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Posted: 9 years ago
Uhm Umh!!!
Tak tak!!! Malkin bai ghar pe hai kya?😆

Hum aivayi forum pe bhatking kar rahe the ki humari nazar iss kahani pe padi. Socha chalo dekhte hai ki akhir humari Rashmi ne likha kya hai.

So I read the prologue. It piqued my curiosity. I was like hmm this sounds good.
Phir first chapter padha. Pata hi ni chala grin karte karte kab chapter khatam ho gaya.
I read about Geet ki Maan ke upar dadagiri and I knew she was my kind of girl😆

Phir dusra chapter padha. Phir unki nok jhok pe has padi. Their growing years were portrayed very simply and beautifully by you I thought. By now I had gotten comfortable with this story and my thinking was complacent. Soch rahi thi ki chalo ab yeh dono kisi tarah dosti pe utar aayenge, phir pyaar ho jayega. I was looking forward to reading that...AND THEN BANG!!!!!

I READ THE THIRD CHAPTER😲😲😲

I was like nah Maan will realize he is in love with her, her will stop it in time...xyz. But she was already married.
I wanted to stop reading... I swear I did...but damn you Hashmi( after the stunt you pulled tumhe Hashmi bulaan jayaz hai) I was already hooked to the story😆


Rashmi you have written something par excellence. I am glad you did not go the usual route. I am hooked line and sinker to Yaariyan and want to see how yo develop it.😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
BTW it was Laxmi's peek-a-boo banner that drew me in😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CuteTommy

Nice part..

Something wrong with dev r her in-laws... She sounds like she is not at all happy..


Hope d family finds out everything soon..

Thanks
what;s happening in geet's life..we will see soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ambbiha

Awesome part. Is this something wrong with dev's character. Is dev already married to someone and geet like surrogate mother. Waiting to read more😉

Hahaha
Keep guessing till the next update comes😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

OMG!!! Ye kya ho gaya????
Geet's parents married her to dev! 😲 and now she's going to be a mother!!!!!! 😲
Maan was super happy ... He's not at all missing her come-on maan thoda toh miss karo geet ko..
I never thought aap itna bada twist leke aaogi dii..
But don't know why i feel that something is wrong with geet..
Continue soon please

Kya hua????
Kuchh bhit o nahin..
geet ki shadi hi to hui aur kya😆😆
tumhen kya laga ? gete or maan having feelings for other..Nah,, they are not even good friends..agar padosi nahin hote to shayad ek dusre ki shakal bhi nahin dekhte😃
Do you think if something is wrong with Geet?
Let's see😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

Great update

Maan feel free after geet leave marrying dev
But geet find low with last call with maan

Thanks aparna😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: metromasti

awesome update . geet got married with some dev & settled in US . she was not so happy with this alliance cos she was not ready to leave her country but agreed cos of her parents . maan was very happy cos his blackmailer is out of his life now . looks like everything is not 100% OK with geet . she didn't came to see her parents once even talked very less on phone . one day she gave the news of her pregnancy , maan talked with her but he realized old geet is missing .
waiting for next

Thanks dear.. if every thing will be ok then how can i bring them close..kuchh to hai na jo perfect nahin hai geet ki life me😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmajain

awesome update
omg geet married to some nri dev
maan happy after geet marriage
but geet is not happy to live her country
omg good news geet becoming mother but is geet happy in married life
maneet become friends
waiting for next

thanks karishma
yes they are friends now..ans we will see how their friendship grows😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Ye twist nahi socha tha🤔

Geet ki shaadi n bachha bhi horaha hai
Geet went abroad after marriage... Maan too happy
Why geet not talking regularly to her parents... Is she fine there... Dev kaisa hai
Finally Maan called geet... Maan calling geet's to be born child his gf😎
Precap...

Hahahaha
pahle hi bola tha
you are going to get a shock here😆😆
will will enter in get's life soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhu..

Nahi...Nahiii...Naahhiii...aapne aisa kyun kiya di

Geet aur Dev ki shaadi ho gayi!!!
And here Maan is happy with it...kya karoon is ladka ka..

Geet is preggy too😲
Woww..Maan ki new Girl Friend😃😆

Something is amiss in Geet's life😒

Eagerly waiting for the next Part di!!

Thanks for the pm😊

maine kahaan kuchh kiya??
mere dimag ne kiya
kya karun
kuchh to difefrence hona chhaiye na meri story me😆😆
aur sir mat todo apna..warna next update kaise padhogi disha😆😆
Off course something is a miss in Geet's life😃

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