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Posted: 8 years ago
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DLS - Part 9 -

Lovley part. Finally pre-marriage rituals started. Geet was performing every ritual lifelessly. She felt all those forcefully.

Adi informed maan that being away from palace will not be safe. So maan instructed to leave asap when marriage finishes.

Maan's pattarani was sad that king getting married once again. But she was happy being first wife of king and can rule over other ranis.

Geet's mother was worried about her future life in new palace.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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DLS - Part 10 -

Lovely part. Maan was impressed with her brain with beauty. He was enchanted with her small smile and so eager to see her face. The fera part was interesting. Maan's last vow surprised all of them that he will give due respect to her thoughts and will respect her suggestions.

Bet he was shocked to listen her last vow that she will fight with him, raise her sword on him if he will follow bad path. All were shocked to hear her last vow and scared how he will react. His men took their sword our but he calmed them all.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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DLS - Part 11 -

Maan was amazed to see her daring and he was full lattu on her. Everyone was glad that maan took it as marriage teasing. Lol...ranima was praying for god with her 31 days fast. Maan put mangalsutra in her neck & varmalion on her head. All very happy to see her nose read with varmalion. So finally marriage is over. All her family & other people gave bidayi to go her husband's house. Raja was worried that they were leaving in the night only.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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why maan got tensed when he read his mother's letter...what was therein.?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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DLS - Part 12 -

Maan was enjoying his riding back to his palace watching her all the time. That was sweet maan taking care of geet, sending lalitha beside her.

His mother savitri devi was angry on ranis that no one could win him till now. She chided all the ranis. She was upset that maan left whole kingdom for that princess. All were talking about geet only. Nobody see her face or heard about her. All were jealous that maan married and left kingdom for that princess. What will be their reaction if they come to know about his last vow..?

Maan decided to sleep and came in geet's doli. He was again mesmrised seeing her milky white body. But glad to know that he had some values to respect woman's wish and not to touch her without her wish.

Oh...his devil wish is to tame her...that will be interesting. Oh...he was praising her beauty and very curious to her face.

So his wish to see her face will be fulfilled.

Waiting for next part now.

Please send password for parts 13 to 16 soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Got confused with two thread of your collection, so posted on both threads.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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please send passwords for parts 13 to 16 as per your convenience
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Mitu
It looks like you have not updated from long time or i missed something
Is this thread youb will be using for new updates or you are moving everything to blog
I love all your work especially Haq, innocent doll and Dulhan. You are awesome writer.
But when you post after long time we have to read again to refresh the memory
I hope you get time from your studies and work for us for giving new updates .

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Di Please Update Your Stories..

Waiting..

Waiting..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Di DLS ka next parts pm kab milega😔

Waiting..

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