ABHIMAAN YAA SWABHIMAAN?? EPILOGUE Pg. 96****08/11/18 - Page 30

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CHAPTER 13(a)



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!

FIVE YEARS LATER

Maan has been searching for past five years for his love, his wife and HIS MISHTY but it has been of no use! He cannot forget and cannot forgive himself for being unable to save his wife. Had HE been closer he would have saved her from that monster Devendra Rathore but he was not and Geet to save her honour and dignity jumped into flooding Jamuna river. Although everyone says that Geet is no more but Maan knows that though his Mishty is not with him but she is definitely somewhere in this world! If she was not in this world, Maan's soul would have definitely known! Besides her body was still not found.

Maan still remembers the day as if it were yesterday. It was week after Vicky and Meera's wedding, Khurana family had gone to Ranawat Mansion to do some post wedding ceremonies. When elders were busy in the ceremonies, Maan saw Geet passing by carrying something for the ceremony. Maan could no longer bear Geet's indifference and seperation and hence had confronted Geet by holding her hand in his tight grip when she was passing by.



Maan said in a firm MSK voice,"Main jaanta hoon ki tum meri Geet ho aur tumhari yaadasht bhi waapis aa gayi hai!" (I know that you are my Geet and your memory has returned!)

"Mr. Khurana, aapko galatfahami hui hai. Hum GAYATRI SINGH RANAWAT HAIN, Vijaygarh ki bhaavi Rajkumari." (Mr. Khurana, you are under some misconception. I'm GAYATRI SINGH RANAWAT, soon to be the Princess of Vijaygarh.)



"Geet please don't test my patience. I've been trying to find you for past 6 1/2years and ask for forgiveness for my crime. Now that I have found you, I'll not let you go."



"Hum aapse phir keh rahe hain ki aapko galatfahami hui hai hum Gayatri Singh Ranawat hain." (I'm again informing you that you are under some misconception. I'm GAYATRI SINGH RANAWAT. )



Seeing Maan in deep thoughts and his grip on her hand loosening, Gayatri slowly wriggled out her hand from Maan's grasp and would have left, if Maan would not have pulled her back towards him and this time twisted her arm forcifully behind her back and started kissing her passionately.



"Suniye hummein jaane dijiye! Hummein dard ho raha hai" (Please let me go! You are hurting me!) Geet said struggling in Maan's muscular embrace.

"NAHI! Jab tak tum sabke saamne sach qabool nahi karogi ki tum MERI MISHTY ho, mai tumhei kaheen nahi jaane doonga." (NO! Until you don't accept that you are MY MISHTY, I won't leave you!) Squeezing Geet's hand even more tightly.



"Suniye, aapke jaise samaridh aur sampoorn ghar ke ladke ko aisi ashleel harqatein nahi karni chahiye." (Listen, you belong to a very respectful and affluent family. This kind of indecent and disgusting behaviour doesn't suit your image!) Geet tried explaining to Maan but he refuse to let her go and in their continous struggle,



the puja thaali fell down causing a loud din in the quiet hall.



Thereby loosening Maan's grip on Geet's right arm hearing the loud noise. Although Maan was still holding her arm but gently now. Seeing no way of making Maan understand, finally as a reflex, Geet's freed her right hand and moved it in a semi-circular arc connecting with Maan's left cheek.



With the loud noise of thaali falling, elders, Vicky, Meera, Avinash and Annie rushed towards the hall to witness Maan getting slapped by Geet.

By now Geet's temper had reached sky high and she was unable to calm herself. "Aap apne aapko samjhate kya hain? Ki aap jo bhi karen woh sahi hain kyunki aap ek purush hain? Kintu hum wohi sab karen toh woh sahi nahi kyunki hum ek naari hain. Aap battaiye ki humara qasoor kya thaa? Kya yeh qasoor thaa ki jisse hum prem karte the usse apna tann, mann aur aatma supurth kar diye? Yaa yeh qasoor thaa ki ek nirlaj (indecent) purush se aapne samaan aur swabhimaan ko bacchaya? Yaa yeh qasoor thaa ki ek balatkaari (r****t) ko jail bhejaa? Hum chahte to ussi samay aapko bhi jail bhijwaa dete kintu Khurana parivaar ke hum par bahut ehsaan the aur aap humare honewaale bacche ke pitah the, iss liye hum chup the." (What do you think of yourself? That just because you are a man you can do whatever you please? But if I do the same I'm wrong just because I'm a woman. Can you tell me what is my mistake? Is it my fault that the person whom I loved, I unconditionally handed over my heart, soul and body to him? Or was it my fault that I tried to save my honour and dignity from an indecent man? Or was it my fault that I sent a r****t to jail? If I wanted I would have got you arrested as well, but I held myself back, as I was under Khurana family's obligation as well as you were father of my unborn baby!)

"I was definite that you have got back your memory." Maan said in a victorious tone.



"But I had wished I had not. With my memory, the pain has also returned which YOU gave me and our child."



"Geet mujhe apni galati...mera matlab mere gunaah ke liye maaf kar do!" (Geet, Please forgive me for my mistake...I mean my crime!)

"Agar jo aapne humare saath kiya thaa agar humne bhi wohi sab aapke saath kiya hota, toh KYA AAP HUMMEI MAAF KARTE?" (If I had done with you what you have done with me, would YOU HAVE FORGIVEN ME?)

Seeing fight between husband and wife accelerating, Priya tried calming the situation by interrupting, "Geet beta, shaant ho jaao. Samjhdaari se kaam lo. Tum toh humesha se bahut shaant aur suljhi rahi ho, Meera se bhi zyaada samajhdaar. Aur yeh matt bhoolo beta, ki abb Maan beta Meera ke jeth hain aur Khurana parivaar, Meera ki sasuraal!" (Geet please calm down. Look at the bigger picture. You have always behaved in a mature, sensible and practical manner. You are even more sensible than Meera in family matters! Also you must not forget that Maan is Meera's brother-in-law and Khurana family are Meera's in-laws!)

"Priya, sirf Meera ke hi nahi, Khurana parivaar Geet ki bhi sasuraal hai! Geet Beta, gusse aur aakrosh se kuch haasil nahi hoga." (Priya, not only Meera's! Khurana family is also Geet's in-laws! Geet you will gain nothing by anger and attitude.) Savitri Devi also reasoned.

"Dadimaa, sabne hummein ek "moum ki gudiya" (Wax doll) samjhaa hai. Jaisa chaha waisa nachaya. Pehle humare Mama-sa aur chachaji ne hummein bhela-phuslakar pitaji ki jyedaad apne naam karaani chahi woh toh Kanahji ki kripa thee ki sahi samay par Chote papa aa gaye. Phir inhone (looking at Maan with anger and disgust) apne badtameez, durachaari aur balatkaari mitr ki jhooti izzat bachaane ke liye ek masoom ladki ka shoshan kiya, jisse "shaadi" ka naam de kar apne gunah ke bhoj ko kam karna chaha. Aur yeh kafi nahi thaa ki inke durachaari dost aur uski premika ne humare bacche..." (Dadimaa, everyone comes and treats me like a Wax doll. They want to mould me in whichever way they want. First my maternal and paternal uncle came and by their pseudo love wanted me to sign over my father's hard earned business and property to them. By God's grace Ram papa arrived in time and saved my father's business and property. Then he (looking at Maan with anger and disgust) in order to save his shameless, characterless and disgusting r****t friend's honour physically and mentally abused an innocent and naive girl. To make his crime less he is now referring to it as"marriage." As if this was not enough his shamless friend and his girl friend made our unborn child...)

Meera came near Geet and started rubbing her back saying, "Bitto, beith jaao, baaki baat baad mein karenge."(Bitto, sit down we will talk later.)



Meera tried to deviate the topic as it was giving Geet intense stress. But Geet was on warpath today, she said, "Didi, yeh sach jo pichle chhe saal se chupa hai usse bahaar aane dijiye." (Didi, let the truth which is hidden for past 6 years finally come out.)

"Nahi bitto tumhari sehat se zaruri kuch bhi nahi!" (No Bitto, nothing is more important than your health!)

"Nahi Didi, kaash uske bajaaye mai chali jaati." (No didi, I wish I had gone instead of him.)

"Bitto, tum..." (Bitto, you...)

"Meera, aisi kya baath hai jo tum dono mujhse chupa rahi ho?" (Meera, what is it that you both are hiding from me?) Maan asked with curiosity and attitude.

"Mere khayal se abb hum sab khaana khaane chalte hain." (I think we all should have lunch now.) Ram butt in and guided Khuranas for lunch. Khuranas and Kapoors sat for lunch except Geet and Meera. Priya just lightly brushed off saying that as Geet's arm was hurting, Meera has gone with Geet to help her change her clothes as puja things had fallen on her clothes.

After lunch(Meera and Geet had lunch together in Geet's room), when everyone was having their respective coffees and teas, Savitri Devi broached the topic hesistantly, "Ram aur Priya, abb toh Meera aur Vicky ki shaadi ho gayi hai aur Geet ki yaadasht bhi waapis aa gayee hai, toh kyun naa Maan aur Geet ki shaadi bhi abb kar dein?" (Ram and Priya, now that Meera and Vicky are married. As well as Geet's memory has returned, let's get Maan and Geet married.)

"Dadimaa, hummein maaf kariye, HUM ISS SHAADI KE LIYE TYAAR NAHI HAIN!" (Dadimaa, please forgive me, I'm not agreeable for this marriage!)

"Kyun beta?" (Why my child?)

"Enough Geet. I have waited for your acceptance of our marriage for so long but no longer!" Maan said with rising temper.



Geet gave intense angry glares towards Maan,"Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, I'm no longer helpless Geet whom you can walk all over! I'm Miss. Gayatri Singh Ranawat who may become Princess of Vijaygarh some day. Currently I'm MD Ranawat Industries and acting CEO of Ranawat Industries. Hence, I don't need to bow down before you so that you can trample and walk over my love, my feelings and my respect!"



"Geet, I didn't mean that. I'm so..."

"Geet beta, aap bhool rahi hain ki aap Maan ki byahata patni hain." (Geet you are forgetting that you are Maan's religiously wedded wife.)

"Aur kanooni taur se bhi Geet beta tum Maan ki patni ho!" (Also you are Maan's legally wedded wife.) Garima added.

"Kanooni taur se...?" (Legally wedded...?)

"Maan aur tumhare marriage certificate par signatures hain." (Yes there are your and Maan's signatures on the marriage certificate.) Garima explained.

Geet looked at Maan's direction with dagger in her eyes. Calming down she spoke to Savitri Devi and Garima,"Dadimaa aur Aunty, dono shaadiyon ka naa toh koi praman hai naa koi gawah. Chhe saal pehle ki shaadi mein aap mein se koi nahi thaa. Humara "kanyadaan" bhi kisne kiya hummein nahi gyaat. Kewal ek kagaz ke tukde ke aadhar par usse shaadi nahi maan sakte! Jahaan tak kanooni shaadi ka sawaal hai, hum khudh bhi Marriage Registrar ke samaksh nahi the aur jisne bhi gawahon ke sthaan par hastakshar kiye honge woh toh paise ke khatir kar sakte hain!" (Dadimaa and Aunty, there are no proofs and witnesses of both the marriages! The marriage which happen 6 years back none of you were even present. Even I don't remember who did my "kanyadaan" (giving bride away!). A piece of paper in form of photograph is no proof! As far as legal marriage is concern, even I was not present in front of the Marriage Registrar. Whoever were the witnesses signing could have done so for the sake of money.) Stunning Garima and everyone in the room at the accuracy of Geet's assumption.

Savitri Devi tried to calm the situation and said, "Geet beta, Maan ki chhe saal pehle ki galati...mera matlab gunah ke liye kya aap usse maaf nahi kar sakteen? Woh apne gunah ke liye bahut sharminda hai. Woh aap se pyaar karte hain aur aapko apni vidhivaat patni banna naa chahta hai." (Geet, the mistake...I mean the crime Maan did six years back, can't your forgive him and move ahead? He is extremely embarassed by his behaviour. He loves you and wants to make you his socially and legally wedded wife in front of all.)

"Dadimaa aap swayam ek stree ho kar hummein hi samjha rahi hain. Aap bhi baaki sab ki tehara hain, ki dusare ka baccha gunah kare toh usse sazaa mile kintu khud ka baccha gunah kare toh usse maafi! Kewal humare ek prashan kaa uttar dijiye, "Yaadi jo kuch inhone humare saat kiya hai jaise hummein apne jhoote pyaar mein phasana, apni vasana poorthi ke liye humse vivaah karna itiyaadi, agar koi aapki Annie ke saath yehi karta to kya YEH, aap yaa Khurana parivaar kaa koi bhi sadasya usse kshama karta?" NAHI KABHI NAHI!"(Dadimaa you are a woman yourself and still you are asking me to understand. You also are of the same thought like rest of the world, if its not your family member than he should be punished but if belongs to your family, then not! Just answer my one question, "If what Maan has done with me i.e. By charade wooed me, then for fulfilling his lust got married to me etc. if same someone would have been done with your Annie, would HE, you or anyone from Khurana family have forgiven him?" NO NEVER!) Making whole Khurana speechless!

"Geet beta agar tumhari yaadasht pehle hi aa gayi thee toh hummei pehle kyun nahi battaya?" (Geet if your memory returned sometime back, why didn't you tell us all before?) Rishabh enquired.

"Battane se laabh Uncle? Kya kuch badalta? Jaise abb bhi kuch nahi badelgaa! Humari yaadasht toh Meera Didi aur Vicky Bhaiya ki sagaai ke din hi aa gayi thee jab humne Dev aur Naintara ko Khuranas ke function mein zabardasti aate dekha thaa. Hum kewal Meera didi, Chote Papa aur Choti Maa ki khushi aur samaan ke kaaran chup the. Maa aur Pitaji ke jaane ke baad, Chote Papa, Choti Maa, Meera Didi aur Avinash ne hummei sambhala aur apne pairon par khada hona sikhaya. Kapoor parivaar ne hummein kabhi bhi ek anaath, bin byaahi maa yaa ek bhoj nahi samjha. Kintu abb aap sab ko sach patta chal hi gaya hai toh accha hai." (What would have been the use? Nothing would have changed. Just like now nothing will change. My memory had returned the day of Meera and Vicky's engagement, when I saw Dev and Naintara gate crashing. I just kept quite for Meera didi, Ram Papa and Priya Maa's respect and happiness. After the death of my parents', Ram Papa, Priya Maa, Meera didi and Avinash looked after me, cared for me and made me independant and self reliant. Kapoor family has never even once made me feel as if I was an orphan, unwed mother or an encumberance on them. Anyway, now that you all know the truth its good!)

Garima suddenly asked, "Geet tumhare ajaname bacche ko kisne maara?" (Geet who killed your unborn baby?)



"BACCHA ? MERA BACCHA?" (BABY? MY BABY!) There was sound of curios falling from coffee table. Maan just saw in time Geet was about to hit the floor. Maan swooped Geet up in his arms.



"Veerji, please make Geet lie down and Papa call doctor asap." Meera was shouting orders rubbing Geet's hands.

"Maan Bhai aap Bitto ke paas rahiye main Dr. Budhiraja ko lata hoon." (Maan, you be with Bitto, I bring Dr. Budhiraja.) Avinash said running to the door.

"Jab Geet jaage toh please aap sab bacche ke baare mein usse kuch matt poochiyega. Uske baare mein mai aapko battaongi." (When Geet gains consciousness, please don't ask her about her baby, I'll tell you the truth.)


"Maan, Maan, MAAAN! Choudhary sahaab aaye hain!" (Maan, Maan, MAAAN! Mr. Choudhary has come!) Garima's voice broke Maan's flashback and brought him back into the present.



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CHAPTER 13(b)



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!

It was Sunday morning, Police Commissioner Rajdeep Choudhary came as he was personally known to Khuranas and wanted to give them the shocking news as a friend and not as Police Commissioner. Savitri Devi, Rishabh, Ram, Garima and Priya soon joined in and pleasantries were exchanged. Meera and Vicky had gone to invite Khurana's family priest to do a "Havan" (prayer) for Geet where ever she is at present. As Commissioner Choudhary was not in uniform, Maan did "namaste" to him. Once everyone had settled Commissioner Choudhary said in a grim voice, "I regret to say that today I'm bearer of unpleasant news but I would like to tell you all this personally rather than professionally. As its been five years since Gayatri has disappeared. There have been no witnesses or proofs stating that she is well and alive, hence Police will be closing this case soon presuming Gayatri to be dead."

"Magar, Rajdeep aise kaise ho sakta hai? Naa toh Geet ki body mili hai aur naa hi usse gayab huye saath saal guzarein hain?" (But Rajdeep how is it possible? Geet's body has not been discovered and seven years have not passed as well?)



"Mai manta hoon Rishabh magar Gayatri, Maan ke saath-saath policewalon ke saamne nadi mein khudi thee, jisse jhutlaya nahi jaa sakta." (I agree Rishabh but along with Maan number of policemen also saw Gayatri jumping in the river.)

"Meri Mishty zinda hai magar mujhse gussa hai iss liye kaheen chupi hai." (My Mishty is definitely alive but is angry with me and therefore is hiding.)

"Maan beta, tum sach ko apnao. Geet abb iss duniya mein nahin kyunki..." (Maan its high time you accept the truth. Geet is not in this world because...)

"KYUNKI KYA? Geet is duniya mai hai aur iska sabse badha saboot yeh hai ki yeh MAAN SINGH KHURANA ISS DUNIYA MAI HAI!" (BECAUSE WHAT? Geet is definitely in this world because this MAAN SINGH KHURANA IS IN THIS WORLD!)

"MAAN...!" Garima screamed.

"Nahi Maa, Geet aur mai kitna bhi ek dusare se jhagde aur gussa hone magar hum dono do jism ek jaan hain. Jab jab mujhe kuch taqleef hui hai jaise bukhar, accident yaa aur kuch pareshaani Geet ko bhi taqleef hui hai. Jab Geet ne humare bacche ko khoya thaa tab aap yaad kariye ki mera kitna bura accident hua thaa Delhi se Manali jaate huye. Ek tehara se dekha jaaye toh humare bacche ne apne Papa ko bacchane ke liye apni jaan de di." (No Maa, Geet and I may have fights and be angry at each other but we two bodies and one soul. Whenever I have been in trouble i.e. having fever, accident or any problem, even Geet has suffered from a problem same time. When Geet lost our baby, if you recollect it was the same time that I met with a serious accident on the way from Delhi to Manali. If you see in a way our baby saved his Papa's life by giving up his own life!)

"Maan beta, yeh tum kaise keh sakte ho?" (Maan how can you say this?)

"Veerji bilkul sahi keh rahe hain Dadimaa." (Dadimaa, Veerji is perfectly right.)



Then Meera started narrating problems and difficulties which Geet had and Garima & Vicky told corresponding dates when Maan also had problems and difficulties.

"Accha chachiji abb mai chalta hoon. Kal ACP Randhawa kuch formalities karne aayenge." (Ok now I shall leave. Tomorrow ACP Randhawa will come to complete the formalities.) Police Commissioner Rajdeep Choudhary said and left.

Remaining day and night was very stressful for both Khurana and Kapoor family. Ram and Priya had come to attend "Havan" for happiness and well being of their Bitto from US but now will attend "havan" for peace of Geet's departed soul!

Maan had locked himself in his room surrounded by Geet's things that he had treasured for past 5 years. He was listening again and again to the recording of her song which she had sung during University Youth festival..
"Hum tere pyaar mein sara aalam kho beithe..."
(Movie: Dil Ek Mandir)


The more he heard the words of her song, more he was getting sure that his Mishty cannot have left this world. Also that Geet could not have forgotten him!

Next day early morning, ACP Kushal Randhawa came carrying few packets. He took out each and every thing one at a time and the family members identified it as Gayatri / Geet. Hence then ACP Randhawa said, "On the basis of family member's identification of clues as well as its been five years since Mrs. Gayatri Maan Singh Khurana has disappeared. Since there have been no witnesses or proofs stating that she is well and alive, hence Police will be forced to close this case presuming Mrs. Gayatri Maan Singh Khurana to be dead."

"But where is her "Mangalsutra" and "Gold kara" (Thick bangle)?" Maan questioned in his MSK voice.

"Mangalsutra" and"Gold kara"...?

"Yes she never took them out from her neck or hand respectively."

"We did not find any of these items but we found this..." ACP Randhawa said handing over two white envelops to Rishabh.

"Then, MY GEET IS VERY MUCH ALIVE!"

Looking at Rishabh, ACP Randhawa said, "Mr. Khurana, if you want we can now prosecute Mr. Devendra and Mrs. Naintara Rathore for "MURDER" instead "attempt to murder"?

"MERI GEET ZINDA HAI, SUNNA AAP SABNE! MERI MISHTY ZINDA...A...HA...I!" (My Geet is alive. Do you all understand? My Misty is a...l...i...v...e!) Vicky just saw in time Maan swaying holding his head and ran towards him. Both Vicky and a constable supported Maan and made him lie on the sofa.



After sometime Maan gained his consciousness and found doctor examining him. Doctor told Rishabh, "Mr. Khurana, it seems your son is stressed about something and it looks like that he has not had his maintainence dose of his blood pressure medicine for few days. Hence, I'm increasing his doseage for today and tomorrow to stabilise his blood pressure."

Vicky went near Maan when Rishabh went to bid doctor bye. "Bhai, yeh aap ke liye hai." (Bhai, this is for you.)



Vicky handed Maan the envelope and left. Maan opened the letter seeing Geet's writing on the envelope.

"Mere priye Maan,
Hum aasha karthe hain hi jab aapko yeh patr mile aap sukushal aur swasthiye poorvak hone!

Hum aapse kshama prarthi hain ki humare iss patr se aapko thees lagegi, kintu humare paas koi aur vikalp nahi thaa. Kyunki humare liye aapki jaan athwa suraksha se zaruri kuch bhi nahi hai. Aap soch bhi nahi sakte ki humare liye yeh nirnaye lena kitna kathin thaa. Maan, aap apni ek galati hi sazaa apne aapko jeevan bhar matt dijiye! Humne toh aapko uss din hi kshama kar diya thaa jiss din hummein patta chala ki aapki pyaar ki nishaani humari kok mein pal rahi hai. Kintu hum apni naadaani mein uss nishaani ko sambhal nahi paaye. Agar aapne gunah kiya hai toh humne bhi koi kam gunah nahi kiya! Maan, aap ek sahaasi (brave), imaandaar (honest), khare (sincere), purusharthi (hard working), rakshatmak (protective), parvah karnewale (caring), samvedhansheel (compassionate), suljhe (mature) athwa swam nirmit (self made) vykati hain. Aaye din ladkiyaan aapke rang - roop par marti hain!

Jo bhi ladki aapki ki 'jeevan sangini' banegi woh atyadhik bhaagshaali hogi. Kintu hum woh bhaagshaali ladki nahi hain. Hum toh Kanhaji ka har din shaath-shaath pranam karte hain aapko humare jeevan mein laane ke liye. Kintu humare aapke ek saath rehne se aapke jeevan par aur suraksha par vipathi aaye yeh Geet apne jeete-jee nahi hone nahi degi!



Adhiktar sapnon aur haqeeqt mein bahut antar hota hai. Hum toh aapko 7 saal pehle hi dekhte hi prem karne lage



kintu aap humare bholepan, sadagi aur bachpane ke prati samvedansheel the. Hum jaante hain ki jo kuch bhi 6 1/2 saal pehle hua thaa uske liye hum dono hi qasoorwar the. Aaj kal ke khule samaaj mein ek bin byaahi ladki ka ek ladke saath ek hi chhat ke neeche rehna ashisht nahi samjha jaata hai. Magar jab yeh Geet apne Maan hi banne toh woh poorn roop se yaani apne mann, atma aur tann se Maan ki bane. Iss liye humne aapse vivaah karne ki sharth rakhi thee. Hum jaante the ki uss vivaah ko naa toh samaaj aur naa kanoon sweekarithi dega, aur naa hi aap usse apnayenge. Kintu Geet ki aatma usse apnayegi aur Geet ke liye woh hi pariyapt thaa.

Humara dil humare iss nirnaye ka virodh kar raha hai kintu humara dimaag iss nirnaye ka samarthan kar raha hai. Yadapi humare aapke aur apne parivaar ke jeevan se alag hone se aap aur humara parivaar surakshit rahega toh yeh ek chota mulaiye hai. Hummei gyaat hai aap bahut hi asoolwaale aur immandaar vykati hain aur punar vivah nahi karenge. Iss kaaran vash hum talaaq ke kagazon by hastakshar kar rahe hain. Aap bhi hastakshar kar lijiye aur iss zabardasti ki shaadi se mukti paayiye.

Kintu ek mitr ke roop mein hum aapse ek vinamr vinti karte hain. "Kriypa humare bacche ko nyaya (justice) dila dijiye. Aur Devendra aur Naintara Rathore ko humare bacche ke khoon ke liye jail bhijwa dijiye. "Hum jaante hain ki aap uss bacche ko apna nahi maante magar insaniyat ke naate usse kriypa nyaya (justice) dilayiye.

GEET HUMESHA SE AAPKI THEE, HAI AUR RAHEGI! Kyunki Geet ka "wajood"(existence) uske Maan se hai. Jab tak Maan surakshit, swasthiye aur sakushal hai, Geet bhi surakshit, swasthiye aur sakushal hogi. Hum sirf aur sirf MAAN KI GEET hain!



I LOVE YOU MY DARLING, MAAN!

Hum aasha karte hain ki aapko bina bataye jaane ke liye aap hummei maaf kar denge!

Sirf aapki,
Mishty"

(My Darling Maan,
I hope and pray that this letter finds you in best of health and happiness!
I apologise for my letter causing you pain, but I have no choice as nothing is more importrant for me than your safety and well being! You will not be able to comprehend how tough it has been for me to take this decision. Maan don't let one mistake done by you ruin your whole life. I had forgiven you the day I realized that you have given me the greatest gift in my life and that is of making me a mother. But due my immaturity and gullibility I couldn't protect your beautiful and innocent gift. If you have committed a crime then I have committed a bigger crime. Maan, you are a very brave, mature, protective, caring, compassionate, hard working, honest, sincere and a self made man. It would be an honour for any girl to have you as a life partner. Girls fight among themselves to make you their life partner just seeing your looks and eight pack abs. I cannot thank my Kanahji enough for bringing you in my life. But unfortunately I'm not that lucky to walk alongside you for rest of my life! As our being together may cause you to loose your life and as long as Geet is alive, nothing can happen to her Maan.

Often dreams and reality are poles apart, my love!
I fell in love with you since the day I first saw you but I knew you only felt compassion for me seeing my innocence, naivity and immaturity.. I know what happened between us 6 1/2 years back was as much my fault as yours! In now days open society it is not abhorent for a man and girl to stay in a "live-in' relationship. But when this Geet became her Maan's she wanted to be by heart, soul and body, hence I put the condition of our marriage. I knew that this marriage neither the society nor law will accept. I also knew that you may not accept it but my conscience accepted it which was fine by me!

Although my heart rebels this action but my brain supports it. If by my seperating from you and my family, you all can remain safe its a small price to pay. I know you are a very truthful and consciencious man and will not re-marry. Hence, I have signed the divorce papers, you also sign them so that you are free to marry a girl if your choice.

As a friend I have a request from you, "Can you please send Devendra and Naintara Rathore jail for murder of our baby?" If you don't consider yourself as baby's father, please do it for humanity's sake.

GEET WAS, IS AND WILL ALWAYS REMAIN MAAN'S! Because for Geet her "wajood"(existence) is only as long as her Maan is present. As long Maan is healthy, happy and stress free so will Geet be. As I'm only and only MAAN KI GEET! I LOVE YOU MY DARLING, MAAN!

I hope you will not hold this act against me!

Yours forever,
Mishty)




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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely updates
Thanku for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
very emotional n sensetional update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful, emotional updates, hope geet came back to maan, then dev and naintar got hardest punishment ever
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice updates. Plz continue soon.

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm n double updates. Very emotional updates. Dont how much pain is written in destiny of maaneet that did not get peace even for a single moment. I agree with geet when she questioned khuranas that if whatever maan did with geet was done to annie by someone will they able to forgive the person as they are asking forgiveness for maan. Its the truth of life that we all are judgemental n partial for others.
maan got geet letter n divorce paper means she is alive n somewhere near to him.
Waiting for next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Maan is unable to believe that Geet is dead
Hope she come back to him
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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What a twist
Liked it
Continue soon...
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Sad parts...
I hope maaneet meet soon

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