Mg ff Marriage match updat part 21 teaser on 134,135- 21 oct

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deep002

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Posted: 9 years ago

#541

Wow superb dear , loved devill geet 😃

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piya27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#542

Wow awesome update yaar

Bechara maan is sooo embarrassed

Geet heard his self talking and was shocked

Maan just can't imagine how much he has hurt geet

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love2_soma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#543

bechara maan...

romantic update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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priyasree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#544

Hi Mahi

Sooo many notes. You are a writer dear, it is simply your imagination and view point .

Please do write as you wish and don't get hurt with criticism.

As a reader I like your stories and am with you.

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swapna.p

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Posted: 9 years ago

#545

awesome and lovely update..
waiting for next update..

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payal.gupta177

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Posted: 9 years ago

#546

Interesting concept. Read all parts in one go. Maan , a woman hater, gets married to Geet who is a dreamer and loves to live in fantasy. But her all dreams got broken in her SR only, with the support of the family she decided to teach her husband the beauty of relationships. Meanwhile Maan gets addicted to Geet's beauty and desires to spend time alone with her. But She sets some rules between them ,the first one itself making Maan difficult to follow but decides to go with it as he starts realising the love he feels for his wife. Beautifully written. Loved it. Waiting for next.

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#547

Congo on the new story nice C's so maan doesn't believe in love he isn't interested in marriage but he still does all elders r really scared of his anger geet sensed their silent war poor thing was waiting for maan has so many hopes and dreams for their first night but maan ruined everything by harshly taking her virginity not caring he ruined a girl first time with her husband

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#548

Lovely update geet was shocked and shattered with maans act she never knew maan could take something so forcefully geet was sad and angry at maan Vicky seeing his bhabhi knew what his bro did he told geet how maan dad was accused of a crime he didn't do as a result their reputation got ruined maans dad tried to commit suicide and lost his voice and maan started to hate woman geets dad did gave her the letter where had maans past which geet lost geet decided to punish maan all elders seeing geets condition decided to talk to her

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ramahesh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#549

very nice part dear
loved it

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#550

Lovely update dadi took geet to her room where her mil took care of her pain soothing her but geet broke down dadi made her understand that she should make maan fall for her and realize his mistake but she didn't have to do much as maan was missing geet he desires her ever since he was inside he started to want her more he chided himself dadi teasing geet who dressed to kill maan openly drooling on geet who was ignoring him