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lovely update so ther was annual function in the hospital on account of diwali they came to know anamika used to dance in the function they also came to know that she had stooped singing shocking the khurans but anamika not only performed dancing in the program but also sang beautifully maan was shocked he needed to control his emotions that his mishty invoke in him geet was relaxing herself when dr rahul misbeahved with her he lusted after her pointing finger at her character which man couldnt take it he punched rahul and filled geets maang claiming her to be his wife so much fir elders poretending game maan nne unke saare plans pe paani pher diya
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hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! superbly written! they all admire Geet's dance! Maan is angry hearing wt Rahul sed! Maan fills her maang! update soon
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Fabulous update dear, loved it...
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Firstly thanks a lot for pming me the update. Its so much shocking to see maan filling geet mang. Its really an unexpected twist in present situation they are in. Hate rahul n ppl like him who speaks ill about single ladies in society and are unable to judge the feeling of a woman in their lust. Truely due to ppl like rahul women are still unsafe everywhere. So they needed to be crashed down brutally to clean society. And u describe classical dance very beautifully. Waiting for next part.
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Awesome part. Maaneet weere married 😆😉😉
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awesome update..well written..khurana family invited for function in the hospital where geet dance & sing also..rahul was misbehaving with geet & thanks that maan came to save her & to give name to their relation, he filled geet's maang with his own blood...wow so now geet known as Mrs.GeetMSK...(becz of Rahul ) maaneet married..excited for next update..thanks for pm!!
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All the updates are mindblowing
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Chapter 14


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Maan held a stunned Geet's hand in his and walked out of the auditorium premises. Maan made Geet sit in his hired car but there was no response from Geet as she was still in a state of shock. The driver stopped the car at a park some distance away from the auditorium. Maan held Geet's hand and got her out of the car and they went inside a Gazebo in the garden.



"Geet, tum theek ho?" (Geet are you alright?)

"Haan. Thank you for saving my honour!"

"Abb hummei Dadaji, Dadimaa, Dad aur Maa ko hamari shaadi ke baare mein battana chahiye!" (Now we should tell Dadaji, Dadimaa, Dad and Maa about our marriage.)

"Uh...SHAADI? KISKI SHAADI?" (Uh...Wedding? Whose wedding?)

"Humari. Abhi toh maine tumhari maang bhari hai." (Ours. I have just filled your parting.)



"Mr. Khurana aap bahut zyaada films dekhte hai. Yeh aap se kisne kahaa ki ek ladki ki sirf maang bharne se shaadi ho gayi? Kya humare phere hue? Nahi! Kya aapne mujhe mangalsutra pehnaya ? Nahi! Mai US citizen hoon to US ke kuch alag legal procedures hote hain shaadi ke liye. Iss liya naa toh hum Hindu dharm ki reeti riwazon se aur naa US ke kanoon ke hisaab se pati-patni hain!" (Mr. Khurana you are seeing too many movies. Who told you that just by filling a girl's hair parting, you are married? Have we gone around the fire? No! Have you tied the black beads around my neck? No! I'm a US citizen and there are some laws regarding marriage. Hence neither according to Hindu religion nor US laws we are married.)

"Geet tum ek Maa ho akele kaise Ayush ko bada karogi?" (Geet your are a mother, how will you bring up Ayush single handedly?)

"Mr. Khurana, mai aapse ek sawal poochti hoon, bura matt manniyega. Aapki annual income US dollars mei kitni hai?" (Mr. Khurana, can I ask you a question, please don't get offended! What is your annual income US dollars?) Maan quoted a figure. Geet quoted her salary which was fractionally different then Maan's. "Aapke paas apna ghar hai aur mere paas bhi. Aapke paas car hai aur mere bhi. Hum dono mei sirf kuch antar hai jaise ki mai self made woman hoon aur aap apne family business ke owner hain; aapke aneko bade ghar hain aur mera ek chota ghar hai; aap ki aneko badi gaadiyaan hain aur meri ek choti gaadi hai. Iss liye mere pass apni zarurat poore karne ke liye paryaapt saadhan hain aur mujhe aapse yaa kissi aur se shaadi karne hi zarurat nahi. Thank you! Abb raat bahut ho gayi hai, hummei ghar chalna chajiye." (You have your own house so do I. You have own a car so do I. There are only certain difference that is - I'm a self made woman and you are the owner of your family business; you have many mansions whereas I have one small apartment; you have number of luxury cars whereas I have one hatch back. Hence, I have sufficient funds to meet my needs and I don't need to be married to you or anyone else. Thank you! Its getting late, lets leave!)



"Geet tum humare rishte ko jhutla nahi sakti." (Geet you cannot ignore our relationship!)

"Mai apne rishte ko tab jhutlati jab koi rishta hota. Naa toh aap mujhse pyaar karte hain aur naa..." (I would have ignored our relationship if there ever was any relationship! Neither you love me nor I...)
Suddenly clouds started rumbling, there was crackling of lightening and fat droplets of rain started falling. Before rain could drench both of them inside the Gazebo, Maan held Geet's hand and ran to a hut within walking distance from Gazebo.



A WEEK LATER

Location: Dr. Neil's cabin, St. Angels Hospital, New York, 08:00am
Geet knocked at the door and on been given permission entered and found Raagini there with Aagam and Nishi.
"Arre Baba, aap busy? Mai baad mein aa jaaongi!" (Oh Baba, you are busy! I'll come later!)

"Nahi beta andar aao. Aagam, Nishi aur mai nikal hi rahe the." (No my dear please come in. Aagam, Nishi and I was just leaving.) Raagini said getting up from the sofa.

After Khanna family left, Neil said, "Anamika beta, ek job vacany aayi hai San Francisco mein." (Anamika there is a job vacany in San Francisco.)

"San Francisco mein?" (In San Francisco?)

"Haan! Mere batchmate aur Riddhima ke father Dr. Shashank Gupta ko ek cardiologist ki zarurat hai. Toh mujhe lagaa tumhare liye accha experience hoga." (Yes. My batchmate and Riddhima's father needs a Cardiologist in his team.)

"Magar Baba mai yeh job nahi lena chahti." (Baba, I don't want to take up this job.)

"KYUN?" (Why?)

"Mai iss job ke liye qualified nahi hoon. Maine toh kabhi kissi ka operation bhi nahi kiya hai. Aur..." (I'm not qualified for it. As I have not even done a single surgery. And...)

"Jinn yaadon se tum baag rahi ho, woh har shehar aur har desh mei tumhara peecha karengi. Meri baat maano toh Indian wapis chali jaao." (The memories you are running from will follow you everywhere i.e. Any town and any country. Take my advice and return to India.)

"Nahi Baba, India ne mujhe humesh sirf dard diya hain?" (No Baba! India has only given me pain.)

"Yahaan New York mei bhi toh tumhei kuch yaadon ne dard diya hai?" (There are few painful memories of New York as well!) Dr. Neil said. Neil's words made Geet go into the past week's incident with that Rahul Chopra, and then Maan filling her maang. She was in deep thoughts untill Neil's voice broke her thoughts. "Anna, Thakur Amardeep kaise hai?" (Anna, how is Thakur Amardeep?)

"Baba mai ek hafte se wahaan nahi gayi hoon. Abb toh wahaan Dr. Stephens jaate hain." (Baba, I've not met him for a week. Now Dr. Stephens is in charge of his case.)

"Theek hai mai tumhei sochne ke liye ek hafta deta hoon phir battana San Francisco ke baare mein. Aur yaad rakhna har sikke ke do pehlu hote hain!" (Alright, I give you a week to think about San Francisco's job and then give me your final decision. Just remember every coin has two sides to it.)

"Ji!" (Yes!)

TWO WEEKS AFTER DIWALI MELA

Maan had not met Geet since the "Diwali Mela" night. She refused to answer his calls or messages. He knows that Geet is furious at Maan's filling Geet's maang without her wishes and her permission but he could not sit back and listen to that Rahul maligning Geet's character. Thats why next day he told the Hospital Administration that if they want donation they have to fire Dr. Rahul Chopra from their hospital. Which administration gladly did as they were recieving lot of complaints by female patients about Dr. Rahul Chopra's disgusting behaviour. Maan knows that Geet doesn't considers Maan's filling Geet's maang as a marrige. As a marriage since it has not been done religiously or legally but for Maan, Geet is his wife. Maan was busy in his New Hotels teething problems he couldn't visit Geet and Ayush since the "Diwali Mela". Besides Thakur Amardeep, Savitri Devi, Ram, Janaki and Maan were returning to India next weekend as now Thakur Amardeep was better and Ram & Maan had been away from Delhi office for very long. Hence, today finally Maan decided to pay Geet and Ayush a visit. Maan was passing by a garden near Geet's house when he saw Ayush playing there with Rosie Aunty. So Maan got down from the car and asked driver to wait. Seeing Maan Ayush jumped in Maan's arms.

Geet was on her way back from Hospital to home. She was passing by the garden near her home where she saw Ayush with Rosie Aunty. She parked her car in the parking at her home and went towards Ayush. When she reached near Rosie Aunty, she found Maan also there with Ayush. She was seeing Maan first time after he had filled her maang with his blood on the Diwali Ball night and she had told him not to consider as a marriage. She was still very upset with Maan to treat her like a commodity instead of a person. Geet was just looking around here and there as she didn't want to look in Maan's direction, when she noticed the man whom she never wanted to see in her life. Same man who had made her Bitto, Rajji's life miserable. The man who was a threat to Ayush and her life. The same man due to whom she had to leave her country and family. Before she could leave with Ayush, she saw the man pointing something in Maan's direction.



She came in front of Maan. Just then Ayush came running and jumped in her arms, ignoring her screams of,"RUKO AYUSH! NO AYUSH, NO AYUSH! DON'T COME NEAR ME!" But Ayush was already in her arms. Next moment a shot rang along with her screaming "MAAN" and then her whole world collapsed around her. Maan whose back was facing towards Geet did not see the incident and it was Geet's screaming "MAAN" that he turned and found Geet and Ayush lying in a pool of blood. The force of bullet being fired as well as bullet brushing past Geet's left arm made her loose her balance and she was lying flat on the ground with her baby, Ayush on top of her bleeding. The man who fired the bullet was immediately caught by Maan's body gaurds and local people. The crowd of people were beating the shooter black and blue till the Police came and took charge of the shooter and took him with them in the police vehicle. Ambulance had also arrived and took the bleeding Ayush on the stretcher and started the treatment. Geet was sitting in the ambulance like a statue without speaking a word. Maan followed the ambulance in his car.


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Chapter 15


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!


Geet was not allowed in ICU despite of being a doctor as she was Ayush's mother and injured herself. Matron along with Nurse Mary came and bandaged Geet's wound as she was not responding to their request and questions. Armaan and Neil were trying to revive her baby Ayush. Savitri Devi and Maan were present with Geet but she had not spoken a word neither had she shed a single tear. The New York Police came and asked Maan if they can question her. Maan was sceptical but Geet heard them and said, "I'll answer all your questions, Detective Jones."

"Dr. Singh, do you know the name of suspect?"

"Devdutt Banerjee!"

"Why did he want to shoot you?"

"He did not want to shoot me but Mr. Maan Singh Khurana!" Bringing a gasp from Savitri Devi.

"Why did he want to shoot Mr. Maan Singh Khurana?"

"I don't know!"

"I know, because he wanted to do a business deal in joint partnership with Khurana Industries but I refused. As Devdutt Banerjee uses illegal and under hand ways to achieve his deals." Maan answered.

"How do you know Mr. Devdutt Banerjee, Dr. Singh?"

"This incident happened 7 years back. My sister Rajeshwari (Rajji), who was sixteen at that time and I had gone to local fair in Amritsar, India as we had a depressing incident in our family. We were on our way back home together it became dark and suddenly I found Rajji was no longer walking with me. I searched and searched but could not find her. So I went to my friend Channi's house. With Channi and her brother we searched for three hours in the area where she disappeared and the forest around it, but it was of no avail. Next morning I was thinking of informing Amritsar Police when at 5:00am, I found Rajji in tattered clothes, scratches on her body and there was no doubt that she has been raped. Channi and I took her to Police Sation and lodged a complain. Her medical examination was done and her rape was confirmed. She said her rapist was someone by name of "Devdutt Banerjee". But the trauma of the misconduct was so bad that she was slowly loosing her mental balance. I could not take her home as our family was extremely conservative. Duing court proceedings, one day outside court Devdutt Banerjee wanted to shoot Rajji but Channi was shot instead and she died on the spot. Devdutt Banerjee was sentenced to prison for raping a minor and murder. If you check you will find Devdutt Banerjee's criminal record with Indian Police. Two weeks later we found Rajji pregnant. After 9 months, Ayush was born and Rajji died in child birth. Hence, I adoped the baby, Ayush. I along with Ayush moved to US for my studies." Folding her hands in front of the Policeman Geet begged, "Detective Jones, I beg you to please get justice for my demised sister and my injured son. In India this Devdutt Banerjee could bribe his way through justice but I hope and pray that he is definitely punished in US and cannot bribe his way through!"

"Dr. Singh, we will do best of our ability that he is convicted." Detective Jones reassured Geet.

Just then Dr. Neil and Dr.Armaan came out with grim faces and said, "Anamika hum Ayush ko nahi bacha sake!" (Anamika, we could not save Ayush!) Looking at Detective Jones, Neil said, "Detective, Ayush is no more!" Then they left. Geet was standing like a statue and then there was a thud and Geet had collapsed in dead faint on the sofa. "Guddo, GudDO, GUDDO!" Savitri Devi was screaming and shaking to wake Geet. "Doctor, Doctor..." Maan ran to call Neil.

" Anamika, hum Ayush ko nahi bacha sake!" (Anamika, we could not save Ayush!)
" Anamika, hum Ayush ko nahi bacha sake!"
" Anamika, hum Ayush ko nahi bacha sake!"

This sentence was beating in Geet's brain. Her innocent, simple and carefree Ayush is no more. Ayush who was the only stability and happiness in her life. Her baby, Ayush who was always bothered about her i.e. Has she eaten or not? Is she tired? Many times he made her sleep in his tiny lap when she returned home after an exhausting day in the hospital. AYUSH BROUGHT IN GEET'S LIFE NORMALENCY & HAPPINESS! THAT AYUSH IS NO MORE!



It was half a day since Geet was told about Ayush's demise but Geet had not spoken a word nor shed a single tear. Savitri Devi was extremely worried about her physical and mental health. She had called Ram and Janaki to come to the hospital and asked Maan to go to hotel and be with his Dadaji but Maan refused. Finally, Savitri Devi yelled, "Maan kabhi toh apni zidd chodhiye. Har cheez ka ek samay hota hai. Jaaiye Ram aur Janaki ko bhejiye aur aap apne Dadaji ke saath rahiye!" (Maan for heaven sake stop being stubborn! Everything has its own time. Now go and send Ram and Janaki, you be with your grand father.) Savitri Devi, Janaki and Ram were here at St. Angel's Hospital to take Geet to their hotel as they did not want Geet to stay at her apartment all alone. But after lot of cajoling and Savitri Devi's saying that her Daddu is asking for her Geet said alright she will come after Ayush's last rights. So it was decided that for tonight Ram and Janaki will stay in Geet's apartment.

Next morning it was Ayush's last rites were to be performed by Dr. Nachiket Khanna (Neil) as Ayush considered him as his "Naanu". Against his family's wishes Thakur Amardeep came for Ayush's last rites. Geet just sat caressing Ayush's little hand which she was holding in her hands since his body had arrived. Then panditji came and Raagini and Janaki somehow made her move away from Ayush.



Still there was no tears in her eyes she sat holding his one toy looking into the vacant space. Before Ayush's rites could be started, Detective Peter Jones (FICTITIOUS NAME!) came and wanted to meet Geet, "Mr. Khurana I need to talk to Dr. Anna urgently."

"But she is in too much grief and has not spoken, cried or eaten since she was told of Ayush's demise. Besides Ayush's last rites have to be performed."

"I understand but if we don't talk to her now Mr. Devdutt Bannerjee will be let off."

"Detective ask me whatever you want. I will not let that murderer of my baby and my sister go scott free. Give me a minute." Geet spoke in anger. Suprising everyone present at her change in behaviour.



Geet came back in black trouser suit. Before anyone could say anything she came touched Thakur Amardeep, Savitri Devi, Dr. Neil, Ram, Janaki and Raagini's feet saying, " Mujhe aap sabka aashirwad chahiye ki mai apne bacche ko nyay dila sakun!" (I want all of your blessings so I can get justice for my son!) And left with the Detective. She was brought as a witness to the lowest court (I Don't know the hierachy of US legal system!) The judge asked Geet and she gave same statement she gave Det. Jones. Then Judge asked, "How are you so sure that the little boy was related to Mr. Devdutt Bannerjee?"

"Your Honour now-a-days medical science has advanced and DNA can find anything."

Judge said, "Please extract Mr. Devdutt Bannerjee's blood in my presence as I have strong doubts that accused may change blood sample later." Hence in presence of judge and the whole court Dev's blood was extracted and taken for test. After that Geet requested, "Your Honour can I leave now as my baby's last rites are being withheld by my absence."

"Yes please you are free to leave and please accept court's condolences on your loss."

Geet nodded and left. Geet just reached her apartment and the panditji started performing the rites. "Devaangat atmaa ke pitah?" (Father of the departed soul!)



"Panditji unka che saal pehle swargvaas ho gaya. Inke Nana, Dr. Nachiket Khanna Ayush kaa kriyakaram karenge." (Panditji he passed away 6 years back. Ayush's last right will be done by his grandfather Dr. Nachiket Khanna.) An emotionless and cold Geet spoke. All the rites were done she didn't cry or speak more than necessary. After the rites were done and everyone was leaving, Geet was in a world of her own grief and was mechanically standing and doing "namaste" to the family and friends who attended Ayush's last rites. Savitri Devi, Raagini and Janaki were getting worried by Geet's behaviour as she had not cried or eaten since she was told of Ayush's demise. They called Matron, Rosie Aunty, Armaan, Riddhima and Mary and requested them to somehow make her cry. Maan was standing away watching all that was happening and didn't know how to bring Geet out her grief as he felt partly responsible for Ayush's demise as Dev's bullet was meant for him. Although he wanted to tell the world that Geet is his wife, but he did not know how as this was neither the right time nor the right place.

Thakur Amardeep, Savitri Devi and Ram left for the Hotel after the last rites were over but Maan and Janaki stayed behind. Despite of promising, Geet didn't want to go with Khuranas she wanted to stay in her apartment with her Ayush's memories. Seeing no other way out Raagini and Janaki decided to spend the night with Geet. Neil forcibly made Geet eat something as she had not eaten for more than 24hrs. But as soon as she ate she had to rush to washroom and throw up. Raagini called Riddhima and requested her, "Dr. Riddhima can you please see whats wrong with Anamika?" Riddhima had become friends with Geet after Armaan had told her that Geet was his rakhi sister and was just acting to be his fiancee to make Riddhima jealous and thereby confessing her love. Riddhima examined Geet and said, "Ma'am Anamika seems to..." then seeing men and many strangers still present she said, "Ma'am it seems Anna's blood sugar and BP is low due to stress and not having had any nourishment for 24hrs. I think we should start with giving her orange juice."


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