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deep002

@deep002

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Amazing update dear, maan save geet from dev , eagerly waiting for next update

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

How cheap is this dev. Thankfully maan arrived on time and saved geet. Disgusting dev is married man and still looking for another girl.maan seems nice and also educated.waiting for next dear.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written! Geet waiting 4 Sapna! Dev after Geet! Maan saves Geet! update soon

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

nice ud

spna try to make geet understand that let go of hr fear it may trouble hr in future

geet was reliefs as dhe knows they going back

sapna lrft geet fr sometime in park and main time dev came

and try to force him self maan also was their listening sone one weeping sound he went to see and found dev forcing him self to girl he saved geet from him

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

lovely upadet geet is sacred of men fo some reason sapna wants her to come out of her fear as someday she will get married and then how will she deal with geet promise to try here both were out for lunch where sapna went to take her purse dev seeing geet alone tried to force himself on her when maan saved her dev is arried and lusts after geet

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Starting is so beautiful not happy walli but curious walli. I love this type of concept. Even I asked not to think about others . Just do what ever u want. Write how much u want.

How disgusting Geet Brother n SIL are. If she is getting married . Defiantly his wish was also involved. Hiis parents was against his marriage. What is this poor girl's fault ?

She is just 17 at the moment. Not clear yet with whom she is gonna get married .Agar guma fira k twist be hua I mean kissi aur se bhi uski shaddi fix hai , per at last Maan ll marry here. Circumstances may be any Geet Maan ki hai.😆 .Sonia ko patta hai...But he is already 30 .

He is an ordinary man. Love to c how this relation gonna bloom. First age gap the life style . Ya she is from middle class family ( as I think) , but from city. How she ll cope up things.

As story says she ll be in village but at the moment it is not sure her marriage is fixed by her bro n SIL

Aur yeh Dev b****d yeh nahi sudhar sakta...Patta nahi kya kya karga Geet ko dukhi karne k liye.. Per MSK hai na...No worries..

Loved it ..loved it ...not uper uper se , dil se bol rahi hu.. Itna labhi comment main de nahi sakti. Purri ki purri summery likh daali . Dekho just for two parts. So don think for others..Carry on with such a fresh Idea...

And also for both two parts

Edited by Sonia.KN - 8 years ago

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

amazing update... maan saved geet from getting forced by dev... dev is already married... waiting for next...

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Amazing update. Dev is such a shameless creature that even being married he tried to force a girl. Thank god maan saved her. She is so much scared. Waiting to see what happens next . Thanks for the pm.