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tessyrani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Very interesting prologue. Now he has to find out his mystery savior. He even try to make a sketch of her in his mind .

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Congratulations on new story di!!👏⭐️

Emotional and touchy cum illustrative start

Nyc update!!

Maan met with accident due to slippy and sloppy roads covered with fog and his urgency to meet his dadima

Maan was restless after knowing that his dadima got heart attack and wanted to return back to his family immediately led him to accident

The accident cost maan a lot ,which made him lose his eye sight and Paralysed too

Then she came as a ray of hope in his Shattered and unpleasant life

Her touch made him feel alive and his soul return !!

He could understand her unsaid words and emotions

She made him reach his family but she disappeared like a fragrance in the air

He heard from people that she was just his Chimera his virtual reality!!

For others she was just his figment of his imagination a dream finder!! but for him she was his life saviour

Waiting to know how maan will find her and realise that she was the one!!

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Edited by anu5 - 8 years ago

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Will be waiting for the next update di

Thanks for the cute love story and pm!!

😊😉

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Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Dramatic prologue

Maan needed to get to his Daadima but had such a tragic accident

he believes that a girl visited him she must be responsible for giving him back his life as his body reacted to her touch but no one has seen her

looking forward to see how will Maan find her

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pari_DD

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Amazing concept maan with a brutal accident he paralyzed he feel someone with him everyone is saying his illusion waiting for d updteee

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turbulence

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Yaar sonia, one request prior to my comment.

Please lend me your literary brain for few months. I wish i could write like you.

The concept is fresh and really wonderful.

Poor maan, lost his strength and eyesight but remembers the lone name, her touch.

Wo mehsoos kar raha thaa us ajnabee sparsh, us mulayam ajnabee ehsaas ko.

He knows that she exists, but cannot prove it.

Her touch is enough to prove him right.

But then he regained his body stability and eyesight, so i am relieved.

Par ab in dono ka milaap hoga to kaise? Just wanna see them together.

Waise please tell me, when actually are you planning to update my favorite stories?

I am yearning to read those. Hope you update them soon. Mini updates will also do.

Please update this one along with tu meri zindagi and the others very soon.

Also another request, but will ask that thru pm only.

Waiting for next part, love your works very much.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

congrats on the new story! thanks 4 da pm n fab prologue! well written! so she took care of him n then disappeared! he is looking 4 her! update soon

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swapna.p

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

congrats for new story..
waiting for next update..

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geet_v81

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Congratulations for New Story

awesome concept

It will be very interesting to see how will Maan find her who all are saying as on illusion

waiting fr next

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Congo on the new story dear thanks for a romantic ff so maan had a very bad accident he got paralyzed and lost his vision but he felt geet who never said anything as she couldn't speak now maan is getting better but he is looking for geet all are saying it's his illusion but maan knows from his heart that she is real and he will find her at any cost