rose indicate me.My life became death but u come to my life make me alive.I m black rose geet

Geet close her eyes: U never black rose maan

Maan voice: Red rose indicate love , ur goddess of love geet, u give ur love to till my enternity

Geeet open her eyes and seeing maan front of her and give to red rose

Geet pick up red rose from his hand : Maan
but maan finger placed her lips

Maan: Plz don't talk anything now iam not finished yet


Geet nods her head and maan remove his fingers and cupped her hand with his palm

Maan: U come to my life like angel.angel make dark sorrow to beautiful happiness.ur my angel
Ur my sunshine, sunshine remove darkness.U removes my dark past
This flower fragrance nothing in front of ur natural fragrance .everyone said beautiful girl example to moon but i am saying truth u r more beautiful than that moon.
Whenever I close my eyes I see ur face only
Everyday ur almond eyes disturb my sleep
Everytime u talked with me.i want eat ur cherry lips in raw
u think also why iam not said this words before beacuse i am ur secret admirer.


Geet bushing hearing his word and one side tear flows in her eyes and Maan kiss her tears

Maan: I will face any battle but I cannot face ur single drop tears mishty


Maan kneel down in front of her and show diamond ring to her




Maan: Will u be my better half
with eager face

Geet nods her head negatively and maan face fell down

Geet smiled : Yes I will
and show her left Hand .

Maan smiled and wore ring in her hand and kissed above ring

Maan : I love u geet


Crackers brust in sky with word written to


Will you be mine forever and ever

Will you marry with your DD

Maan's love's you Mishti


and crackers burst continuously like any festival happening,Geet was looking at them with amazed feeling how much Maan loves her

Geet : I love u too maan

Maan cupped her cheeks : May i

Geet cheeks become red and close her eyes to give his permission

Maan rough lips pressed her soft petal lips.maan left hand hold her slim waist and right hand hold her cheeks.
Their light kiss turned to passionate one.geet one hand on his shoulder and other hand carrying his hairs.
After sometime they broke to catche some breath.Maan joint his forehead with Geet...

Maan : Dinner is waiting Mishti

Geet : Hmm


But Geet is too lost with Maan's warmth make him chuckle


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story..
Beautiful update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for the story...
fabulous update
ohhh so sweet... itna sara gifts teddy, chocolate ...
mann toh kar rha hai... kash mere pass v ho.. silly me...
maan be toh speechless kar dia... kya propose kia hai...
NO bopna ka toh sawal hi nhi utha tha...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi there! superb update! wonderfully written! Maan makes its so special! romantic unique confession! beautiful proposal! Geet happy n overwhelmed!

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Colors and flower for me Portrays feeling in the best way... Loved the way defined each of them so beautifully, loved it..Congrats
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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww so nice n beautiful update
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lovely readers,

thanks for ur lovely comments but plz dont comment in this thread . this is not new story. this our maan team work for our ghsp marriage contest ka round 1 update. so plz stop comment in this thread. and if u want comment or sharing ur feeling through ur pm to our team members ( JAYEETA_06, _YmBrYnE_,MGMahika ,Maaneetfavo) or plz wait some more time ,our contest crew members give link to all soon . our contest rules not spamming in this thread .i think my lovely readers understand😳

our team maan created new thread for readers comment -



u comments in above link thread not for our purposal thread 😳

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Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago

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