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neel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Many aagya waiting for the next update

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 8 years ago

great update

maan scold mini for insulting geet

geet hug n kiss him but maan still not convince that she accepted him as her husband n other side geet happy as maan accept her as wife

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 8 years ago

wow..superb update

love geet

glad that maan showed mini her place

gosh hate her

love maan n geet convo

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tania90

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Posted: 8 years ago

nice updates
maan shouted on micro mini yeh chudail hai sachi geet ko kese attitude show krti hai but geet bhi kam nhi nd maan taking geet side nd geet kissing maan maan is happy but he still feels that geet is sad thats y she hug him
update soon

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

hi thanks 4 da double awesome updates, well written! Geet sweetly addresses Maan! he is stunned! MM interrupts with a spoiled file! Geet apologises 4 this! MM shouts Geet! Maan shuts her up n warns her! he says she has no right n Geet is his wife! Geet happy! Maan cannot see her in tears! Geet kisses his cheek! Maan happy! MM wanted 2 b Mrs MSK! Geet sets her straight! update soon

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sapana

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome update..
pls clear misunderstaning...of maan.
hate this MM..
hope she didn't creat problems..

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vasavi_sri

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome update

Maan and dadima were at geet's side

To defend her from mini even though

She is at fault

Geet hugged him and gave a peck

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sanum23

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Posted: 8 years ago

beautiful updates

loved the way maan blast on mini

geet jealousy justified

mini need to know hr place

but she still flying in illusions

maan still don't realize his wife

liked him

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice updates

Mini insult Geet as she ruined project file

But Maan got angry on her

& said Geet is his wife she can doo what she wanted to do

Geet hug and kiss Maan

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Apart from the different concept

I love geets character in this story... The way she gives names to everyone... And her way of looking at things...

U have shaped her character so well that she has literally got me hooked to this story!!❤️

And maan on the other hand lives with tons of insecurities!!

He is good in his place but i just wish u could give a little more depth to his feelings and emotions too it would help us connect with him more😃

Now that's just my opinion... U can always ignore...😉😳

Dadi is good and MM too...😆

U know the USP of this one is the simplest fact that a small talk between the leads could end the story at any point but yet we expect for more😆😉

Do keep writing

Waiting for the next!

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