Mg ff Marriage match updat part 21 teaser on 134,135- 21 oct - Page 47

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Posted: 9 years ago
So many notes, don't get hurt. Your story clarified everything. I don't understand what is there that readers are not understanding. You don't bother and keep on giving updates. I am enjoying this story very much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
again with note

yaar main update se jad note write kar rahu hu


god


ok coming to point its a comment i got in pm and i want u all read this

and in red its my explanation for question which is raised and

i want discussion not any fight so ...



yah read it but I am not agree with it...some subjects cannot be explained in funny way as this one...this is very serious subject...raping ur own wife because you think girls are just for physical pleasure is disgusting then how can this subject be narrated in light way...
second thing he knows how to make sex but don't know that girl can feel pain and bleed on her first night...what type of thinking is this...from where he got to know about sex...these things are very natural to understand...and which generation are you talking about...which age Maan belongs...you are saying that sometimes this sex and all are not talked openly in families...of course not but it is talked openly in school and collages between friends...Maan became rude after his family members suffered because of some employee in their office...but before that he was normal happy-go-lucky boy so he must have friends before that incident...he must have went to collage... boys are so open in this subject that may be they don't do real sex before marriage but they know basics of it...

third you are on one hand saying that these things are not openly discussed but his family was ready with oil and medicines for her because they knew that their son will rape this girl...instead of consoling her, treating her after she was abused why didn't they told their son to behave...

father could have told him...she could have died of this shock...instead of throwing her in front of a dangerous rapist they should have secured her...


my answer

point number one rape on own wife

i clear in first part thats not force but sex without any foreplay


seocnd point maan knowladge about women

Maan start to crush himself u r hopeless maan in all sense u want her with yourself ..its attraction but I want to ask her if she ok ,in morning I found blood mark on bed ..I want to ask that only to her ,ye bidding ku ..ho rahi hai ..wo school main kuch sikhaya to tha ...and wo virginity ka bhi I know that but this much bidding ...if she need any doc than... (page number 44)



he know about virginity but his question is so much bleeding


about genration point as i say this concept come in my mind with our last generation where physical is way of making children nothing else ...bas main wahi thinking maan ke chractor main dikha di ...n trust me aise log abhi bhi hai .


as i before mention he cut with all friend and all social things ,he have only two friend on name adi and vicky so there is no question of his discussion with any one dont some person shy (like girl shy)


third point about family

dont we have big person in our family who alwyes put medicin in home
dadi is so good in nature to ye medcin maan ke mummy and chchi ko bhi diya hoga na

they r scaring for maan tough or rude behaviour they dont have no thought na that maan will consummated in first night itself

yes maan family know he is rude to kya wo first night main unke room main camera lga dete and jaise hi maan kuch karata rok late ...how is this possible


thier family thinking for his rude behaviour ... with word ...harsh word but when they saw geet they get thant maan consumented in first night ...jaha maan hona chiye tha support ke liye waha uski family stnad ho gai ( jo meri imagination hai ...as writer )

ku ki in real aisa nahi hota ...in law bol deti what is new in it kya pain na all we alsi face this ...this is fact di

in last u say about family have to say to son about behaviour , ye family itni good hai to wo to past main hua hoga na before marriage maan ko smjaya hoga na family member
jo mere upcoming parts main aane wala tha becuse this story start with marriage day na

about geet father she missed leeter which written by her father ,if she get that latter she will may be refued to marriage na i mention that part in update number 2 or 3



at last i m saying i love to write on real life but poori taraha se real likh dungi to its will so harsh reality that reader dont have ability to digest that ...


and every autor took some freedom to give shape story ...kuch incidence dale jate hai jaha se story ove on hoti hai ...

abhi real main aisa hota to jo father more care for doughter wo shadi hi nahi karwata

and jo father want name BIg name ,money ,business wo by force shadi karwa deta so




so its my last explanation about this story

iske baad bhi if someone not comfortable with


this story ...sorry to say please don't like or

read this story


Mahi ...



this story represent to old generation of our society where i took freedom as writer and give some imaginary part also ...thanks




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Posted: 9 years ago


what hmm tens ho kya

dont be
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm, note n clarifications! will b waiting 4 update! thanks
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Originally posted by: Mahikipari




what hmm tens ho kya

dont be

no more
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Posted: 9 years ago
teaser number one

geet dress for FIRST DATE



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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet in saree maan toh gaya
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi mahi i got ur pm and read all ur notes. I would like to say that the person who pmed u is in her own dreamland and never faced the reality of relations. Or may be she is a blessed child of god who come face to face with such worst reality here only. I wish she would be same. I have read many stories from childhood about physical abuse the females tolrate for the name of marriage n prestige in society. Even in present i have a lady in my contact whose husband beat her to get sexual pleasure now tell from where foreplay come.
so dont bother urself its ur readers right to say what they feel about update. Its just matter of maturity n experience ppl get. I m not a much social person coz i hav to heard such story in murmers wherever i go so i m ok with ur concept n writing way. All the best n be happy so that u can write happy date of maaneet.
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Posted: 9 years ago
TEASER NUMBER 2

MAAN EYES STUCK IN ONE PLACE WHERE GEET CREAMY waist


where that pieceof jewellery making fun on maan



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Hi mahi i got ur pm and read all ur notes. I would like to say that the person who pmed u is in her own dreamland and never faced the reality of relations. Or may be she is a blessed child of god who come face to face with such worst reality here only. I wish she would be same. I have read many stories from childhood about physical abuse the females tolrate for the name of marriage n prestige in society. Even in present i have a lady in my contact whose husband beat her to get sexual pleasure now tell from where foreplay come.




thanks for support dear
u r saying truth there r so many women who face it and suffer it


please go thru teaser also thoda tension ko bhool jate hai 😃

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