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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

#431

Chap-10

Nice update..

Maan ego crumbled seeing Dev..

He is fuming and blamed geet for telling lies..

Chap-11

Police taunted Tara to that extent to better

To think her die..

Maan came as rescue..

Thank u for pm..

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karishmajain

@karishmajain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#432

awesome update
maan asking geet kya pehle kabhi mile he geet ran away from there
dev told about maan old injury uski wajah se parsial memory loss hua he
geet ne than liya he sachai jaan ke rahegi
waiting for next

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arnavmaan

@arnavmaan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#433

Very nice update... At least progress in the Geets understanding of Maan's behavior

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tessyrani

@tessyrani

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#434

Maan has still don't have any recollections of his past with Geet. Let us how Geets effort will shape up the future,

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ambeern

@ambeern

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#435

Loved both the chapters

Simply amazing update

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#436

hi thanks 4 da pm! Chap 12 - terrific update, excellently written! Maan assures Geet! they hug! Geet cries! Maan thinks she feels so right on his arms! Geet's thoughst well portrayed! Maan says something n Geet pulls away! Maan questions Geet! he is confused n Geet upset! Maan asks if they met b4! Geet sad he doesn't remember! she leaves! Dev n Geet talk! Dev tells Geet abt Maan's previous injury n partial memory loss! Geet shocked! Geet resolves 2 find out wt happened 2 Maan! she will call Nakul! update soon👏

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#437

Chapter 12

Very well written update.. Aww love their hug Maan is feeling confused about his feelings 😳
And his that question whether they met before or not.. made her restless,,
I don't know why but in your stories I really love Dev Tara.. dev cleared her doubt about Maan forgetting her 😃
Thank goodness.. now waiting for Maaneetilicious update 😉

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#438

Apologies for not commenting on time again... Been busy with guests and weddings...

Chapter 10:

Dev and Tara's part was undoubtedly painful. It was so hard to read through the agony of both. I feel so bad for Dev. He is so helpless at the moment. But the last line gave me hope and i am counting on Tara D'souza becoming a survivor. A strong one at that.

Maan surely has an uphill journey now onwards. 😆 Sure enough, Feet is just an ordinary girl for Maan who can't help notice every ordinary little detail about her. I'd like to see how ordinary she is for him in a little more while. 😆

Honestly, I've never heard or PA as physician assistant. Is that a real term?

Loved Maan's reaction on seeing Geet and her befitting reply to his accusation.

And Tara's one sentence had my heart breaking again. "I want to go home." Now, I want to see her standing tall against her rapists and get justice for herself. The road is bumpy but the reward will be soothing for her soul.

Thanks for updating. And sorry again.

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#439

Chapter 11:

And the pain is back again... but I'm glad Geet was around this time to give Tara the shoulder she needed the most.

Although Maan being a man of actions and not words is a good thing but there is always a point where words are more soothing, more healing that actions are. I hope he knows the trick or he learns it soon enough.

Maan is going to ask Geet to go to the camp, right? In place of the doctor who couldn't make it.. I don't know if having Geet out of Tara's range would be a good idea or not.

It was absolutely disgusting, the way the policemen questioned Tara and Dev in the name of filing a report. It is really pitiful of our society to have such menaces amongst us. Instead of living up to the promise of support and help, the policemen take the dirty path down. Totally unacceptable! But can we really blame the policemen here? It is the thinking of our society where we tend to blame the victim for the crime committed with her. Or, like they've done with Dev, they drag the one who helps, into a swamp of problems. Nobody even cares to think what the victim must already be going through in her mind, what her feelings might be, how broken she could be. It is the sad reality of our life.

A question. Earlier Tara says she wants to go home. Which home exactly is that? The hostel or her uncle's place?

Maan being there in time was a blessing, indeed. I couldn't possibly waver my mind off the girl who committed suicide because the world couldn't treat her well...

And Maan's own memories swirl back. Did Maan forget these moments too? Of Kiran and Raj when they were washed away by the stream?

I am glad there was at least on honest officer, the commissioner, to treat his subordinates a good lesson. We need more of them in the world.

A huge tragedy had been averted indeed. Can't really question Geet's nervousness or fear, nor Maan's blankness. But the outcome of it was beautiful, without a doubt. It's true that when one feels they've lost someone, or when someone comes very close to the brink of losing someone, their emotions can not be reined in. They flow freely then, and you realise what you really feel... Maan's heart can sense what Geet is feeling and his heart is also feeling the same but the kind refuses yet. Surely, with time, he'll come to know why his heart is drawn towards Geet so strongly.

And that dialogue is one of my favourites too. ❤️

Avi, without any exaggeration, this update was one of the most wonderfully depicted ones. It felt like I was in the story instead of reading it. I could feel all the emotions in this chapter, rage, helplessness, fear, loss...everything. Hats off to you for penning this one down! 👏

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#440

Thanks for pm n pw. Beautiful part. Most hard thing to do in this world is to understand emotions n to control them. They dont have mind. They work on their own n u cant controlled them. Feeling stranger like breathing is confusing emotion while forgotten by ur love is hurtfull emotion n over all knowing everything is going in wrong way n u cant stop that is feel of helpless emotion. Emotion is the key to this part. How these emotions going to rules, lets see. Waiting for next.

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