O Saathi Re rewritten COMPLETED - Page 60

Ch 15
Maan returned home calling Geet
Geet watching hidden
Suddenly
Gust of wind
And
Geet is out to save the flame
Instantly Maan is beside her

He is mesmerized by her beauty
But wouldn't give in

But
Geet is no less
Use bhooka sher bana kar hi dam liya
Aur
Barson baad
Pyar ki baarish
Par
Achanak
I love you
Stopped all
Even you
Waiting for the next pm
Thanks
Please do send me ch 16 pm link

Ch 16
Both are on the earth
Dharatal pe
Maan thinking of the past
When his dadima blamed him for the death of his parents
Reason a girl
To kya geet hi wo ladki hai
Geet
Jaise kisi ne saare sapno pe hi pani fer diya
In the rain
Maan turns
Saw Geet watching him from the window
And realised he still wants her
And geet is there in a second
Confession
Kya hoga aage
Waiting

Painful, to sum it up in one word.

Thanks for pm n pw. Part 16 is full of ups n downs of different emotions. While first half gave hope for a sweet future but second half broke that hope. I dont know but feel very sad for maan as he was accussed to be the reason of his parents death. This is most unjustfull thing that can be said to a child. How much broken he would have filled no one can imagine it. Geet is only want to get her love back but what she will do when she will be too blaimed with maan for past mishappenings. For dadi i have no words as such characters are rare type but mean to be loathed on their existences.

Ooh dadima misguided him... I think to control him she tried the plan of guilt... That he will not go against her. ... Maan will reject geet and will go on a guilt trip again.. will thoght geet is the reason for his parents death...

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Originally posted by: mayyo

Painful, to sum it up in one word.

Really, it's so painful to see them both this way.

Wo could be thought confessing her love to him would bring a whole new round of torture for him. And the torture does not end with her one word confession. It'll only end when she knows what he's been told about the woman in his life and then he finds out who the real culprit is. And I don't see it as an easy path for either of these two.

The guilt of being responsible for something as grace as death is enough to make a person wallow forever, and on top of that, the guilt of killing one's parents is indescribable, to say the least. My heart goes out to what Maan feels after being told the made up story. How much time has he burnt in the guilt of being responsible for the demise of his parents? I'm sure it feels like an eternity for him.

Do people like this Savitri devi really exist? I have come to loathe the woman for what she's done to her own grandson. Even if he isn't her blood, there's enough humanity in a person to get attached to someone born and brought up right in front of your eyes. But she is one woman who'll have to pay for everything. The question is, how much more damage will be done before Maan and Geet reach the reason for all the chaos in their lives?

It's heartbreaking to see Geet hurt so much. I do hope she bounces back and finds out what the reason is behind Maan's reaction to her confession.

Gripping update, Avi! Thanks so much for the PM.

P.S: Is the end near? Just asking because I saw the word epilogue in your blog.

no it is not the end yet
there are 10 more parts and somehow i want to write more on this 😃

Dadima had played her card making Maan hate himself and his love.Maan knowing Geet to be his love will he hate her .Geet will let him know about their love or dadi win again .
Biting my nails for next update