||Maneet Ek Jashn|| Team Mishty || Update @ Page 2 ||

Page

Next Last

Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Members Of the team

Soju.

Pixelflower620

Gurujaan

Click Here for Discussion Thread

Edited by Soju. - 8 years ago

Quote

Frequent Posters

Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Round one ~ Proposal ~ Next Post

Round Two ~ Pre-Wedding Rituals Part 1 ~ Ring Ceremony, Hen's PartPart 2 ~ Kidnapping The Bride, Party Fund Raiser, Wishing a Good Luck!(These Are The Ceremonies From German Traditions)All above at Page 2

Edited by Soju. - 8 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

It was one of the other days when Maan worked in the office occasionally stealing glances of his love Geet from his cabin. He concentrated on his work and after he was done thought to again sneak in her cabin, as he entered he found it empty. He looked around but she was nowhere to be seen, "Now where did she go. Before he could yell, he saw a note there, addressed to him, "I will be waiting for you. "What is this all about now, it doesn't make any sense, He sighed. He hurried to home anyway. He entered the outhouse and called for her, "Geet, where are you. Again she was not there and here he found a note again, "Look for me through your heart not mind Mr Khurana, may be you will find me. Maan was getting redder now not due to embarrassment but his temper, "What is she up to now. He looked around and asked Nakul, a trustworthy servant who was working since Maan was a teenager, "Sir , Geet Ma'am told us to ask you to go to the Raddison Blu, she is waiting there." Maan sighed and nodded not getting her hide and seek game and reached the designated place. He was really surprised to see the decorations there, beautiful balloons and candles made the atmosphere look soothing. his thoughts were running very fast "Holy... Did she booked whole hotel...???" Composing himself he started looking for her"Geet, He called again to hear the sound of her bangles and anklets followed by her musical laughter.

Maan took steps in the direction but stopped seeing a Gladiolus flower, he picked it up and heard her voice, "These flowers are for remembrance, do you remember our first meeting". He nodded, remembering how far they have come since then from strangers, they are now going to be soul mates. "Honestly, I thought you were the rudest and meanest person ever but after I got here you helped me a lot, She said. He took steps ahead to find some Lavenders, "These are for for the purity of our relationship as well as my devotion for you."

Maan was liking this so far, he found Orchids, he picked them up "as you are my strength, i promise to be your strength not weakness". Next was on line Irises "Like this royal flower, i promise you that only you will be the King in my life"

Maan was smiling broadly throughout the way towards his love. By the time he reached there he heard her complaining "So it was Nakul who told you about me being here... but how can you forget this place that means you forget my favorite place... and in that you were angry" Maan went near her and dropped a peck on her pouty lips saying number of sorries to her.

In few seconds, she was satisfied with his apologies. She grabbed the flowers from his hands and put them on the table. Grabbing his hands, she took him towards the room.

As the door opened, Maan saw number of helium balloons with their photos on them. Maan was awed he was looking through each photo. He was surely driving through a memory lane. Geet was looking at him lovingly. When she saw him getting emotional she lead him to the bedroom where every part of the wall was covered with the sticky note.

"I Love You" Maan was overwhelmed, he really enjoyed it, he really loved it and he really appreciate her efforts. He was glancing through it when he heard "Well Mr. Maan Singh Khurana after the journey of hate we finally relaxed around the river of love. You and I came so close that we shared almost everything by the time whether food or your dominating kisses. i have no complaints i have no question but the one..."

Maan who was waiting for her to continue took a sharp intake of breath. Geet was nervous but gathering all the remaining confidence she asked "Won't you share your Name with me??? I would love to hear Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana rather Miss Handa, will you give me this beautiful honor???". "Hmm...let me think", He tried to tease her only to find her twitching her lips and complaining to her Babaji. Maan put all her complaints to rest by sealing it with a loving kiss, "I hope that answer your question, Miss Handa, or rather should I say, my would be wife, Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana". She blushed and hugged him tightly which he reciprocated dreaming of their beautiful life ahead.

We are sure, you all can imagine the next part... hmmm... we are still in dreamy mode... 😆😆. So this is it guys... Credits to my team members... though for me it seemed hard both we all managed... CHEERS!!!!!😆😆😆 I hope you guys like it... we wait for your thoughts...😳😳

Edited by Soju. - 8 years ago

Quote

khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

fab thread! beautiful update! lovely banner! superbly written! Geet proposes 2 Maan in her style! unique proposal! loved it! is there a next part?????

Quote

Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
fab thread! beautiful update! lovely banner! superbly written! Geet proposes 2 Maan in her style! unique proposal! loved it! is there a next part?????

no dear... as this was the contest theme... we stopped after proposal 😳

Quote

xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

Elite

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

JINRO... ☺️ Ohhhk... as I couldn't sleep, here I am re-reading this at such time 🤪😆 ( must be 2:30 in G land, didn't even bother you 🤣🤗). After reading it again on my phone, I just couldn't refrain myself from commenting... so turned on my lappy just to comment 🤣😳 And TRUST ME, if I do that at almost 7 AM in my sleepy mood after behaving like a bhatakti aatma all night long 🤣 --- it means I'm impressed!!! ❤️

First of all, I would like to congratulate this team for managing to write such a beautiful proposal, even if there were time differences 👏😳 Yooo... I mean... you need a lot of patience to cope with and the result is stunning as I expected it to be ❤️

Loving the tags and the banner, the pics were wonderfully placed in the right place 😳😆 what a keen eye for detail waah loving it 😉

beautiful work guys!

While reading this awesome piece of writing, my poor little heart literally went mmm ❤️😆😳 Ican already sense some parts were written by the one and only I mean it's so obvious which parts 🤪❤️ Okay 😆 coming to the plot... amazingly written!!! That's such a sweet and lovely idea and quite unique too, as Geet is the one proposing him 😳

Maan stealing glances at his lady love and his care for her was definitely so very sweet, I can already imagine everything! 😳 And loving the fact that Geet chose notes to express herself and make him reach that specific and special place... that's naughty and cute too 😆❤️ It's like he is leading him towards the way to her heart, where he is gonna live forever... ☺️ Even the words used were just perfect and full of intensity... 👏 (hahah, Nakul 😆 some people 😆)

😳 Truly enjoyed Maan's confusion regarding his love's plan 😆 and his surprised look while noticing what she did for him, indeed a romantic atmosphere... ❤️ the sound of her bangles gives such a serene look to the scene, totally describing their heaven... and the fact that he is so attracted to her laughter makes it even more enjoyable😳 proving how much in love he is with her! ❤️

The flower game - so beautiful, so sweet, so romantic yet so playful 😳 The way she describes the meaning of every flower is brilliant 👏 Her genuine confession regarding the way their relatioship changed with time passing is touching She's being so very honest with him and that's make this moment even MORE memorable and eternal 😳❤️ when she promises him to be his strength is pure love ❤️ I know hmm I truly know about the "King of my life" 😉😆 If he is her King, then she is his Queen ❤️ perfect couple 😳

Hahah loved the way he made her become silent 😆 and seems like Geet was really planning this moment a lot, she managedc to bring back all those beautiful memories of them Seeing a smile adorning his face, her whole world seems complete 😳 Food and dominant kisses, oh yeah ☺️ perfect combo 🤪 Her question and so different, unique... she asked the question in such a beautiful and meaningful way and he replied in the same way 😳 I'm sure he loves her blushing and blushing and blushing ❤️ Indeed, after reading this proposal, I am still in my dreamy mode...

Emotions were perfectly depicted 👏👏 Appreciating your heartful and wonderful efforts people... amazing team work and all the best cause this is TRULY fantabulous 🤗

...

@TM... P.S: I love you ❤️😳

Quote

Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

aww its so romantic
geet expressed her feelings beautifully...
no wonder maan was shocked and happy
loved it

Quote

Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely thread Deariee s !!👏😊

Awsm banner

Fab writing trio !!⭐️

Quote

Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Beautifully penned !!

Maan's eyes were searching his love his Geet

Maan was restless on not finding Geet

Maan was excited and delighted with each turn of events that displayed geet's gesture of love for him

Beautiful way to convey one's feelings

Loved the Geet confessed her love and her endurance to became Mrs. MSK !!

Lovely writing Deariees

Fab job trio !!😊👏

Quote

Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#10

PART 1

Geet was sitting thinking about something in her room, their marriage date was decided and now she was thinking about her pre-marriage rituals. She got a call from Maan, "Hi Mishty, what are you doing , right now". "Umm...nothing", She replied. "Then you must be thinking about me", He said mischievously. "Oh hello , don't be so overconfident Mr Khurana, when I say I was doing nothing, I mean it", She said annoyed at his teasing. "Aww Mishty, but I was thinking about you", He said again taking her heart away. "I'm sorr...", She couldn't even complete when he said, "Shh, Mishty, I don't want you to say that ever, you have every right on me. Hmm, but since you said that word you will get a punishment, so met me at the terrace before our party". "B..but Maan , how can I", She said. "That my dear is your problem", Saying that he disconnected the call. She sighed and looked at the rings she bought a pair of couple rings.She started getting ready for the ceremony. The dress and the jewelries were bought by Maan himself, she recalled their day smiling getting ready. As the night approached she somehow managed to escape to the terrace.

She went to the terrace to find it beautifully decorated. She took steps finding the path decorated with rose petals and small paper lanterns decorating the walls to give it a beautiful feel. Before she could move further she was pulled by someone and recognized the warmth of those loving arms who embraced her. "Looking for someone, my dear", He whispered. She turned around to see Maan staring at her lovingly. She blushed, "Is this the way to surprise your future wife. I was scared by your sudden pull". "I did not wanted to scare you dear, just that you looked so beautiful that I could not stop myself", He smiled. "Alright, now why did you call me here", She asked. "Come here", Saying this he took her near a huge window from where they could see the moon. "I wanted the moon to know that my sweetheart's beauty and innocence will always shine better than his, and looks like I was right, see that is why he is slowly retreating behind those clouds", He said pointing towards it. "Okay, now come to the point", She blushed hearing his praises but tried to cover up. "Before our official party, I wanted to give you this", Saying this he took out a ring and slipped it into her finger kissing her hand. Geet carefully looked at the ring and it said we belong together, forever in love Maaneet. She was overwhelmed and hugged him, he separated her from himself and kissed her forehead, "Geet, promise me you will never shed tears, I really want you to smile and enjoy these days". "Thank you Maan. I m really happy". After spending sometime they went downstairs where an official ceremony took place with friends and family, but Maaneet smiled at each other praying for their togetherness.

Night came and the girls barged in Geet's room. "Hey Geet the guys have gone for a bachelors' party so why not have a sleepover here, what say", Pinky said . "Alright, whatever you guys say", Geet consented not having anything else to do. The girls played a truth and dare and other games but were bored after sometime. Annie came there after attending a call with a wicked smile playing on her lips. She winked at the others and then looked at Geet.

"Hey Geet, let's watch a live action movie, Annie said mischievously. "Which one", Geet looked up innocently. "This, Saying this Annie switched on the TV set only to find it airing the boys bachelors' party. "Haww, Annie we should not be spying", Geet chided. "Oh come on Geet won't you want to see what your future hubby is doing there, Annie shushed her concentrating on the screen. They saw a group of dancers dancing on screen. The boys all of them except Maan went up to the dancers and danced with them. Everything was going well until Geet saw one of the dancers dancing near Maan , this rubbed her on the wrong side and she furiously marched to the outhouse where the boys were having a blast. Geet pulled that dancer away from Maan and glared him,"Get away from my Maan". She now faced Maan and eyed him dangerously, "Don't you dare look at any other girl, understood...or else", She warned in a possessive tone. "But Geet...I didn't even..., Maan tried to complete but she glared at him and replied in very angry tone "but you didn't ask her to go away either", which made him quiet. She left the hall followed by Maan who tried to pacify his angry fiancee, and after a lot of cajoling she finally complied, but not without going down with her multiple conditions "Promise me you will love me multiple times. With her cute demands Maan couldn't control himself and pulled her into a passionate kiss. Both were overjoyed as they are taking everyday one step closer to getting bound together with the bond of marriage.

Written By-Pixelflower620

Edited by Soju. - 8 years ago