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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3 lovely update maan was all well and fine and decided to leave geet didn't want to meet him as he didn't remember her and she can't say goodbye to him it's too difficult for her brij believed when geet told he was her lover from past but he couldn't do much for his princess here maan was juggling with his own feelings for geet he wanted to sculpture a smiling and happy geet but all he could capture was sad geet he didn't want to part away from statue that depicted his failure but still tried to capture a happy geet geets dad arrange for maan scholarship and also employed maan as geets arts teacher he came extremely close to make geet lost in him geet was only staring at his lips she longed to kiss him but maan seems unaffected but not for long as both end up kissing each other geet determined to make him remember her as he never gave up on her what great parents geet have they are bothered any sex talk but not any maan being in same room with her maan
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4 lovely update maan again gave pain to geet he likes naintara ewww and poor geet Help him wooing her brij tells geet to make maan realize what he lost maan realized he is missing something he likes naintara yet something is not right maan was missing geet he saw her and was so happy and mesmerized by her beauty he again got lost in her and feelings he had for her submerged but the moment ruined as naintara came in-between telling how maan had proposed to him geet again lost him and left maan again suppress his feelings thinking it's right thing to do though his heart contradict his feelings despite all the pain geet endured she still loves maan even though he is with naintara she loves him so does brij he like a son to him but when maan comes to brij had fund his scholarship he was hurt but brij made him understand he got scholarship coz he earned with his hard work maan wanted brij not to help him he will get his scholarship for London on his own geet wanted to go with him she even decided to let go of her dreams of becoming a sculpture
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5 lovely update brij was dreading the day geet would go with maan he loves his princess too much but he knows she loves maan slot so he decided to let her go but it couldn't happen as geet didn't get the admission geet now dreading that maan will never be hers but geet broke more when she heard maan getting engaged to naintara geet couldn't take it and left so maan thinks geet is his sister and that's why he always kept himself away from her not knowing the actual truth but nakul and Sam met him and have him something so that he can make s right decision brij confronted angad and comes to know maan is their lost son
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update naintara confronted maan he confessed he loves geet but geet is his sister but when he saw locket he remembered everything geet was there in the plane both fights when maan finally confessed and geet accepted him all teasing brij seeing his princess kiss maan brij tells maan that geet isn't his sister but he belongs to his first wife whom died giving him birth and angad lied to maan as he wanted to get rid of him like he did when maan was born brij bought km where geet had panic attacks but maaneet reminiscing their time together how they fought made up and came close to each other and found heaven in each other arms
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing, lovely,emotional n wonderful updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Even after they got their happily ever after i couldn't move ahead from feeling geet's pain..
Sangeeta for that u deserve the best appreciation or applauds any writer would get👏

and thank god geets dad wasnt a negative character😆
i would have literally gone mad

maan loved her!
that came as a shock than a surprise 😛

sad that u have ended it so quickly

but geet's dad loved his daughter so much... poor him and i doubted his intentions...

and niantara's tho i feel sorry she couldn't get her first love

but geetu kabhi kabar ek os tho likh hi do i dont want to loose such a good writer

abhi itni sare writers ko gayab hote dekha hai... i couldn't say this to any one..

i really love ur stories❤️

agar ho sake tho
do keep writing😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3 - Epilogue


Geet remembered her past life and her love for Maan was still intact and maybe even more now it saddened her that he did not remember her and when he was all healed and ready to leave her house her father knew she was hiding from Maan her love been so deep could not come before him knowing that he treats her as a stranger .
her father knew her love for Maan and always encouraged her kept her spirits high while Maan tried his best to carve a smiling Geet but failed everytime
Brij got a scholarship awarded to Maan so he could study in Geet's school and eventually they became friends , Maan knew Geet had fallen in love with him he could see her eyes he too always would only think about Geet intimately until one day Angad Geet's uncle showed Maan proof that he is Geet's brother and this fact made Maan distance himself from Geet even more while she kept faith and still loving him he decided to seek Geet's help in getting Naintara as his girlfriend and later they also got engaged but he never loved Naintara though he never used her he knew she was a kind person and also loved him but I guess he was already deeply connected to Geet and even then knowing its his sister he still loved her kept it hidden until Naintara herself asked Maan and he had to confess

Brij in the meanwhile ransaked Angad's room and got the proof that Maan is his son but he and Geet are not related by blood
both Brij and Annie were happy that finally they got their lost son back and maybe that's also a reason why Brij was so attracted to Maan and Maan unknowingly calling him papa as a sign of respect but it turned out to be his papa .
Sam and Nakul giving Maan the locket and that's when he started remembering his past life his love for Geet and when he wants to leave only to find the very girl and her family before him Maan wastes no time in confessing his love to Geet .

Geet again in the basement and that very fear again arouses in her but surprisingly Maan was there and its ironic too the place that gave them hell was the very place they loved each other and now Maan tells her its their heaven its a start to their new life

A beautiful story , sad that its ended
and even more sadder that you will not be writing any more

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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it yr
maan loved her but because angad ne usse yeh bataya that brij is his father he moved away
but till the end he only loved her nd thank god he remember everything by the ring nakul nd sam gave them so nakul nd sam r alive this is what we called destiny jo apko sath le hi ati hai
geet always try to get maan in different way
I love the brij the way he supported his daughter in every phase every time when ever she needed him even maan he loved maan so much even though he dnt know that he is his son
happy for naintara that she fall in love with dev
nd maan shifting to geet university so that they can be together
yr I just love the way you write this as its not easy to write this kind of story
applaud to u for writing this
nd really thanks that u updated all part
I feel sad that u finished it soon but its ok
I loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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fab updates! well written, thanks 4 da pm. brij was very supportive! Dev n NT together! Maan moved 2 b near Geet!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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when maan went poor geet said her maan is in her heart touching her heart.lovely.brij is so nice 2 give him scholarship.loved maan's suprising reentry as geet's teacher.he is a potter.wow.i loved geet's feeling that destiny brought him back 2 her n so she needs him.geet trying 2 kiss was so sweet.again the moment of the fear of losing maan came.sad

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