SATRANGI INDRADANUSH **NOTE Pg. 95**26/06/18 - Page 59

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Chapter 21(a)

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Later at night Gauri slept with Geet in her room and Veer slept outside. Rishabh and Sameera had to be home as Ayush was getting cranky. Maan so wanted to be next to his Mishty but for some reason she seemed scared of him. As just now was not the right time to make her understand, Maan decided to stay outside with Neel. Although as a combat officer he knew that proper rest and food at regular intervals is needed in crisis so as both mind and body get energy for a mission. But in this case his heart was involved, His Mishty was in hospital, so how could he be anywhere else? But Gauri patiently explained to him, "Jeejaji, aaj toh koi bhaaga-daudee nahi hai kyunki aaj toh Geet ko sirf soona hai. Magar kal aapki bahut zarurat hogi iss liye aaj aap ghar jaa kar aaram se soyiye jiss se aap kal raat ko rukne ke liye tyaar honge." (Jeejaji, today there is going to be no running about because Geet has only sleep. But tomorrow your need will be more. Therefore, I suggest you go home today rest and peacefully sleep so tomorrow you are ready to face the stress and tensions.)

NEXT DAY
Location : PRESIDENTIAL SUITE, CITY HOSPITAL NEW DELHI, 7:00a.m.
It was an awful night for Maan away from his wife, his Mishty. Hence, as soon as he got up (if he slept!!) he did his daily chores and reached hospital and asked Neel and Gauri to go home and rest. Maan finally was able to see his Mishty who was more composed than yesterday. After Neel and Gauri had left, Maan came near Geet's bed held her hand in between his and said,"Mishty, I'm sorry ki maine tumhei kal darra diya. Sweetheart tumhei apne se dur jaata mei dekh nahi saka aur iss liye mai gussa ho gaya." (Mishty, I'm sorry that I scared you yesterday. I could not bear the thought of you going away from me sweetheart, hence I yelled!)

"Matlab, agar phir mai koi galat kaam karoon toh aap mujhe aise hi daantenge?" (That means if I again make a mistake you will yell at me.) Geet said looking like a small child with tears in her eyes.



"Nahi sweetheart mai thoda insecure ho gaya thaa. Kyunki subah tumhari shaadi ke rishton ke baare mein sunn kar aur shaam ko tumhara mujhe chodh kar jaane ko le kar." (No sweetheart, I got insecure! In morning everyone was talking about your marriage alliance and then you were planning to leave me.)



Then he held Geet's ears instead of his and said "I"M SORRY!"

"Aap ne mere kaan pakade abb mai kabhi aap ko maaf nahi karongi!" (You pulled my ears now I will never forgive you!) Geet said with a big pout.



Making atmosphere light by Geet getting miffed. Before any more nok jhok could happen between husband and wife, Dr. Rajshekhar (Gastroenterologist) and Dr. Pramod Aacharya (Surgical Oncologist) arrived.

"Mr. Khurana as Dr. Gupta had adviced you that seeing the present circumstances we have to operate Mrs. Khurana today." Dr. Aacharya said. Geet caught Maan arm in fear hearing word "Operate".



Maan had got Geet admitted as "MRS. GEETIKA MAAN SINGH KHURANA as Maan Singh Khurana's wife. After showing to the hospital administration Maan and Geet's marriage certificate. Hence, whole hospital administration i.e. Doctors, matrons, nurses, ward boys, hospital administrator etc. were addressing Geet as "Mrs. Khurana". Rishabh was also relaxed seeing that what Maan had said about Maan and Geet's court marriage was true and Maan was not doing any crime against his daughter cum sister, Gudiya.

"We will also try and see that minimum harm is done to her gastrointestinal lining. However for safety sake we will give her liquid diet initially after surgery and then soft food. But no matter what till her final surgery in US she cannot have oily, fried, spicy and hard food i.e. Chaat; Whole leagumes i.e. Chana, rajmah etc.; corn or any other thing difficult to digest." Dr. Rajshekhar informed.

"Last but not least, Mrs. Khurana will be given radiation after a month of surgery."

"RADIATION?" Maan exclaimed horrified.

"Yes its needed Mr. Khurana so that as much as possible cancerous cells are killed thereby reducing the need of chemotherapy. Its good that Mrs. Khurana is not pregnant otherwise we would have had to let the fertilized foetus go. Please brace yourselves for a long day ahead. Take care!" Dr. Aacharya said. Then both doctors left leaving a stunned Maan and Geet.

Rishabh had come with Savitri Devi, Ranjit, Krishankant and Radharani. They were about to enter the Presidential Suite, when they heard conversation between Maan, Dr. Aacharya and Dr. Rajshekhar. Seeing the doctors coming out, Savitri Devi, Ranjit, Krishankant and Rishabh approached them with their respective queries, whereas Radharani quitely went inside to see Geet. Sameera had stayed back to see to Ayush and manage home front when other family members would be shuttling to and fro between hospital and home.

Radharani approached Geet's bed to see still stunned faces of Maan and Geet. "Mayuri, abb tum kaisi ho beta?" (Mayuri, how are you my dear?)



Hearing Radharani's voice Maan and Geet came out of their trance. Seeing Radharani there Maan touched her feet and said, "Maa aap Geet ke paas beithiye mai zara dawaaiyon ka intezaam karke aata hoon." (Maa, you sit with Geet, I'll go and arrange for medicines.) Once Maan left, Geet was unable to appear strong any longer finally broke down in her mother's arms,"Maa, mujhe maaf kar dijiye maine aapka dil dukhaya." (Maa, please forgive me for hurting you.)

"Baas kar Gudiya! Beta tum sahi thee aur mai galat." (Enough Gudiya! You were right and I was wrong!)

Hugging Radharani tightly, Geet said,"Maa mujhe darr lag raha hai!" (Maa, I'm feeling scared!)



"DARR? Kiss baat kaa, beta? Tumhara jaldi se operation ho jaayega aur tum theek ho jaaogi aur phir hum sab dhoom-dhaam se jawaai-sa ke saath tumhara vivaah kar denge." (Scared? What for? Soon your operation will be done, you will become healthy and then we will get you married to Maan with real pomp and show!)

"Gudiya, yaa tu uss Chandrakant Chautala matlab, Chandu athava "baail" se vivaah karna chahti hai toh mai usse bula loon?" (Or you can get married to Chandrakant Chautala or Chandu aka "bull") Rishabh said tongue in cheek.

"Agar woh baail mere samaksh aaya toh mai inse keh kar uski khoob khabar loongi." (If that bull comes in front of me I'll ask Maan to teach him a lesson!) Geet said with her cheeks turning red in anger.



Making Krishankant and Radharani laugh making the atmosphere lighter. Savitri Devi and Ranjit also smiled seeing Rajsinghanias in splits of laughter only one person was not happy. No prizes for guessing WHO HE WAS??
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Chapter 21(b)

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

With elders being there things started looking better and relaxed. Rishabh and Maan were trying to send the elders back but they refused. Geet was also clinging to Radharani as she was a little scared of Maan's temper now. Finally it was decided, that only Radharani will stay till Geet is wheeled in to Operation Theater (OT) and rest everyone will leave. Promptly at 1:00p.m., matron with ward boys came to wheel Geet into the OT. Rishabh held Radharani back as he could feel, Radharani slowly loosing grip on herself and he did not want Geet to remember her mother's sad face. Maan held Geet's hand while they were taking her to OT. When Geet became unconscious she doesn't remember.

Location: Outside Operation Theater (OT), 02:00p.m.



The surgery started and only the youngsters were present, Neel and Gauri were home as they had been awake whole night. Radharani refused to go home until Maan said,"Maa-sa, aap ghar jaayiye, jaise hi Geet ko hosh aayega, main aapko turant phone kar doonga." (Maa-sa, please go home. As soon as Geet gets conscious, I will immediately call you.) Sameera had also come after elders had their lunch, leaving Ayush with Rajeshwari and Pritam. An hour became two, then three, finally at 6:00p.m. OT's red light was switched off and both Dr. Rajshekhar and Dr. Aacharya came out exhausted still in their scrubs. They went near Maan and Rajsinghania brothers. Dr. Aacharya said, "Mr. Khurana, I have tried to remove all the abnormal (cancerous) cells to the best of my capacity and Dr. Rajshekhar has massaged and dressed all the bleeding wounds in Mrs. Khurana's gastrointestinal tract. But how successful the surgery was will depend on Mrs. Khurana's resposes once she gains consciousness. She will have to stay in hospital for about two weeks."

"Doctor, can I stay with her tonight?" Maan asked.

"Mr. Khurana once Mrs. Khurana gains consciousness, she will be wheeled to ICU and then be administered with painkillers, sedatives etc. so that she has to bear minimum pain. Hence, I suggest you all also go home and rest as you cannot stay with her tonight." Dr. Rajshekhar explained.

"Even if she becomes conscious, we cannot let any family member meet her as she is very weak and can pick up infections easily. Excuse me!" Dr. Aacharya said and left.

"Doctor what about her diet?" Maan asked remembering Savitri Devi's instructions.

"Mr. Khurana, for 24hrs. Mrs. Khurana will be NIL BY MOUTH. Meaning she can't eat or drink anything orally hence we nourish her intravenously. After 24hrs., we will try with liquid diet. Now I must leave." Dr. Rajshekhar said.
Once both doctors had left, there was discussion going on between Khurana and Rajsinghania brothers and all eight of them wanted to stay till Radharani's phone call interrupted them. She ordered Rishabh and Neel to return home immediately as they are newly weds. Grudgingly Rishabh and Neel left for home. Hence, now it was Maan, Yash, Veer, Arnav, Sid and Vicky left. Before Maan could say that he will stay, he got an urgent call from office, so Maan had to leave. It was decided that Veer and Vicky will stay for tonight.

Later in the night around 01:00a.m., Veer and Vicky went to grab a coffee to ward off lethargy and sleepiness. Just then a dark figure entered Geet's room. Geet was tossing and turning restlessly muttering,"Pani...pani...pani...". (Water, water, water...) A nurse came and said, "Mrs. Khurana, pani abhi nahi thodi der mein." (Mrs. Khurana, we will give you water soon.) Then check her parameters and left. Once nurse left, a dark figure went near Geet's bed. Geet opened her eyes, "Aap...aa...gaye! Mujhe aap ka...hi intezaar thaa." (You...have...come! I...was...waiting...for...you!) Geet said with her parched throat.

"Kaisa naa aata? Maine apni Mishty ko poore din nahi dekha hai. Tum kaisi ho Mishty?" (I had to come. I have not seen my Mishty for full day. How are you feeling darling?) Maan said in husky whisper.

"Suniye..bahut...taqleef...ho raha hai! Mujhe...pya..
as...lag...rahi...hai!" (I'm...in...lot...of...discomfort. I'm...thir...sty!)

"Chinta matt karo, thodi der mein sab theek ho jaayega." (Don't worry you will be alright soon!)

"Aap mere paas...rah...ega..." (You...please...stay...
ne...ar...) Geet dozed off due to medicines. Maan stealthily left before anyone could notice him in Geet's room.

NEXT MORNING 7:00a.m.
Location: KHURANA MANSION (KM)
Early next morning Maan was having breakfast, when Rishabh and Neel came. Savitri Devi asked them for breakfast but they refused saying, "Hummei apni behan ki sasural ka paani tak peena varjit hai!" (We are forbidden to even have water in our sister's in-laws' place!)

"Beta, jab tak Maan aur Geet ke phere nahi hote tum apni behan ki sasural nahi magar apne baba ke dost ke ghar aaye ho." (Son, till Geet and Maan are not married according to Hindu rites and rituals, this is your father's friend's home not Geet's in-laws' home.)

"Ranjit bilkul sahi keh rahe hain. Neel beta aap chinta matt kariye aapka nashta rasoi ke Maharaj banayenge jaise mera nashta bann raha hai." (Ranjit is absolutely right. Neel you can also have this food as its made by chef who cooks fasting cuisine for me.) Hence, Savitri Devi forcifully fed both the brothers.

After breakfast Rishabh said,"Dadimaa, Chachaji aur Maan, Neel, Arnav aur mujhe aaj shaam ko hi nikalna padhega Mumbai ke liye kyunki koi zaruri kaam aa gaya hai. Yash, Veer aur Sid, Maa aur Baba ke saath yaheen rukhenge jab tak Gudiya theek nahi hoti. Sameera aur Gauri bhi humare saath jaa rahi hain, kyunki Maa hum dono ko shaadi ke baad akele nahi jaane dena chah rahi hain." (Dadimaa, Uncle and Maan, Neel, Arnav and I am leaving for Mumbai today evening as some urgent work has cropped up. However, Yash, Veer and Sid along with Maa and Baba will stay till Gudiya doesn't recover. Sameera and Gauri are also accompanying us as Maa doesn't want Neel and me to travel by ourselves after being newly married!)

"Radharani bilkul sahi kar rahi hain. Reeti aur riwazon ke hisaab se shaadi ke teen mahine baad tak pati-patni ko ghar ke bahaar har jageh ek saath jaana chahiye!(WRITER's LIBERTY!)" (Radharani is absolutely right. According to Hindu rites and rituals. Till three months of marriage is not over, no newly wed can leave their home alone!)

Once Rishabh and Neel left, Savitri Devi said in a serious tone, "Maan, ek baar Geet ghar aa jaaye, humara sujhaav hai ki aap usse vidhivatt shaadi kar lijiye." (Maan once Geet is back, I suggest you get married to her with all Hindu rites.)

"Kintu Dadimaa, uski tabiyat theek nahi aur aap sab reeti aur riwaazon ke saath shaadi karna chahengi." (But Dadimaa, Geet is not well and you would like our marriage to be with elaborate customs, rituals and ceremonies.) Maan objected.

"Hum jaante hain, magar bina Geet ki shaadi huye Rajsinghania parivaar tum dono ko akele US jaane ki ijazzat nahi denge. Hum sab jaante hain ki Geet ke operation ke saath-saath uski post graduation bhi US mei hoga." (I know. But without Geet's traditional marriage with all Hindu rites, Rajsinghania family will not let you or Geet travel alone to US. We all are aware that not only Geet's operation is scheduled in US but her post graduation studies as well!)



"Mujhe manzoor hai. Magar agar Geet ki marzi ho toh! Dadimaa, kuch der baad aap kuch black coffee aur fruits bhej dijiyega mere liye kunki hospital ki canteen ka khana bahut teliyaa aur teekha hai. Abb mai chalta hoon." (I agree. But only if Geet also willingly agrees. Dadimaa, can you please send to hospital black coffee and fruits for me as I cannot eat hospital's oily and spicy food. Now I shall leave.) Saying this Maan left. On reaching outside the hospital ICU, Maan sent Vicky and Veer back home and was waiting for Dr. Rajshekhar and Dr. Aacharya when they come for their morning rounds. Meanwhile, Maan started check his e-mail and office work which he was neglecting since arrival of HIS MISHTY.

Dr. Rajshekhar and Dr. Aacharya came out of ICU and said, "Mr. Khurana, we are very happy with the progress of your wife's health. Hopefully by today evening we will be able to start giving her fluids. If her stomach can accept that, then hopefully we can shift her in Presidential Suite tomorrow."

"Mr. Khurana, please don't forget to bring Mrs. Khurana for radiation after a month of surgery." Dr. Aacharya instructed and then both doctors departed.

Maan informed Khuranas and Rajsinghanias about Geet's health.

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So glad the surgery is over hopefully al things will get better now. Geet wanting her maan with her after surgery
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Wonderful update dear, geet is scared of maan is anger , her operation is done
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awesome updates..
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Nice update dear operation is success and all felt revealed one more in us
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Nice updates
Geet was scared from surgery
But hopefully she will be fine
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Nice update hope feet is fine now waiting for next update
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Chapter 21 a..
Awesome..

Loved it..

Thanks for update
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Thanks for pm...
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Geet was admitted to the hospital..

She feared maan's anger...
Maan tried to placate her ...

Doctors informed about the procedure of her surgery n gave necessary instructions...

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