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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update...
Loved the way Geet retaliate to daadi...
Past is beautifully incorporated 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

Chapter 6:

First impressions of each other. There's a lot that can be told about them in just this brief a scene. Geet, considering her thought processes, doesn't seem to be one that would shy away. Instead, she's probably the kind who'd let out a whistle or hoot if she saw a couple being romantic. Maan, on the other hand, as always, the handsome young man, the one who can instantly get someone to like him with all the cheerfulness of his nature.

I wonder what a wonderful love story these two must have had with them being this way. It's sad they parted ways but as they say, absence makes the heart grow fonder. And I can bet their love will come out to be strong enough to surpass all hurdles together.

The present was indeed a brutal awakening from the fairytale past. It hurt to realise Maan has really forgotten Geet and their love. I feel sad for Geet because she was so sure earlier that he had recognised her. Not a pleasant time for her, but surely one she can live through...



I suppose it is optimistic exuberance of youth that allows someone to fall in love at first sight like they did.

They are two beautiful people and attraction often gets confused with love.

She waits to hear what he speaks before falling for him as I have shown later.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

Chapter 7:

There was no Nandini na? She's talking about herself, isn't she?

I felt absolutely awful for Tara. One can't even realise what the victim of such kind of an abuse goes through. And the lustful b****rds roam around freely, without any sense of guilt for the depth of damage they've done to not only one, but multiple lives connected with the one victim. I really really hope Tara can come of out this trauma, although I can guess she can never be healed completely now. The damage is done forever...

Any way, this must have been the first time I swore like this so openly. That shows how strongly I feel for issues like rape and sexual abuse. Wish there was a way to eliminate these right from the roots.

Coming to Maan and Geet. I have always known the fact that even though the mind forgets, the heart cannot. And so is the case with Maan. His possessiveness over Geet with Dev, and his wish to not let her disappear from his sight, this is proof enough that his heart still loves Geet. And it won't be long before the love breaks though the barrier the brain has created.



O but there is a Nandini in the story. Her never been shown but being in Geet's life has molded Geet's thought processes a lot.

Nandini in a way is shown as an average society woman; she is the verbiage of society.

Tell me later in the story if her character was effective or not 😃

You know even with the first post, you are the first person to notice this character 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

Chapter 8:

I love the way Geet gives it back to Savitri devi. I don't feel like calling her Daadima anymore because she doesn't fit it the "Daadima" criteria we have for Maan and Geet. Lol.

I gasped when I discovered the way Maan's parents died. Was that where Maan was headed to when Geet was breaking up with him? And was that where Maan got injured too and lost his memories. That would make sense... Anyway, I want Raj and Kiran alive in the next one, okay? Can't bear any more of the tragedies they've faced.

Maan is one smart person. He doesn't need to reveal his true motive to get what he wants done. It sure is going to be fun seeing how this tough nut is cracked by Geet. But I like the arrangement he's made. Only when they both will be in close proximity for some time, will Maan be able to recall some, if not all, memories of them.

Geet's flashback of the past felt a bit out of place at first. Probably because I thought they were in a tent again instead of the first time. My bad, I know. But honestly, I'm not a big "love-at-first-sight" or "love-in-first-meeting" supporter, even though I do believe that they happen in the real world.

I have no comments about Maan's flashback yet...

PS: I just noticed you have given no titles this time. Is it easier this way, or with titles? I know, a weird question it is.😆

Thanks for sending the PMs even when I couldn't give feedback. I promise not to disappear for long periods.



Maan was not headed to that emergency then.
Raj and Kiran? sochna padega.
I am not a family story person somehow, itna imagination nahi hai mujh mein.
Maan's arrangement? 😆
O but Avi will not let him have his fun will she 😆
Thanks for taking the time to get what I am trying to do.
You have no idea how much it means to me 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for your comments and likes everyone 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
interesting update
daadoma endeavour to stop maan for not going to manali with geet and maan refused daadima and went with geet to manali
thanks for pm
waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Ch-8
Very nice update.
Apt reply from Geet to Dadimaa. The more you bow down the more people will oppress you.
Maan not only wants to know why Geet is telling her self as fianc of Maan since he doesn't remember Geet, but there's something in Geet which is pulling him towards Geet that's why he wants to be with her.
About dream...what to say...off course it is very wrong place to stop.
Waiting for next...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Something is missing here by her i guess the servant was telling about accident i think that is the reason for his amnesia yet to see how the story turn
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm n pw. Nice update. So maan finalise deal with geet in favour to help her patient tara. Love the way geet replied dadi not insulting nor caring about the stuff. Strange thing is maan behaviour as he dont want to let her go away but flung away her hand on reaching out of sight of dadi maa. Not only geet but maan also start swimming in past memories. Lets see where this will lead them. Waiting for next.
One thing i want to say if u stopped updating the story hmara kya hoga????????????
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear Mann goes with geet to help her Daddimaa try's to stop Mann and told geet that whatever she do she will not accept her as khurrana bahu

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