hi sonia..
yet to read ur story tu tu hai wahi ..so can't say anything for that ..
now baabul is my fav ...i read it and comment too on it ..
kya tumhe haq hai ..i left in mid coz u were not giving password ..
it is not necessary that a story must contain 18+ content to be hit ...many times this kind of stuff spoils the story ..i myself had left many stories coz they were getting too much spoiled by this 18+ thing..
so don't think that way ...
there is no fault in ur writings..these days readers r less on this gf..even i too hardly get time ..
only thing i can suggest u is that u should not take things too seriously ..enjoy urself ...