MADHURVAANI: EK VARDAAN YAA ABHISHAAP?*Upd.Pg.122 *05/06/17 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
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darji calling for guddo
maan nor vicky knew who is guddo
but sd knew n told about guddo to neil
geet was called back to work
maan trying to get close to geet
n she gave a gud advice
n whatever she told about him
means sd n vicky too will be sure its geet
nice part
i really loved geet shoing maans place
gud jawab
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Is ayush geet's little sis son? Is geet really a widow? Awesome part. Lots of question in mind. Maan behaviour doest suit his image😆. Loved it
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Wow awesome update yaar

Very interesting
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Fantastic update
Love it each part
Ayush so cute kid learning Punjab
Poor Geet heard speech problem
Good now Geet so confident inpended woman
Is ayush maan another mystery to be solved
Wonder will Geet accept the case
Super Geet stand to maan give piece mind
So dadima & vicky were listening their conversation
Pls do cont soon
Thanks dear
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Thanks for pm dear

Waiting for next
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Amazing update dear, loved it
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Geet is strong now
she needed to run away to gain herself back
to much of love sometime suffocates u
u also need bitter medicines in life to be strong
MSK will face d burns of his past
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CHAPTER 5

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!



PLEASE READ CS OF GEET BEFORE READING NEXT UPDATE!



Location : ICU at St. Angels Hospital, New York, 10:15am

Maan nodded and left whereas Dr. Neil and Dr. Anna entered the ICU softly. But it seemed that Thakur Amardeep was waiting for her and immediately opened his eyes and said in a husky and hoarse voice,"Meri Guddo aa gayee?"(My Guddo has come?)
Getting no response he again said, "Guddo apne Daddu ko maaf nahi karegi?" (Guddo will not forgive her Daddu?).

Savitri Devi had just entered ICU alone, when she saw her husband asking for forgiveness from Guddo. Seeing Savitri Devi, Dr. Neil wished her and left giving privacy to the family. Here hearing word "Daddu", Anna could not control herself and rushed to Thakur Amardeep's bed with tears streaming down her eyes.


"Daddu aap bahut bure ho aapne apna promise poora nahi kiya." (Daddu you are very bad. You didn't fulfill your promise.) Anna complained like a child.

"Kya?" (What?)

"Aapne mujhse vaada kiya tha ki aap apni sehat kaa aur meri Dadi kaa dhyaan rakhenge magar aapne apne dono vaade tod diye!"(You promised me that you will look after your health and Dadi but you broke both your promises.)

"Guddo tere bina mai kaise theek rehta baccha. Maan aur tu dono hi toh meri jaan hain." (Guddo, without you, how will I be well? Maan and you, both are my life.)
Unable to control herself anymore, Savitri Devi went and took Anna in her embrace with tears of joy flowing from her eyes, "Guddo!"
Thakur Amardeep and Thakurain Savitri Devi finally found peace with having "Guddo" in their embrace. After sometime Savitri Devi said, "Guddo, abb wapis ghar chal beta! Bhaisaheb aur Jassi ka tere aur Rajji ke bina bura haal hai."(Guddo, please come back home as Lalaji and Jassi are in a very bad state with you and Rajji.)

Hearing "ghar" Guddo stiffened and put her Daddu and Dadi's hand on her head and said,"Daddu aur Dadi, aap dono meri kasam khaaiye ki aap kissi ko bhi nahi, Daarji aur Beeji ko bhi nahin battaenge ki Rajji aur mai kahaan hoon. Khaiye meri kasam!" (Daddu and Dadi, promise me that you will not tell anyone where Rajji and I am. Promise me!)
Shocked Thakur Amardeep and Thakurain Savitri Devi relunctantly agreed. But Thakur Amardeep questioned, "Kyun beta? Teri ghar lautne mein majboori kya hai?"(Why dear? What is your problem? Why can't you return home?)

"Daddu, Abb sab kuch badal gaya hai in saath saalon mein. Abb mai woh Guddo nahi hoon jisse aap aakhiri baar saath saal pehale mile the. Woh toh ussi din mar gayi thee saath saal pehle aur uska kriyakaram bhi ho chuka. Aap ke saamne jo khadhi hai, uska naam hai Dr. Anamika Singh. Woh ek US citizen hai aur ek bacche ki maa bhi." (Daddu! Everything has changed in these past seven years. That Guddo is no longer alive whom you last met 7 years back. She died that day 7years back and her last rites were also performed. The person standing before you is Dr. Anamika Singh. She is an US citizen and a mother of a child.)

"KYA? TU NE SHAADI KAR LI? KISSE SE? Tera pati abb kahaan hai?" (What? You are married? To whom? Where is your husband?)

"Mere pati abb iss duniya mei nahi. Woh Ayush ke janam se pehle hi guzar gaye." (My husband passed away before Ayush's birth.) Thakur Amardeep and Thakurain Savitri Devi were too shocked to react. Just then ICU nurse came and said, "Doctor you have a call from home. Ayush wants to talk to you."

"Thank you sister. I'm coming!" Anna got up from near Thakur Amardeep's bed wiping her eyes and left.
Both Thakur Amardeep and Savitri Devi were still in a state of shock when Maan along with Dr. Neil and Matron entered. Seeing Thakur Amardeep awake and relaxed, Dr. Neil told the Matron, "Matron please shift Thakur Amardeep Singh Khurana to the Presidential Suite as his parameters are normal now."Making whole Khurana family relax.

ONE HOUR LATER

Location : Presidential Suite at St. Angels Hospital, New York
After nearly one and a half day Thakur Amardeep and Savitri Devi were alone. Maan and Vicky had gone to freshen up and get Dadimaa's belongings. When Savitri Devi said to her husband, "Suniye phir saat saal pehle kaa kissa dohranewala hai!" (Listen, soon the incident which happened 7yrs. back will be repeated!)

"Kya matlab hai tumhara?" (What do you mean?)
Savitri Devi narrated what she had seen outside the ICU few hours back. Thakur Amardeep suddenly became quite and serious and said, "NAHI! KABHI NAHI! Jo humne galati saat saal pehle ki thee woh mai abb dobara dohrane nahi doonga. Maan ke kaaran meri hasti khelti Guddo ek kaam karnewali machine ke siwaiye aur kuch bhi nahi rahi. Uska bholapaan, uska sharmilapan aur uska bachpana sab Maan ne cheen liya usse. Aur abb apne dukh aur akelaapan ko chupaane ke liye usne ek baccha bhi godh le leeya. Kyunki mai jaanta hoon ki swaiccha se (her own free will) toh MAAN KE SIWAIYE KISSE AUR KO WOH APNE KO CHOONE NAHI DE SAKTI. Haan agar kissi ne zabardasti ki ho toh baat alag hai!" (NO! NEVER! The blunder we made 7yrs. back, I will not let it be repeated. Due to Maan my carefree and full of life Guddo has become nonstop working robot. Her naivity, simplicity, her shyness and her childlike innocence has all been trampled upon by Maan. To hide her loneliness and pain, she even adopted a child. Because I know that she WILL NEVER LET ANY MAN TOUCH HER EXCEPT MAAN. Off course if she was forced, then its different!)

"Toh abb battaiye, hum kya karen?" (So, what should we do now?)

"Abhi toh kuch nahi jab tak Maan iss baare mein baat nahi karta." (Nothing, not till Maan talks about it.)

"Magar Guddo ki sagai ek Dr. Armaan Malik se ho gayi hai!" (But Guddo is engaged to someone called Dr. Armaan Malik.) Savitri Devi said worried.

"Sagai hi toh hui hai, shaadi thodi hi!"(Only engaged not married!)
Just then Maan and Vicky arrived with their belongings thereby stopping the private conversation between husband and wife. Savitri Devi went to freshen up. When she returned after freshening up she felt more relaxed. Seeing her husband looking relaxed and better she asked Thakur Amardeep, "Aapko kuch chahiye?" (Do you need anything?)

"Haan aloo ka parantha khoob butter ke saath. Mai yeh beswaad vilayati khaana nahi khaaonga." (Yes "aloo ka parantha"(pancake stuffed with potato) with lot of butter! I will not eat this bland and tasteless food.)

"Aloo ka parantha?" Vicky licked his lips.

"BUTTER?" Maan was horrified.

Savitri Devi was taken aback by her husband's demand and requested, "Suniyeji aap jaldi se theek hokar wapis ghar aa jaayiye mai banna doongi." (Listen, you please get well and return home. I'll make whatever you want.)

"Nahi mujhe sirf "aloo ka parantha" chahiye abhi varna mai bhooka rahongaa."(No I want only aloo ka parantha now or I'll remain hungry!)

"Dadimaa, aap pareshaan matt huye mai doctor ko bulaata hoon." (Dadimaa, you relax I will call the doctor.)

"Theriye Maan. Aap doctor ko bulaane ke bajaaye unse ladh lenge. Humne dekha thaa jiss tahre aap Anamika se pesh aaye the! Aap apne Dadaji ko sambhaliye!"(Wait Maan. Instead of calling the doctor you will fight with them. I have seen the way you behaved with Anamika. You look after your grandfather, I'll call the doctor.) Savitri Deviji left to go and call the doctor.

Once Savitri Devi left, Maan tried reasoning with his grandfather, "Dadaji, dekhiye aap ki abhi tabiyat sambhali hai. Agar aap oily or fattening khaana khaayenge toh wapis beemar padh jaayenge iss liye healthy khaana khaaiye." (Dadaji, listen you have just recovered. If you eat oily or fattening food, you can again get sick. So please eat healthy food.)

"Mujhe bhaashan maat de. Mai tera Dada hoon samjhaa! Mai teri tehara ghass phus aur ubla khaana nahi khaa sakta jisme naa swaad ho naa zaayika." (Don't give me lecture! I'm your grandfather. I can't eat boiled and tasteless food like you, which has neither taste nor flavour!)

"Magar woh khana healthy hota hai aur aapko fit rakhega." (But that food is healthy and will keep you fit.)

"Bharad mei jaaye aisi health aur healthy khaana. Mennu aloo da parantha chahiye, khoob butter naal!" (To hell with health and healthy food. I want only aloo ka parantha now with lots of butter!)

Meanwhile, Savitri Devi was looking outside for doctor when she saw Ananmika with her bags ready to leave for home. Savitri Devi rushed and held her hand and said, "Guddo, accha hua tum mil gayeen. Tere Daddu ne bawal maccha rakha hai. Woh aloo ka parantha khaana chahte hain khoob saare butter ke saath."(Thank God Guddo I found you! Your Daddu is creating a ruckus. He wants aloo parantha with lots of butter!)

"KYA? Aap chaliye mere saath." (WHAT? You come with me.) Guddo held Dadimaa's hand and went towards Presidential Suite.
When Anamika and Savitri Devi reached Presidential Suite, they found the grandfather and grandson arguing in raised voices. Till Anamika had to raise her voice above the heated voices, "YEH KYA HO RAHA HAI?" (WHATS GOING ON HERE?)

"G..."

"Uncleji, yahaan doctor kaun hai?" (Uncle, who is the doctor here?)

"Tum." (You.)

"Aur patient?" (Whose the patient?)

"Mai." (Me.)

"Aur heart attack kisse hua thaa?" (Who had heart attack?)

"Mujhe." (I did.)

"Aur aloo da parantha kisse chahiye?" (Who wants to have aloo parantha?)

"Mennu?" (Me.)

"Kyun?" (Why?)

"Kyunki mennu yeh beswaad vilayati khaana nahi khaana."(Because I can't have this bland and tasteless food.)
Savitri Devi was trying to hide her smile seeing her husband being guilty and sheepish in front of her Guddo which he was never even in front of Maan. Vicky and Maan were staring in shock the way their Dadaji was answering Dr.Anamika's questions like a guilty and naughty student answers an angry teacher.

"Naashte mei aapne kya khaaya?" (What did you have for breakfast?)

"Doctor he had two dry toast and an apple." Vicky replied.

"Hmmm. Uncleji aap aloo ka parantha khoob saare butter ke saath toh nahi khaa sakte hain, magar haan aap ghar ki banni khitchri, dahi aur nimboo ke achaar ke saath khaa sakte hai. Aap ko manzoor hai?" (Hmmm. Uncle you cannot have aloo parantha with lots of butter! But you can have homemade khitchri (pressure cooked dal and rice mixture with very little fat and spices) with yogurt and lemon pickle. Are you agreeable?)
Surprising Savitri Devi, Maan and Vicky.

Thakur Amardeep grudgingly agreed, "Agar ghar ki banni ho toh...Haan!" (If its homemade...Yes!)

"Theek hai toh aaj dopahar ke khaane mein aapko ghar ki bani khitchri milegi dahi aur nimboo ke achaar ke saath. Abb mai chalti hoon!" (Fine. So for today's lunch you will have homemade khitchri with yogurt and lemon pickle. Now I shall leave!)

Anamika left the suite. Savitri Devi followed her saying,"Beta, tum jug, jug jio! Mai dil se tumhei aashirwaad deti hoon ki tumhara jeevan khushiyon bhar jaaye!" (Blessing! I bless you from my heart that your life is full of happiness.)
Anamika was about to answer when she saw Maan at suite door. Hence, she said, "Auntyji, I was just doing my duty!" Savitri Devi understood that Maan or Vicky has followed her out for Guddo to give an emotionless and professional answer. Then Anamika left for home.



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Chapter 6


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!

Location : Presidential Suite St. Angels Hospital, New York, 01:30pm
Thakur Amardeep and Savitri Devi were alone in the Presidential Suite when there was a knock. Maan was in the suite's washroom and Vicky had gone to cafeteria for having lunch. When Savitri Devi opened the door there was a trainee nurse, Nancy with two lunch boxes. Nancy explained to Savitri Devi, "Ma'am this lunch box is for your husband, Mr. Khurana." Handing Savitri Devi one lunch box. Just then Maan came and Nancy gave the other lunch box to him saying, "Sir, this lunch box is for rest of the family."

"Who sent this lunch?"

"Dr. Anna."

"Savitri mera khaana laao mujhe bhook lagi hai." (Savitri, bring my lunch, I'm hungry.)Thakur Amardeep asked impatiently.



"Where is Dr. Anna?" Maan asked.

"She is busy with a patient. Bon appetite!" Nancy left.

Vicky returned back from cafeteria unhappy but his eyes gleamed seeing Indian homemade food. As he did not like any meals or snacks available in hospital's cafeteria downstairs. Thakur Amardeep finally relaxed after having his khitchri and said in a hushed voice to his wife, "Aaj bade dino baad apni Guddo ke haath ka khaana khaaya hai. Abb mai chain ki need soonga." (Today after very long, I have eaten food made by my Guddo. Now I will sleep peacefully.) Savitri Devi gave a relaxed and understanding smile. Then in a louder voice he asked "Tum logon ke liye khaane mein kya hai?" (What does your lunch contain?)

"Channe ki daal, mixed subazi aur chaawal. Mazaa aa gaya." (Chick pea dal, mixed vegetable and rice.) Vicky said and started serving himself.







"Maan, tu jaa tujhe toh neeche cafeteria mei tere pasand ka khaana mil jaayega." (Maan, you go and have food at the downstairs cafeteria as you will get there food of your liking.)

"Nahi aaj mai bhi yahi khaaonga!" (No, even I'll eat this.) Maan said stubbornly. Khurana family sat down and had their lunch with relish.

After two hours, Dr. Neil came for rounds. He saw that Thakur Amardeep is sleeping peacefully so just gently examined him and was about to leave when Savitri Devi stopped him saying, "Nachiket beta abb Thakur saab kaise hain?" (Doctor how is my husband?)

"Ma'am, Thakur Amardeep is much better than before and his parameters are stabilizing. Toh agar sab theek raha toh kal tak inhei discharge kar sakte hain." (So if everything remains alright, we can discharge him tomorrow!)

"Doctor, where is Dr. Anna she has not come since morning?"
"Mr. Khurana, didn't Nurse Nancy tell you that Anna is busy with her son. Her son, Ayush is down with flu and high fever so she is with him. I myself was surprised today because Ayush never calls Anna during working hours whereas today he called her thrice!"

"I would like to visit Ayush. Where is Anna's home?" Maan requested.

"But Anna and Ayush are here in hospital."

"Kya hum unse mil sakte hain? (Can I meet them?) Savitri Devi insisted.

"I would advice against anyone of you meeting Anna as Ayush is with her. Hence, Ayush's infection can be carried to Thakur Amardeep. He is at recovering phase just now and hence his immunity is very low so its better not to have any infection near him."

It was dinner time and Thakur Amardeep was served dal and rice much to everyone's surprise. When Maan asked the man serving who got Indian food for his grandfather? The man said it was organised by Dr. Armaan Malik and left.

Location: Anamika's apartment in New York City ,10:00pm
After sending dinner for Daddu and Dadi with Armaan, Anna had a light meal and sat down to write her diary. Her diary which was her companion and her family in her loneliness for past 7 years. Ayush had gone to sleep immediately after returning home due to medicines being given to him intravenously, leaving Anna's thoughts to wander to her past---------

SEVEN YEARS AGO
Geet was returning home after a year as today was her last paper of the boards. She had already given her Medical entrance exam and was waiting for results. Hence, she was free for sometime and tonight she had planned to enjoy Handa Hotel's inaugration where she will meet her Daddu and Dadi with their whole family. Although Daddu and Dadi were her Daarji and Beeji's close friends but she loved them even more than her own Daarji and Beeji. She had met Daddu and Dadi everytime when they came to meet Daarji and Beeji but she had never met their family. She had however met Ram Uncle (Daddu's son) last year. As soon as she had met Ram uncle she felt like she is meeting her father Mohinder and started crying. Seeing her upset Ram at once said, "Aaj se tum mujhe apna Papa samjho beta. Janaki aur meri bhi koi beti nahi hai. Maan aur Vicky mujhe "Dad" bulaate hain, tum bhi wahi bulao." (From today you consider me as your father. Janaki and I don't have any daughters. Maan and Vicky call me "Dad" so can you.)

"Kya mai aapko "Papa" bula sakti hoon?" (Can I call you "Papa")?

"Haan beta!" (Sure my child!)

Soon her train reached Amritsar and she got down from the train and was waiting for one of her brothers but usually it was Lucky. She was used to waiting as her Lucky Veerji was always late in coming. But she never mentioned to her Daarji, Beeji, Rudra Veerji or Abhi Veerji because she knew if she did they would all grill her Lucky Veerji without mercy! After an hour Lucky came flustered and looking scared. Geet was enjoying his misery from where she was waiting. Just then he got a call on his phone, before he could express his panic to Daarji or Beeji, Geet stood in front of Lucky."Daarji Gudiya mil gayi, mera matlab uski train aa gayi hai." (Daarji, I have found Gudiya, I mean her train has just arrived.)

Daarji yelled on Lucky from phone,"Oye Lucky, kya tu ne meri Geetu ko phirse gumma diya hai?" (Oh Lucky, have you again lost my Geetu?)

"Nahi Daarji, Gudiya yaheen hai. Leejiye uss se baat kar leejiye!" (No Daarji, Geet is here. Please talk.) Sheepish Lucky said handing Geet the phone.

"MAAA!"Ayush's voice broke Anamika's reverie."Maaa! Mennu sar dard kar raha si aur gale mein bhi dukhta hai." (Maa, my head and throat are paining.)

"Mera beta, garam garam soup piyegaa toh bilkul theek ho jaayegaa." (My son will drink hot-hot soup and will be alright.)

"Soup? Tamatar kaa?" (Tomato soup?)

"Haan tumhara favourite!" (Yes your favourite!)
Dr. Anamika Singh is none other than Geet Handa. The same Geet, whom Maan rejected due to her voice impairment!

Next day was Ayush's exam but Geet was in two minds whether to send him or no? But when she went to wake him she saw he was still burning with fever. She called Armaan as he was Ayush's pediatrician. Armaan forbade Ayush to go anywhere and rest at home. Next Geet called Ayush's school and said he can't attend school for few days and will have to be excused from his exams. That whole day she stayed at home, but sent light lunch and dinner for her Daddu and Dadi. She also spoke on Presidential Suite landline to know about her Daddu's health. In all this the most frustrated person was Maan who didn't even get a glimpse of HIS ANAMIKA whole of today!


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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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Dear Friends,

HAPPY DURGA ASHTAMI!

I have given douple updates as I don't know if I can give anymore updates before Deepavali (Diwali). If I can I definitely try and give you all an update!
LM



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