(MG-SS)MLS SEASON 5(OBSCURE LOVE)THREAD 3 PARTS/16--23

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Congrats for new thread

Lovely update

Waiting for next update

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Congrats on the new thread and loved the update for part 16. I like the trust Geet has on Maan and the moments that they spend together are really beautifully written. Also loved the way Shekhar teased Maan when he found out that he took Geet to see the waterfall. Looking forward to what is in store next and great job as always.

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Arsheela

@Arsheela

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Nice update but I am not getting any positive vibes Reasons r mention below

1 geet been almost house arrest (Why)

2 Her Sister in Law is sending her Brother but nobody wanted to talk with geet not even asked maan to arrange a skype talk with her to ensure geet safety (Why)

3 Geet even not missing family (WHY)

so lets see what you have in store

waiting for next update

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Nice update

Geet & Maan sean was really good

Sheikar Teaser Maan

As he is possessive for geet

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

congrats for new thread

superb update

every thing is ready for geet to go back her home with her brother but maan's heart not ready for this as he is geet's foster brother

it is becoming hard for maan to be away from geet

geet is constantly asking about maan to himself

finally maan decide to give her little satisfying answer

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Congrats on the new thread! superb update! well written! Maan doesn't want 2 send Geet with anyone! Shekhar teases Maan! Geet wants answers frm Maan! update soon