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Posted: 8 years ago
Geet has fallen in love with Maan before Tara came back to his life
he is the one that wronged Geet yet he has forgotten about it and expects everything to just be rosy between them
Maan needs to take steps forward he needs to understand the pain the insecurity Geet feels all the time
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update, please bring them close now
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
kuch tho akal do iss budhu maan ko pehal tho isse hi karrni padegi
waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
geet kya kar rahi hai...

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Good to see Maan observing the minute things about Geet and paying attention to her. Hope he is able to rectify his mistakes and love her the way she deserves.

Continue soon please.

Edited by Cartoon.Buff - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update thx for Pm sorry for not replying from long time
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Posted: 8 years ago

PART 32

M- Hmm oh? Tum taiyaar ho gai?

G-Haan..chalo

Maan gives her looking nice wali appreciative smile

Geet turns and heads towards the room

Maan also goes after her

M-You look nice

Maan ne compliment kar diya agar Geet ne nahi dekha to

He notices though ki unlike Tara Geet doesn't trust and pose until he compliments her and Geet takes really less amount of time than Tara to get ready

Her lips purse in thin line...

G-Thanks...[a dry one]

To anadar gaye

Maan to besharam, ek haath mein kapde lekaar doosre haath se strip karta hua jaata hai.. bathroom tak.. jaisa poora oom hi bathroom ho

Geet stops near the door

She turned and went...saying...

G-I am going for a small walk

Maan bhi naha dhoke aaya.. saari bottle kholke sunghke dekhi... taiyar ho gaya fir jaldi se bhook lag gai

Geet chup chap hotel ke wahan sidi pe baithke nazara dekh rahi thi, under the sun, apni tanhaiyon mein

She felt so relieved being alone, a time when she could be herself

Maan aaya neeche

M-Tumhe room se kuch lena hai ya chalien?

G-Purse

Geet uthi aur chali gai room mein

M-I'll wait here

Geet aai thodi der baad

Taxi bhi aa gai

Maan leads her out

Baith gaye dono

Geet bahar dekhne lag jaati hai

It's a nice day

All couple hand in hand chatting and all

Maan tells the driver to take them to some nice restaurant

Wo sea side wale caf hota hai

Driver ne utaar diya dur ki yahn se seedha walk and you'll egt ehre in 5-10 minutes

Dono utar gaye

Maan ne bhi dekha ki sab couples chipak kar chal rahe hain, hathon mein haath , ankhon mei ankhein

Geet to chup chap arm cross karke chal rahi hai

Maan bhi pocket mein haath dale chal raha hai

Aise jaa rahe hain jaise ajnabee ho

Restaurant pohonche

Wahan sab greek mei hai

Maan ne poocha ki kya khana hai.. thoda translate kiya ki ye word ye ye hota hai english mein

G-Risotto

Dono ne order kiya aur khaya

Geet has lost her apetite..thoda bohot hi khaya

Maan ne bataya ki yahan yahn yahan ja sakte hain... ye ye ye jagah pass padegi...

Geet ne kaha 'Hmm'

M-Tumne to kuch nahi khaaya... maybe we should go to a hospital instead... pehle bhi tumhari tabiyat kuch theek nahi lag rai thi

G-I am fine...I eat this much only...maybe you don't know

Maan shrugs rolling his eyes...he gets her jibe... and now he deserves her anger

He is trying to woo her and apologize through actions for his behavior

As they reach the beach Geet is walking silently, her eyes turn a little misty and her skin a little pink as she tries to prison her emotions

Ussi moment par Maan ne kaha ki chalo uss boat mein chalte hain

Geet frowned a little as she was back to reality

Maan grabs her hand to direct her walking rapidly towards the port

She rounds her fist to control her emotions and looks at him thinking, probably he doesnt even remember the time he spent with her, probably it's so insignificant

Dono boat ke paas pohonche

Maan ne boat wale se baat ki, fir Geet ka hath pakda hi hua tha all the while; he helped her inside the boat

Geet chup chap side mein baith gai looking outside still in pensive thoughtful mood

Maan bhi bagal mei baitha hai

Boat wala starts gently steering the boat into the river, telling a bit about history of greek pointing out some places...

Kaafi scenic jagah hai

Generally couples ask ki photo khicho to boatwale ne hi pooch liya ki

Sir Mam do you want me to click a picture of you both, you look beautiful together and the background is also splendid'

Geet to bahar dekh rahi thi...apne khayalon mein, apne sapno mein ki kaisa wo imagine karti thi Maan ke saath honeymoon

Maan says ki why not' warna boat wala chup na hota

M -Geet?

No reply from her

M- Geet?

He puts his hand over her hand

G-Haan?

She almost jumped

G-emm..haan..haan...kya? Kuch kaha?

M- Photo?

He asks boatman ki taraf ishaara karte hue

G-Photo? Kiski?

Boatman camera lekar taiyar khada tha, muhh par smile chipkaye

M-...Hamari...

G-Kyun?

M- Achi jagah hai achi photo ayegi...

She was pissed off giving fake smile on her wedding photo

She just shakes her head slightly looking away

G-Meri photo achi nahi aati, tumhe khichwani hai khichwalo

Boatman bak bak kar rah hai khada khada

Maan tells the boatman ki aisi hi kheech lo khinchni hai to but please shut up and give us some privacy, in more polite words

Boatman ne socha kaisi privacy dono chup chap east west dekhte rehte hain

Boatman bhi khinch deta hai 2 photo ek frame mein sirf Maan ek mei sirf Geet...at least it would be better than 1 photo in which both look away from each other

Khincha dono polaroid photo, aur Maan ko de deta hai and starts steering the boat again

Gum phir ke 1 ..1.5 ghanet baad wapas pohonch jaate hain

Maan gets off and offers his hand to help Geet get off

She ignores the hand and gets off holding a pole

Maan boat wale ko thanks kehta hai pay karta hai

Dono uttar ke chalne lagte hai

M- Are you liking the view?

She nods

M-Would you like to see the <he names some place>

She nods

He remembers she loved to travel...but never got the opportunity...to see new places or travel as she never had friends to go with; and she didn't like to go alone; her family didn't invite her on family holidays as everyone thought she is a weirdo

She always dreamt of travelling with Maan...exploring new places

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Posted: 8 years ago
Yeh maan irritating Hai shameless creature

Seriously isko Nazar nahi Aya k she didn't react

What think about her

He will do anything she just accept

Feeling really bad

Geet qkaily this par zinda tho

Yeha toh she died while living with him

Pyar k itni bardi zaza
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Posted: 8 years ago
By the way I am first
Yahooo
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome ud
maan dealing patiently with geet bz he knows he hurts hr
but his this patient's making geet thinks he don't care fr hr

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