Mg do kinare ya humrahi ..last update,on page 85/27nov - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update! Adi sad as Pinky married! Dev upset as he cannot spend time with Meera! Maan feels guilty n writes a letter to his would be wife! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful part di 👏

Poor Adi 😭 feeling too sad to see pinky married 😲
Geet went to outhouse 😳 Same tym maan came out after freshing up
Awww 😳 Both bumped with each other 😳 their bodiess touch
Both feeling something something 😉 😉
Geet being a practical girl took it normally
But maan so shy shy types 😳
Hehe .. hilarious 😆 miss. Handa is injurious for MSK health 😆
Ab to chaahe kuch b kr looo injurious or not injurious H to tumhaari hone waali 😉
poor boy need to go to gym to control his Kuch Kuch Hota Hai waali feelingsss 😉
In his guilt he wrote every happinings in letter to miss. Abc 😲
Aisaaa kon krtaa h bhlaa 😕 till now Geet not knew about Maan being Mr. Xyz
But for sure with his letter she will defo. Came to know 🤢
Now how this angryyy young girl react 😆 I wonder 😲
Bechaara dev 😆 All becomingg kabaab mein haddi in his romantic kiss session 😆
First ladI hitler kaaa wht the hell 😃 lolll CCTV camera 😆 hihi .. Dev char. Is too much (try to add his more nautankis acc. To ur story😆 that will always be fun to read ) Poor sasha .. need to face all this side effects 😃
Now maan tooo 😆 kabaab mein second haddi 😆
Koi dev to romance krne do 😉
Lol... must awaiting funny scene yet to came when dev came to know abt this virginity test report 😆 how he will react 😛 😲 😉
Hey babajiii mohinder jiii ki ranoji 2 din se missinggg hein 😃 File the Missing person report soon 😆
Edited by Angel.Pooja - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thnkss for PM in advance mahi diduuu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting for nexttt 😛 Jldi se update dena 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
i like the part Maan writing letter to Geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan is writing about his experience with Geet to Geet thinking both are different. Geet will be blown away.
Poor Dev can't even romance his wife.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful and so Fantastic Chapter

So Pinky is already married and she is pregnant while poor Adi seems to be hurt by this and

Geet just don't seem to understand that fact. Geet and Maan bumps into each other and both feel different sensations while he gets guilty that Miss Handa is becoming dangerous for him as he will marry the girl his family has chosen for him so he writes her a letter telling her everything about Miss Geet and he also attaches his report . poor Dev cannot get alone time with Meera and cursing everyone

sorry for been so late in commenting


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Posted: 7 years ago
part 14






Dev reach to clinic he is thinking now at list yaha to koi disturbed nahi karega ...he march to clinic with meera ..he entered in clinic and gasp come out from his mouth there his little bro present there to become kabab main hadi ...he clutch his palm and march to maan and mummer tumko bhi ajj ka hi din mila clinic main aane ke liye ...

Poor maan give him look like main kya kiya why such reaction...

Same time in handa villa mohinder missing geet like anything he feel alone in whole villa .He mummer roabot hi sahi mere aas pass to rehati ..ye silence muje kha raha hai ..pata nahi do dino se meri biwi bhi kaha goom hai where she lost ...

Maan bro ..dev gaze him with more anger ..maan mummer sorry sorry dev wo muje IMP kam tha else I don't have intention to disturbed both of you ...dev took deep breath and closed his eyes he don't want to blast on maan .but a devil smirk appear on face which make scare maan he know dev in and out .

Maan - dev what u up to I am not coming to your trap. And if this regarding to your punishment than forget it .

Dev make face on maan ans and make maan melt maan cannot stand for his sad face they are just like that cannot look each other sad in any manner .maan took breath and say dev do you don't have any camp nearby city ...maan ask with smirk ...poor dev first make face like what are u saying but then ...he almost crush maan in his hug and in excitement he kis* maan on his cheek poor maan push dev aside and make Yuk face he chided Bro what are you doing.

Other side one soul is total confused which is meera who cannot hear talk of maan and dev so getting more and more confused with their behaviour and height is when dev kis* on maan cheek she mummer chi chi ye devji kya kar rahe hai ...

Dev - kya, main cheek pe diya don't react like I k*** on your lips ...maan roll his eyes on dev talk. Bolo why your sudden visit to Hospital...is u ok na dev ask with tens ..maan smile on dev care and say softly me ok dev can we talk in cabin .wo bhabhi ...

Dev turn and once look to meera and give her fly kis* which make her turn in beetroot red poor girl...

Dev - oh oh meera please wait for me in cateen meera tab tak tumra fev mangva lo main maan se baat karke aata hu ...

Poor girl nodded and almost run to canteen side .

Maan - dev bro how could bhbhi fall for u u are so shameless and she is so much shy ..is really you SR ho gayi hai na me quite dough full ...

Dev mouth open in Perfect O shape ...he gritted his teeth and mummer sab ho chukka hai maan ...

Maan -maan make innocent face ya ya than where is my niece...

Dev - I will kill you maan wo jab hona hai ho jaayega some things is not my hand samje .

Maan giggle on dev plight ...

Dev open his cabin door and come inside he don't want to be more teased by maan .

Maan chuckle on dev and entered in cabin ( IN mind maan mummer chalo main to tease kar diya but now I am going to be teased by him)

Dev - so what u brought here in this odd time maan dev ask him..and maan took deep breath .

Maan - she give me her virginity test report to me and she need same from me ...maan say in one breath .

Other side dev who thinks may be he heard wrong ..he make confused face .

Maan - bro apne jo suna wahi sahi hai ...muje meri virginity test deni hai ...

Dev gap him like fool how should he react, thou he want to laugh but this issue is sensitive for maan so he control his laugh and take deep breath ..

He come to maan and seat next to maan . dev say Maan wo he(dev) first time feel lack of word ...dekho aise koi test nahi hoti for man .ab kaise samjau yaar...look koi scientific test nahi hai for this and when she will marry with u na she will get that u are 100 % virgin so don't worry. ..

Maan amaze that dev not made fun on him...bro but what should I reply to her letter ...

Dev took maan hand in his hand and say maan wahi likho jo tumare mann main hai write from your heart jo crystal clear hai . She will trust you.

Maan thanks bro main dar gaya tha that u will make fun of me. ..

Dev cup his face some time muje tumara father come brother come friend behave karna padth hai maan maan get emotional on word father he hug dev and mummer thanks ,promise me never go away from me ..promise

Dev clean maan tear and say look ye promise to nahi kar sakata because muje Hm pe jana hai u need nease na ..with that dev wink to maan which brought smile on maan face.

Dev - now bhago yaha se before I change my mind and start to tease u maan wiase bhi tumne mera romance ka time kharab kar diya now out ...

Maan shook his head on dev that he never ever going to be change .



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Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
part 15

Other side geet who looking to outhouse suddenly start to get pain in her abandonment its unbearable but she is turn stone in every manner her body shaking with pain ...and not a cry or yelp coming out from her mouth .she start to drench in sweat ...no one is around her. Just than maan mother passed from it when dadi say her that geet in OH for office she cannot stop herself to went there geet ke adat hone lagi thi unko...

She come to look for geet and get shock with geet ...situation geet almost going to faint when she run to her side and make steady to geet body ..geet is verge of loose her sense she mummer softly hospital hospital...

Tear start to flow from maan eyes she not expecting that she will look geet like this in so much pain...she imm called out for sham who is always present in OH ...he run to them ..

Maan mother - call dev and say him to send ambulance imm look where is maan fast ...

And when maan stand up to walk out same time dev and maan mobile one from landline and one from mother mobile both bro give confused look and pick the call...

Dev cut he call within few second and took landline phone instructed to staff and within 5 min ambulance standing near OH ...and geet along with nakul and maan mother reach there in 10 min ...where maan along with dev waitng for them on hospital enterence itself dev took charge of strature and ask J doc who is ambulance about ...her BP ...

Junier doc - Doc she is supreesing her cry no one tear fall from her eyes or a cry from mouth .she need cry ye control uska dard /pain bada raha hai doc . dev nooded in yes structure going to ICU area ...maan mother who heard whar Jr. doc say she caressed geet forehead and say ro lo beta ...dard kam hoga but geet she always be like this ..she is not ...crying or yelping

At last dev lost his coolness stop it miss Handa cry it don't increased your pain and our work ...dam don't show us that you are strongest person thoda sa emotions ko show karogi to choti nahi ho jaavogi ...he gritted his teeth he saw so many stun bound patient but she is ...hardest one...

Maan who is another side he turn almost bank what he seeing ..he come out from his daze stage with dev hard voice ...he don't know why but feel so much pain with her stage her pain making him more and more hurt he took geet in his palm...and called miss geet miss geet look at to me ...

Other don't know why but geet feel like this voice for her only which going to earsed her pain ...she somehow look to maan ...

Both eyes meet for while ...ro lo miss geet when we cry we are not weak person but sometime this tear ,emotions make us more strong .trust me u are not weak in any sense ...Women are never weak in any sense u are more strong than us .maan each word make work as medicine of geet wounded heart ye jo loneliness make a deep scare in her heart that heel with maan soft word

Geet found worry and respect for her in his eyes and he speaking with his heart ... tear start to fall from geet eyes ...a painfull moan escape from her mouth ...till than they reach to OT and dev took her inside maan and her mother wait outside maan mother hug maan ..she really scare for geet ..

Maan caressed mother back a nd mummer she will be going to be find mother don't worry ...

Inside before dev start his work he need her medical history ..she got dev thought and slowly mummer called aditya from my phone dev nodded and next is easy for them ...

She have this pain from last 2/3 month for that she show to doc also but no proper ans was coming on her pain

Next two hour dev make all test which he need and ...after 3 hour situation come under control to his ...he took deep breath but ..now big issue standing in front of him..Which going to change maaneet life.

He come out from OT there his family along with one man with chasma who approach to dev first dev guess its must be adi ...he talk with him than dev went to his family who standing with worried face all start to ask so many question ...dev shush them and say cool down u all ... I will say everything but in my cabin .

Maan - is she ok bro wo thik hai na ...

Dev - wo thik hai abhi maan ma ..muje apse baat karni hai did you informed Mr. handa . he ask to them .

Maan no no he have asthma issue we will call them first in our home ya fhir main lane jata hu.

Dev nooded on maan ans and triro entered in dev cabin ...dev make ma seat on chair

Dev - she have small Lumps in the uterus of Women...wait wait ma we have to test it's a normal or may be cancer ...dev stop there and once look to maan and ma ...tear start to flow from ma eyes she not expecting like this to geet .

Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Liked it..
Maybe they will now tell maan who geet is
Update soon next part..

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