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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

Next day geet and neha were literally running towards their class as yet again get eyes fell on the notice board ,but she shugged her thoughts and went to attend her classes,the day turned into noon as its lunch break neha bugged geet to join in canteen but geet was more interested to collect the books regarding the topic they discussed in class,so geet with much coaxing sent neha to order lunch for both,as she will collect few books,reluctantly neha went leaving geet,it took a while for geet to reach library as she was new,the place held a deserted look yet there was the middle aged lady who was arranging few books in counter,geet went to her and asked where she can find the books,the lady showed geet the way,it took geet almost 20 min to select the required book she was about to move when she bumped in to the wood which was from other stand making geet to balance herself on shelf getting the shelf to shake ,few books along with geet ones had fallen out,geet securely placed her books out of messed ones but she failed to realise she carried a extra book in the collection she took,before the lady could see the mess of books geet arranged them and went to her,to get issue for her books.

The elder lady who was in hurry to have her lunch cursed geet for her tymimg when geet came with books,she made the entry without getting much details none paid attention to the excess book as both were in hurry,as geet knew neha will literally eat her for delay,while the lady interested in her lunch.geet exited the place keeping books in her bag she made her way to canteen where neha was cribbing .soon both had their lunch and rest of the day went in a blink,as they reached the room both decided to roam for sometym and get well with thw place ,they roamed in garden made few frnds who were in nexr rooms after taking dinner both were back to hit the bed,as soon as neha entered the room she threw herself on her but seeing geet talking her seat she questioned geet.

Neha:I am tired and sleepy,aren't u going to sleep geet???

geet:no,neha I am not sleepy.just going to check few topics.

Neha:hmm ok,I am off good night saying she covered herself fully to prevent the light disturbing her.

Geet took her books out from bag and went through them,she made few points and marked the thing which she had to clear from professor,it was about an hour when geet closed her books and decided to slepp,she was arranging her books when she found a diary likie book in her books,first she thought mayb its neha's,curiosity took better out of her and she decided to check it,she just opened a random page and the poem attracted her much

Time spent in nature

Is time spent realizing

That you don't know at all

And that never will...

(credit goole for poems)

Geet was soo touched with the poem and sure this was not nehas as she knew neha writing,the writing were elegant and perfect with stokres were neha will write worstly then a doctor prescription,she decided to read more

Once in a while,if u r feeling blue,

When troubles seem to keep coming along,

If you will take the tym to listen to the music

If u can lift your spirits on the wings of the song...

She don't know how much tym she spemd in reading each page there were hardly few entries yet they made her to crave more,the way nature was described in each poem clearly says the person was a nature laoves,be it about oceans r wind r earthr sky the person gave beautiful feel with the words.she moved on to next page but found few pages were torn,she was disappointed finding no more entries,she raked her brain from where this book landed with her,on thiking she finally reached to conclusion mayb the diary came to her from library ,so she decided to keep it on the lady desl tmrw if someone ask for the diary the lady can give it back,much relaxed with the theory geet was about to keep in bag but a idea struck her brain ,smiling brightly she opened the last page ,she was still in thinking process on how to praise the work in that diary when all of a sudden with strong wind the book landed on ground.

Geet was surprised with sudden force of wind she went and closed the window came back to diary she again opened the last page placed her pen there and went to washroom ,geet came back and took her seat on chair but surprised there was no book on table,she was sure she placed it open on table only,she searched on groud whether again it had fallen down but no there was no trace of book on ground,she confusedly checked around but not finding she gave a look in her bag to her surprise the diary was in her bag,she slapped her forehead thinking she kept in bag,she took her pen to write surprisingly every pen was not ready to even write a letter,now geet was getting frustrate with the things around,first the wind then her pens all r making her annoy,she took a pin and punched her finger a drop of blood oozed out she was about to place it on the diary when out of no where a husky voice said

DON'T WRITE THAT'S MINE

Geet was startled with the voice,she gave a look around her but none was there and still her finger was half on its way to touch the book,she took a deep breath thinking she imagined something,she was again going to place the finger on diary again same voice disturbed her

DON'T WRITE

Now geet was sure she heared some one she shakingly stoodup and asked geet:who is it!!??

A moment later she agin heared but the tone was surprised

CAN U HEAR ME...

Geet was terrified now looking at blank space she again asked:who r u???

U REALLY HEAR ME!!???

This tym geet collected her courage and questioned back

Geet:who is that!!??come before me!! Don't try to scare me ok??

SO U REALLY HEAR ME

Geet:I am asking again who is that?show yourself before I shout gathering people!!

U CANT SEE ME,BUT I AM SURPRISED U CAN HEAR ME,PLZZZ HELP ME...

Geet:what r u??why I cant see you?but how can I hear u?

SEE...

Geet:what is there to see,I cant see u remember!?

This tym the voice did sound desperate and aannoyed

OK LISTEN,I WAS A HUMAN TOO,WHO WAS ONCE LIVING BUT NOT NOW.

Geet:once living means ... u r a ghost...!!!!

HMM KIND OF,, NOT TYPICAL GHOST TYPS,ANGEL TYP OK

But once those words registred geet gave herself into darkness,falling clumsily on chair...

Precap:voice:plz,don't faint again,I need your help plz

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update...so Maan is an Angel who was once a human I guess...and moreover he is the writer of those wonderful poems...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update
The angel tried to speak to Geet
Looks like the angel can only see Geet
Would love to see angel and geet's romance!! A soulful love story😆😉

Looks like the poem was written by the angel
Geet under stress lost her consciousness and fainted
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Will be waiting to know how Geet will help the angel
Thank you for the pm!!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Angel speak with Geet
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vishuv

Nice update...so Maan is an Angel who was once a human I guess...and moreover he is the writer of those wonderful poems...

Thanks for the PM!


Hmmm more like ghost type dear...
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Originally posted by: anu5

Lovely update

The angel tried to speak to Geet
Looks like the angel can only see Geet
Would love to see angel and geet's romance!! A soulful love story😆😉

Looks like the poem was written by the angel
Geet under stress lost her consciousness and fainted


Wasn't it a human instinct either to shout r to fall unconscious... 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu5

Will be waiting to know how Geet will help the angel

Thank you for the pm!!😊


Glad u liked it dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear, is that angel is a maan

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