MG-SS~ A Babe In The Woods~THREAD~ 9~ UPDATED~Pt-39/Pg-100/ 7th Sep.** - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Donnaa

hi kuhu 🤗
missed you too..
how are you??how was your trip?

HEY DONA 🤗
missed you ?
i am ok
trip was good
how are you ?
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#22
hello di 🤗
how are you ?
missed you ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: kuhu18

HEY DONA 🤗
missed you ?
i am ok
trip was good
how are you ?

m good...just too hot weather 🤢
kab aayi wapas?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Donnaa

m good...just too hot weather 🤢
kab aayi wapas?

weather is really too bad
if its not raining then too hot
i came today afternoon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuhu18

weather is really too bad
if its not raining then too hot
i came today afternoon


seriously nasty weather...
if no rain then hot weather..if little rain then too grrr

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will be back in 10mins
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Originally posted by: Donnaa

will be back in 10mins


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hello friends...

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A Babe In The Woods

( Lots of Thanks and love to Cute-aly for this lovely banner )

Lying here in d dark i keep in thinking ...what mistake i have done .. what is wrong with me ...why i m like this ... cursed ..

Is it a sin .. to love .. to live ..why i m not allowed .. to see even a small happiness .. of my own ...

Lying here .. in dark .. give me light ..give me love ..give me happiness .. O Lord .


*****

Time passes, memories fade, feelings change, people leave, but hearts never forget .

When a day starts none cn predict that how it ended ,, many things cn change in a blink , than a day is much longer ..


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.



Part - 37

Part - 38

He looked around nd saw d adjacent room , went in nd smiled seeing that room which was their(his nd Dev's in their childhood) play room where they kept their toys nd sports things in boxes nd cabinet ,, a small bed was made upon d boxes ,, Maan find that suitable to stay that had a sep exit nd entry door ,but need cleaning ,, Maan opened that nd called his mom to send a servant in GR.

Maan came out , Geet was back in her bed ,, looking lil fresh nd changed ,, her hair wr open ,, she removed her sling nd resting her hand on a pillow ,, Maan gave her rest of meds which she took quietly ,, Geet opened her lappy nd then thought to use her phone for net , but her cable was in her bag which was on sofa away from her ,,she looked at that nd trying to get down from bed .

Maan : now what do u want , that bag ? tell me what do u want from that ?.

Geet: aamm ,need cable to attach phone .

Maan: why ?

Geet: for net .

Maan: wait , i m bringing other device ..plug in ,, use that ,, i m coming in few min, Ok, nd don't move from bed .

Geet only looked at him .

Maan: do u want some tea /coffee after dinner , hhmm ?

Geet was found of tea/black coffee nd wanted to spent some time on net so desired to have black coffee .

Geet : aamm ,, black coffee .

Maan smiled when she wished for BC , at least got something similar ,, i m bringing .

Geet's self thought ... .

Maan went nd Geet thought about him ,, she was watching this Man from many days ,, she saw him most of time ingros in his work nd very less in mingling ppl ,, he never smiled nd always masked an expressionless face ,, his cold behaviour draw an invisible line between him nd d other person ,,none dare to cross that line ,, but Geet sometime replied him back which angerd him ,, he kept quiet bcoz of d purpose of her appointment nd work , but to satisfied his ego he overloaded her with work nd taunted her ,, she witnessed his care for his family nc bcoz of that she had this thought that he was helping nd securing his bro , d money transfer from KC ac to Dev's ac was enough to strengthen her MU ,,she didn't get that Dev nd NT wr settled in Jaipur ,, few realities came in front of her after NT's visit in KC nd now they confessed about their bitter relation with Dev nd NT .

MK's anger for Dev nd NT was quiet possible bcoz he nd d other family members suffered a lot bcoz of that B****** , but why he said that she was not d reason of his pain , where he lost his love bcoz of her ? he wanted to protect her from pain nd further insult ,, why he wanted to stick with this forced relation ,, why he was not thinking to start fresh with his GF or any other good girl of his match ? Why his pure , deep nd selfless eyes always made her restless ,, Why she found them full of emotions when he looked at her ? Why he started smiling around her nd becoming so calm nd composed ,, bearing her harsh words ,, why he wanted to keep her with him or them ? Why he was accepting that painful truth which we both didn't accept from heart that time ? babaji , what is running in his mind ?

Burdened with Qs nd doubts Geet sighed deeply nd got up from bed ,, she was feeling suffocated ,nd came out in corridor to get some fresh cool air ,, d weather was cold but she stood there unaffected .

Maan came with their coffee nd saw her standing in corridor ,, a servant was cleaning d side room ,, Maan checked that nd then came near geet ,, his heart ached seeing her lost nd sad in thoughts .

Maan : Geet what r u doing here in cold , come inside .

Geet sadly: why u r bothering urself , what do want from me MK ?

Maan sadly: i m not bothering Geet ,, u r my responsibility .

Geet faked a smile : responsibility ,, hhuuhh ,, who fulfilled their responsibilities sincerely ? at d name of respon... all played,, again u r putting me in guilt ,, why r u trying to bring back that pain in ur life , in our life? U r free to live ur life like u dream ,plzz go nd get ur life back .

Maan sadly: where i cn go geet ? how it is possible to forget this truth of my life , Our life when we r standing facing each other ? Cn u ?

Geet: what will u get in all these ?

Maan: may be some peace for all nd satisfaction .

Geet sighed sadly : it cn't be possible in this life , i m a curse .

Maan: fine , but i'll trust on ur words when time'll prove it .

Geet looked at him sadly nd Maan passed a confident smile .

Maan: ur these talk become a topic to discuss with tea nd coffee ,,come ur BC is getting cold .

He held her from her shoulders nd brought her in ,, she was looking very sad nd tensed ,, he was spoiling his life again nd this thing was hurting her ,,Maan made her sat in bed nd handed her mug of BC nd then took his , then forwarded a plug in device for net .

Geet : don't u need it ?

Maan: it'll work as wifi nd i'll work here , so no prob for me.

His phone buzzed , maan saw name , his expressions changed at once nd he replied .

Maan: MSK here , any news ?

OS ( other side ): ****

Maan: hhmmm, OK, but i want solid report , find out where r they hiding ?

OS: ****

Maan: i know they r not there .

OS: *****'

Maan: hhmmm,, keep ur eyes at airports nd Toll Tax points .

OS: ****

Maan :Ok , inform me every bit of information .

He cut d call nd find Geet staring at him curious ,, he gave a faint smile knowing that she want to know about them .

Maan: detec.. got info that they went to their home but soon left from there , but don't know where ?

Geet : hhmm,TM i'll talk to IO , he cn sent a team to Jaipur for investigation .

Maan : SU'll contact to d D** of Jaipur ,, that ' ll be a big help to trace them there .

Geet: r they not fetching money from their cards ?

Maan: dad talk to bank mngrs but didn't get any news related to using cards .

Geet;may be they have sufficient cash for few days Or not using their cards bcoz that cn be track easily ,, they r sharp in all these tricks ,, i m helpless right now otherwise i cn ... .

Maan cut her words : r u not trusting my efforts , Geet if u have any other plan u cn share with me , nd one more thing ,i won't let u go there , that cn be risky for u .

Geet: it won't , i want to go to track them personally ,, police will go slow bounded with rules nd legal formalities .

Maan: plzz Geet trust me ,they'll be in our hands very soon , my detc ... r trying hard ,, i myself bring that NT infront of u .

Geet: nd her husband ?

Maan flinched : with him i'll deal in diff way .

Geet: means ?

Maan: that i 'll tell u later , our 1st target is NT ,, she is more dangerous .

Geet; how cn u say that , she cn be a pawn of him .

Maan: no geet , i m watching their activities from last yr , it's she who is play ing ,, he didn't come forward nd talk .

Geet: that i m saying , he is using her .

Maan: nd i thing she is using him , nd if she 'll come in hand then it'll be she who drag him with her.

Geet: hhmm, where r d monitors from this room ?

Maan: one is in Police custody for evidence nd one is in living hall , why?

Geet: wo ,just asking , i set them here nd both had d recording .

Maan: u cn check that TM ,, now u leave this topic nd give some rest to ur mind ,, i too have to finish some of my office work .

Geet: OK , do that ,when i stopped u ? It's u who is not doing his work on time .

Maan teased : when my PS is non operational then how cn my work'll be done on time .

Geet glared at him : PS is not enjoying on any hill station ,she is helpless ,but khadoos bosses always blame their poor employees nd never accept their imperfection .

Maan : what ??? Geet u r calling me khadoos nd imperfect .

Geet: no mr Perfect , i m saying this in a gen ways , do u find it suited for u ?

Maan startled but compose : no, never , MSK is d name of perfection .

Geet mocked : O really ?

Maan with pride : of course , didn't u see that in KC ? nd by d way a good PS has to understand his boss well , but sad , my PS is lacking in that .

Geet teased him: u proved it MK , blaming ur PS , though that poor PS was so hurt nd helpless .

Maan retorted : i m not blaming , but she was all bent to prove me Khadoos nd an angel to her ,, she cn help but i know she won't .

Geet smirked nd thought that he want her help but teasing her nd not requesting her openly .. akdoo .

Geet understood that Maan was avoiding his work bcoz of her nd newly raised prob in family .

Geet : Mr MK , i think u r in work pressure , i m feeling bore here , nd if u find me perfect then i cn help u .

Maan smiled : will u ?

Geet: if u want nd request ?

Maan smiled : u want MSK to req ?

Geet: No , but it's d decent way which suit to perfect ppl.

Maan smiled , nodded his head nd sighed defeated : fine miss perfect , will u plzz help in my work , i have to check mails nd to finish few BP for TM meeting .

Geet too passed a smile : ok , tell me how cn i help u ?

Maan: 2-3 files to check .

Geet: Ok , give me .

They finished their BC ,, Maan start d net nd connected Geet's lappy with that ,, then went to take out his office stuff from his car ,, d extra BG's wr on duty ,, D servant cleaned nd arranged d side room for him ,, he was back with his stuff nd settled in sofa ,, he kept 3 files near Geet on her bed to check ,, he cd do that but deliberately involve Geet to divert her mind nd that worked ,, d atmosphere between them changed nd became congenial ,, Maan felt repture , nd gave a contented look to Geet then started his work ,, there Geet opened a folder nd started checking that ,, Maan was checking a BP nd his eyes went towards Geet who was engrossed in file , a sweet smie spread on his lips ,, his eyes wr adoring d simple beauty of that girl who was an unseprable part of his life but they wr standing opposite to each other on a wrecked base ,, Maan thought how his life had changed in last 2-3 days .

Maan's self thought ...

What was d fault of this innocent girl who is suffering like this in this young age ? Became a scapegoat in d useless fight of others ,, d ppl who wr d root cause of that disaster r enjoying their lives over d wreck lives her nd his ,, all tried to mend d damage , but for them not for her nd him ,, he was lil better than her bcoz he was in his house with d family ,,faced lose but that taught him a big lesson for trusting a selfish person ,, that hard time taught him many things nd made him tough nd rude ,, d financial losses he had recovered , but not d loved ones ,,though her lose didn't affect him much that time , but many times he remembered that dreadful past ,, till now he was unaware that this girl took that dangerous step bcoz of him ,, she felt her a burden on us ,, cause of losing my happiness nd a curse for all ,, she didn't think for her ,but choose d way to punish her culprit alone ,, struggled with her life alone ,, what she didn't have , but living an abandoned life ,, still don't want anything from us but justice for her , which she deserves .

Again she was hurt bcoz of us ,, her anger on us is justified ,, she has reasons to harm us , accuse us nd suspect us ,, no matter what , but she belongs to him.. MSK , how cn he leave her alone after knowing her ,, she deserves to live her life with respect , she deserves justice nd he'll help her in this ,, if she cn think for him nd his happiness then why cn't he ? He won't let her go ,never .

Though Last few days wr very disturbed nd restless , but somewhere gave peace that she was alive ,, her confession that she took that step to make him nd his family free from her burden showed her selflessness ,, still she was distancing bcoz of him ,, this was enough to trust her that she cn't think to harm them ,, she is a girl of pure heart ,, her intentions r clear nd not believe in hiding anything , but don't know when she'll trust him nd his family ?

Her refusals nd indifference hurt him ,, her smiles nd normal talks eased his heart ,, her taunts , anger nd stubbornness irked him but he liked to fight back ,, he felt a mirth of victory when she accepted anything from him ,, she brought a reason in his life ,, her aura spreads positivity in him ,, diverts his mind nd thoughts ... damn Maan

Maan inwardly slapped his head nd squeezed his eyes realizing that he was not doing his work but thinking about Geet ,, she was busy in her work , but he was only staring at her .

Maan murmured : Maan , kya ho gaya tujhe , u r losing ur grip on mind ,, concentrate ,, finish ur work nd don't give her reason to call imperfect .

He took few deep breaths to compose him nd start checking d blue prints ,, he lost d track of time nd when he lifted his head after closing d BP , he find Geet sleeping ,, d files wr kept aside on d bed with her lappy nd phone ,, a smile crept on his lips ,, he got up nd secured all d things , then went to next room .


Precap - some maaneet moments ...


Part - 39


sorry for mistakes ...
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Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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