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Sandhya

@true825

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

lovely update...

Maan already started flirting with Geet..Liked their conversation

Waiting for the next update..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

hi thanks 4 da pm n fantastic update! beautifully written! Geet at KH! Maan thinks its his imagination n realises! he goes 2 see her! Geet apologises n explains y she didn't go with him that day! Geet is studying! she asks Maan 4 help! he agrees! Geet impressed by his intelligence! Maan makes food 4 her n she makes dessert! they eat! Maan teases her! update soon 👏⭐️😊

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jasika

@jasika08

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+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Lovely update

Waiting for next update

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Hi Simran

Congratulations on new story 🥳

Interesting prologue..

Nice CS...

2 chapters are already updated...

Will read one by one then I'll comment 😳

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Part 1

Maan is all fida on Geet... 😛 his whole world stopped just to see Geet in front of him..

Whole time he was lost !

Geet ran away from him 😆 Poor girl... It's too much for her ! He was offering lift and she was all worried...

I loved the start... So damn excited for second chapter !

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Lovely update 👍🏼

Geet gives off to her dad in weekends n do his work 🤗

Maan saw geet n wanted to get the scores equal

Geet asked sorry n told the reason for not coming in his car😎

Maan taught geet... He made pizza n she made phirni

Geet called Maan sunder😆

Geet ran away... She was shy being so close to him 😳

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zida

@zida

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

lovely pt
maan was angry on geet
but thank god geet clear all misunderstanding
maan teach geet
maan sunder hai
geet is so cute

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Part 2

Sweet update !

Geet and her cute puppy looks 😛 bhala kaun melt nahi hoga? 😳

Maan helped her in studies... How sweet !

They both cook lunch and eat together 😳

'Ladke sundar nahi smart hote hain '😆... So true ! 😆

Lovely read ❤️

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

sigh, how wonderful!!!

I loved how Geet explains away before Maan can even ask! And no shyness when asking him for help.

But there is also a nice and equal balance between the two. The way Maan helps her, the way they both cook and eat together.

Very nice.

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Part 20 very nice dear main sees geet in garden comes towards her to set scores with herby rejecting him and hurting his ego geet gave main clearfication that this village thee things not acceptable here main happy and alshelps geet in studies and a
So cook pizza for again drooling towards geet nice continue soon dear

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