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nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

thank you girls for supporting and response😊😊😊

Edited by nehaa9 - 8 years ago

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sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

maan left geet fr two year's and now claims he loved hr

but geet have nothing fr him she's only loves hr son

maan shocked to seenew geet whom not giving him

importance y he left geey fr two years

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Sindhu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Great update and prologue. Niw there will be a past and future. Waiting. Can u please pm me? One doubt... even this is only a story and the writer has all liberty...but if geet and Maan are children of brothers can they marry? Is it possible in our Indian setup. Usually kids of brothers and sisters can marry.

Don't feel bad. It's your liberty. Just said that is all

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Congrats for your new story...

Interesting concept...

Continue soon...

Maaneet already married n have a son ... But we're separated for 2 yrs .. n now maan is back n geet is not ready to accept him back in their life ...

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

NOTE:

before next part i want to clear something

yeah there is a less % of cross cousins marriage & banned between cross cousins marriage due to medical point of view and genetic disorder but happens now a days also

but its just a fiction dear

but if you girls don't like that i didn't mind to change little bit of story because we all written stories for all of us for our enjoyment and only for us.so i want all of you to enjoy and if you girls don't have any objection so i continue do give me your suggestions i do respect.

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pixelflower620

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Honestly speaking buddy I don't think you should change your story ...

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Kalpana

@maaneetfavo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Hey first iam also think about maaneet relation ship but it is ff only.so I am not think about it .u well written dear continue soon 😊

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Priya21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

dear if you can change

then be fine

ydi nhi kr sakti

toh bhi OK hai

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

PART 2

Geet bht badal gyi hy maan bhai! wo ab phele jaisi nhi rhi wo jo kisi ko naraz krna nhi janti thi jo khud kisi sy naraz ni hoti thi aj khud apney ap sy aur ap sy bht naraz hy. tears gathers in annie's eyes

magr maan bhai ma ap dono sy bht pyar krti hn aur chati hn ap dono hamesha sath raho kabhi alag na ho

tumhara dream kbhi ni totey ga hum hamesha sath rahin gy ma janta hn geet mjh sy bht naraz hy pr ma usey mana ln ga he put his palm on annie's head and patted

sach kh rhy hain na ap? ap geet bhabi ko mana lein gy na? she get excited

hoon!

magr wo prem bhai...?suddenly prem's fear appear

prem...prem ko kya hoa?

mom ne ap ko bataya ni?

ni kya hoa hy?

wo prem bhai ap par bht ghussa hain,ap geet sy shadi k do din bad jo kisi ko bataye bina chaley gye they iss baat pr prem bhai poray ghar ma toofan lay aye they bht ghussa kr rhy thy ghr ma wo to un ko chotey papa ne rok lia warna pata ni kya krtey magr unhoney papa aur chotey papa sy ek baat aur khe di thi she stopped in between dont want to say further

kya baat kh di?maan asked hurriedly

yeh hi k ab ma jo chahun ga wo hi ho ga,geet wo hi karey gi jo ma kahun ga.

what...kya matlab kya karey ga wo?

wo...wo kh rhy thy k maan ko geet ko divorce deni hogi.she slowly slowly said

dimagh to kharab ni ho gya us ka ye baat sochi bhi kaisy us ny? maan roared in so much anger that annie shivered in fear

geet ne kuch ni kaha

nhi wo bhi wohi karey gi jo prem bhai kahein gy

apney bhai ki tarah wo bhi pagal ho gyi hy,ma bhi dekhta hn geet ko mjh sy kon alag krta hy his eyes shot red in anger

maan bhai! chahey koi kuch bhi karey ya kahey hoga wohi jo geet chahey gi ap plz geet ko mana lein annie cried only with the thought that they separated seeing annie maan get control on his anger

tum tension mat lo geet ko to ma mana hi ln ga, magr us prem ka dimagh shi jagah laney ma mjh sirf do minute lagein gy.

ni maan bhai abhi ap chup rhein ghr ma yash bhai ki shdi k functions start ho rhy hain ap prem bhai sy shadi k bad baat kr lyjye ga shadi ma kuch bura ho achi baat ni she cleared her point of view

mjh ni pata tha meri choti si gudiya itni samjhdari wali baatein karti hy zara apni ye samjhdari thori si geet ko bhi day do he said naughtily

dekha ap sy baatein krny ma bhool gyi bua ne mjh bulaya tha yash bhai ki fiancee k dresses pick krny k ly

kab hy shadi?

kal hum sangeet ma jain gy un k ghr

iss ka mtlab ma bilkul shi time py aya hn

ji bilkul with that she leave

maan's chain of thoughts round only on geet he didn't know how to manofy geet zindagi ma first time koi us sy naraz tha but he insure himself that wo geet ko mana lay ga

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akhir q aya hy wo yahan agr is ne geet sy baat bhi ki to ma usey jaan sy maar dn ga prem get know about the arrival of maan

prem plz relax ho jaye ye ghr maan bhai ka bhi to hy

agr ye ghr us ka bhi hy to is ka yeh mtlb ni wo,jo chahye karey wo geet k room ma gya tha to tum ne roka q ni

prem kaisi baatein kr rhy hain ap ma q unhaien geet k room ma janey sy rok skti hn geet un ki biwi hy

hunh...biwi hy ye biwi usey do saal bad yaad ayi hy mgr ab ma aisa ni honay dn ga badhon ne jo ghaltian ki hain wo ma repeat ni honay dn ga wo maan k sath ni rhna chahti aur ma usey divorce dilwaon ga hear that heer got clutched her heart

yeh kya kh rhy hain ap ye ghalat hy plz prem ma ap sy request krti hn aisa mat sochye geet sirf maan bhai ki biwi ni un k batey ki maa bhi hy prem is very angry and didn't know what he said in his anger

aur agr tum ne maan ki side li to mjh sy bura koi ni hoga with that he leave her in room.

heer got tears in her eyes prem got mad in anger and didn't know that he got hurt his loved ones in his anger.