Girvi / Updating today check pg 18 - Page 14

awesome update...
story is so much interesting...
geet ne apna sb kuch maan k paas girvi rkh dia...
its painful...

1. Putting his head down ,like silent spectator he was listening to her. He really did much but couldn't bring her out of that feeling , due to which only he was suffering For saving my life you crossed all boundaries. N the life* you gave me...uske badle maine apna aap girvi kar diya hai , apko...What ever you want to do with me. You have full rite. When this life is yours..Why to be scared of you... what ever she had in her mind n heart . She was bringing out .But what about him.Who will listen to her calmly. She had fed enough to him With food as well with her words.Plate was empty , her heart was empty. She placed plate on table.

*(keep in mind she is talking about own life not about baby inside her)

Reply-It will be rude to say but I have understand the part that Geet was talking about herself. I don't know what had happened that lead to this but I can only tell about the situation that if Geet has given herself to him that just because he had done something or it's the circumstances that Maan had to do I can know only later

2. I tried to kill my own child. My own flash n blood. I never wanted this.I am a criminal, a bloody criminal. he screamed aloud.

Reply- He was not wrong i taking the decision I appreciate him to take such a big and crucial decision of his life to kill his own child who doesn't even seen the world. I would have angry on him if geet had crossed the legal age of 18 or she was 18 too. Getting pregnant at 16 is not a wise thing and more making her giving the responsibility of a child at this age is killing her innocence whatever left. How can she take care at this age I know she is mature Dadi is here and Maan can took care but kuch cheezein Maan, Daadi aur na hi Geet handle kar skti hai... May be Maan wanted her to start her education or I don't know. His Dadima telling that He is a murderer is completely wrong and I will condemn it till the end. Yeah, I agree he should have discuss with Geet and Dadima and let them understand too. but I don't think he was wrong he had already mention in above that She is not at the age to get pregnant...

3. She wanted to start Charitable Hospital, School n Collage at one place, in memory of her late husband. But at exact time some people started to claim one portion from that huge area...for which Khuraanas paid twice than market price.So Savitiri Devi wanted Maan to tackle this problem by himself.

Reply- So, Maan is gone to Hoshiarpur to solve one land problem and there I got to know about the Geet and his baba... and his baba telling her to behave and he was unconciously comparing two people one couldn't stop her talks and other who hardly open his mouth...

P.S. Is bychance Maan and Geet are maaried??? But it is not legal and they are still unmarried in the eyes of law and may be Maan is the culprit to according to the law no matter what the circumstance is?? Even Geet's family can be prisoned to do this... I was unclear as Geet always called him Maalik

Hi, I am new Reader of your fan fiction I really liked your this fanfiction concept and wants to know more and love to read more hope you write soon and i will get a pm from your side. I want to become a regular reader of this fanfiction...

With Regards

ila

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

Updating today

Direct rule comment n get pw also applies on this too... I m okey with less number of readers than silent ones who even don hit like . Gave u first pw free update now its turn to lock it with pw

After competing PKHJD this is also gonna be 10-15 parts SS otherwise depends upon response too.