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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Thanks for the note.

Waiting for update.

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#122

geet pragent she is 16 maan want to aboirt his child but geet request him plz dont harm her child she cwill not impose confused with maan behaviour nice continue soon

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Awesome Start

Geet is pregnant with Maan,s baby and Maan asked for abortion , Dadi is hell angry with Maan ,sunaofying him and even slapped him, poor Maan spending his time in office still Geet brought food for him and fed him, loved it, Geet still calling him Maalik, waiting for the past to unfold

Thanks for the note

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Nice start

Dadima was angry on maan as he wants to

Abort the baby as maan is also hurt to

Abort his own baby there might be a strong

Reason behind his behavior

Maan he is not speaking to geet directly

He is speaking through naakul

Geet is stubborn girl as well as caring

She feeds maan and also said what she

Wanted to say

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

superb update

geet is only 16 years and pregent also

and maan want abort the baby

but dadi ma stop at the right time

poor nakul in between maan and geet he became sandwich

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Will be waiting for this update too

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Congratulations on new story

Prologue & Part 1

Maan is 23 years old while Geet is 16 years old both young , Maan has his career before him while Geet only studied till 10th grade as her circumstances were such

now they married and she is also pregnant but at the same time it seems the marriage was done due to some unforeseen circumstances , Maan is not happy with the marriage he does not even talk to Geet .

Maan wanted to abort his child is it because of Geet's age or is it simply because there is no love in the marriage ?

Geet calling Maan as Maalik probably its because when he came to the village she was told that Maalik would be visiting she knows he suffers with headaches and he hasn't eaten she brings his food to his office which he disapproves off but she is adamant that he needs to eat otherwise she will not leave and silently he agrees she feeds him and tells him she is not scared of him as she belongs to him her life is his and whatever he wishes to do he can but he must allow the baby to be born she will never impose the baby on him and I'm sure its very difficult for Maan he seems tensed and confused also he finds himself alone and in pain .

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myrah shaikh

@myrahluvsk

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Nice Story
geet is 16 yrs only n pregnant
maan want to abort baby
geet want to birth baby
geet is calling maan mallik
what happen in past???

waiting for next update

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#129

wow very interesting start...

Maan married Geet or she is just living in his house...

she is just 16 years old...she is not so much educated but Maan is educated from foreign...how could he take advantage of such a small girl and then he tried to abort her baby also...and now he is crying...

very eager to know what happened in past that they reach this stage now...

thanx for pm...