Mg ff Marriage match updat part 21 teaser on 134,135- 21 oct

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

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Posted: 9 years ago

#431

Ofcourse msk needed punishment for his fault as he is getting second chance also. Both r faling for each other charm and trying to understand the partner feeling. Beautiful update but short.

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#432

itne saare updates ho bhi gaye new story ke...

abhi to maine first part hi padha hai and after that there is note that this story is not serious one...how much serious a seriousness can be than this yaar...Maan raped her on their first night.,...and it is not serious...it doesn't look like a joke to me yaar...

but anyway going to read other parts...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#433

yaar mahi mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha...

how can it be not rape...

yes she knew it is their SR but did he asked her if she is ready...

if he is husband then you mean to say he has all the rights to get her body any way he likes...

she is in pain, crying and you are saying it is not rape...

and all family members are behaving as if they knew he will rape her and they are ready with her treatment...

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#434

note number 1

i m so tired with giving explanation

dont know why but muje ye alag comment ku mil jaate

did i fail to write perfect yaha ye maan ka action rape

kiase hua hai thou he hurt her big time but

this is mirror of our old society image

did that time anyone giving imp to foreplay and other tings of sex

that time softness with women is crime or weakness of that MAN

that time its only need to giving birth to children and i am want

write on that part ke imagine what will be sexual life of women

but ye point pe to no one is comment ...

but all talking on maan action and family support

kya family member unke room (maaneet ke ) camera lagate kya

what is maan doing with geet

yes they have fear and they clear with her father ( here geet miss latter which written by her father ) konsi family hai jo apne bacho ke liye try nahi karte ki wo achi life jiye yaha

ye family kaise galat ho gai

if geet got that latter before marriage than she will decide na maan ko cahnce dena hai ya nahi

and we all r human not god or robot and everyone make big mistake in thier life which effect other life to hum sab ke sab bahot bade criminal hai kya dont we study with out mistake

ye hisab se to Valmiki rushi (writer of ramyan ) don't have write a holy book like ramayan

because before writing a this book he is big criminal...he murrder so many people

Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#435

note number 2

here i geet fourm more than 90% story maan rape geet and than geet forgvie him waha wo accept ho jata on name of forgivness

than mere hi story main aisa discrimination ku

i try to write on every angel of life meri story life ke fact se related hoti and some time i took some freedom as writer than i am only wrong kya other writer ko ye sawal ku nahi ask hota

i m stong person and i have abiltity to face hardest criticisum but wo fair to ho na

in my first story i write syco dev who get punish from maaneet

in my story Journey ..i wrote about married couple ...happy moment

and same story ke second part main i write about ...maaneet fight because of maan douht on geet

meri ulzhan story its about geet fight for her destiny who become virgin mother because of medical negligence ...

in fate i wrote about a women who push in prostitution job because of fate jaha maan accept her what is she ( that like by all reader )

dhadkan story about a girl who become widow in her marraige day itself

in time pass i write bout maaneet different calss economics difference class main love story jisko koi resopns nahi mila because all need dark stoy jaha maan bahot rich hona chiye

in yodha i write about worrior maan waha bhi my story get rejected which is mile stone of my writing

fight for justice jaha MMS main fasi hui geet ke fight ki story likhi hai main

marriage cry i write about slipt personality waha bhi i face so much criticism jab ke ye bimari hai ( aisa hai jo cure nahi ho sakata )

love story jaha geet mute but fighting girl ki story

bledding heart jaha geet get raped in front of maan ( ye hota nahi kYa )

now humari its baout maaneet struggling actor jaha love tringel hai jaha muje

(11 like and few comment milati hai ) ye story main to rape wagera kuch anhi hai na its love story na than

ye to sirf ff ki baat hai hai

u all can go with my os and ss also every time i try to write diffrent

but never get appreciated ..openly criticism to bahot milata hai

Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#436

note number 3

sorry to writing this but as a write bahot disturbed ho jati hu main

muej criticism bahi pasand hai but its should be fair na

ye kya criticism mahi ke liye and good comment auro ke liye ku

i am that bad writer kya smaje nahi aa raha

some time i feel i stop writing

maaneet and India forum is part of my life but its start hurt me yaar muje apni life ki problem se fight karne ki energy deta jah main sari tension bhool jati hu but now ? can i say same things ...

today i am so much hurt reallly hurt

i always give imp to reader kabhi escuse nahi diya for update itna busy schedule hone ke baad bahi i m fair with reader ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#437

Hi Mahi plz dont be sad i think may be he or she didnt read ur note thats why didnt understand ur words . Maan didnt rape her it was not like geet was not ready for sex yes she was very much but its just happened straight as u say no fore play thats why she is hurt

Edited by Drashtilove - 9 years ago

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#438

note number 4

ye sari note dete hui i am so hurt and sad that today i have to talk like this

but i dont have other option because ye dil main baat reha jati to

i will closed this story like my other two story bleedding heart and love story ...

sorry if my words hurt anyone but today i cannot keep quite

Mahi...

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Hi Mahi plz dont be sad i think may be he or she didnt read ur note or didnt understand ur words . Maan didnt rape her it was not like geet was not ready for sex yes she was very much but its just happened straight as u say no fore play thats why she is hurt

i say same thing its plain sex not any foreplay and all so ye rape kaise ho gaya