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Posted: 8 years ago
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Comment DLS Part 11 and 12😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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DLS Part 13
Intresting and Lovely part..
Maanveer Geetanjali ko niharna ma busy wo vi ek Poetry ki tarha aur nature climate,place sab uska saath de raha hai.. Dhimi dhimi barish aur forest ki beauty sab geetanjali ki beauty ka aga kuch nahi hai and barish ka boonda geetanjali pareshan karta hua finally maanveer na princess ki face dekha and unki toh socha vi kuch pal ka liya stop ho gaya hai aur maanveer khuad hi princess ki har ek facial expression ko dekhna ma busy hai aur princess tired hokar sona ma busy hai maanveer ki koi vi harkat unki need nahi toad paya.. Di prince na princess ki 1st kiss chura lia kya😳.. Maanveer apne aap ko hadh sa jane ko roak leta hai gentleman hai aur wo princess ko unka samna haar mane ya chahta hai par aisa hoga mujha doubt hai😃 lalita ko maanveer na choad dia 1 glare sa yaar aisa kaisa aap dekhoga raja rani ka private moment ko ya galat baat hai na.. Geetanjali ka parrots vi unka saath aye hai and lalita princess ko nature ki beautiful forest ka environment dekhna ko utha rahe hai and princess thoda sleepy hai na and prince durr sa sab dekha rahe hai par kuch plan toh hai unka mind ma.. Sammya ki guptchar na geetanjali ka koi pic nahi la paya hai wo betab hai princess ko dekhna ko jealousy sa kyun maharaja na itna sab sacrifice kia hai geetanjali ka liya..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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DLS Part 14
Awesome part..
Yaar hathi ki karname na dil ki dhadkane teeaj kar dia 😳
Geetanjali apne pets ka saath time spend karna ma busy hai nadiya ka kinnare and maanveer ki hathi unha ghoorna ma busy hai princess ko apne mayka ki hathi sa jaisa pyar karti hai aisa socha kar hathi ko ladu dena chali gayi aur omg ya tho war ki hathi toh attack kar lia thank god maanveer time ma ma bacha lia aur haathi ki mind divert karka usa behosh kar lia hai.. Ek act na hundreds solider ki jaan khatra ma dal dia and maanveer geetanjali sa bahut angry ho gaya hai haan har ek patni ki tarha princess vi apne pati ka liya darr gaya tha jo vi ho hindustani aurat aisi hi hota hai.. Maanveer na apne bhadas nikala geetanjali pa and unho na vi bola wo kyun gayi thi and maanveer unha samjhta hai ki unka haathi ko wo kaisa train karti hai and kyun.. Ya acha hai maanveer apne war ko lekar jo vi sab ki parwa hai naam vi janta hai par ranion ki nahi isiliya toh wo aisa powerfull hai.. Acha hai in chakar ma lalita na morning wali bolna ka irada bhual gayi nahi toh maaneet phir sa fight karta..
Precap ya kta hua kaisa hua 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 11 and 12


sorry to replky lte i was not confused as i hd figured the big palki's as he is a raja he will provide a best palki for his queen... i just love the way you explained... maanveer i think he had already fallen in love the way he told his hearts wish its not that he wants her to relish but he wants her to be flll for him and it will come from passing by time... nice update .,... loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 13 and 14


Amazing really a beautiful update Maanveer i am angry i know he is husband he has his right but doing it when she is sleeping is like ill treatement it would be better if he had dared when she is awake... but never the less it was beautifully explained... Lalita really was in trouble to know...


Lovely scene geetanjli with the animals... elephant was angry and geetanjli was going to hurt herself... but maan saved his anger was justified glad he didnt overdo it... lalita's decision was right... i thought since maan was cruel he will kill this elephant to save but you really showed the kind trait of him which is hidden behind the facade face of cruel...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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commeted on blog part 9 10 of dls dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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DLS Part 15
Intresting part..
Maanveer sa sab darta hai ved ji na aditya ka help sa maan ki treatment kia hai par maan ka liya ya sab mamuli hai and maan ko pain ma dekha kar geetanjali sad hai unki galti ka karan sab ki life par danger aagaya aur wo maan sa milna gaya unka baat na maan kar and maanveer gussa hota hai isha baat pa par geetanjali kuch nahi bolti maan thoda shock hai sherni ki bolti band dekha ka😃 Geetanjali ko maan ka forest dekhna ka order milna ka baad wo apne friends ka saath bath lena river ma jane ka plan karta hai par jo danger hai unha pata nahi.. Maan apne work ka baad new rani ko search karta hai par suddenly chika sunkar unha pata lag gaya geet kisi danger ma hai aur omg crocodile na attack kar lia hai geetanjali pa and maan na bacha lia par blood dekha kar unko laga geet ki leg gaya par thankgod vedji ki baat suan kar thoda relax hai ki unka leg ko kuch nahi hua.. Geetanjali shock ma hai unho na life ma aisa kuch experience nahi kia tha pehla elephant aur ab crocodil ab aur kaun sa danger hai unka life ma.. In sab maaneet hug mil gaya ek..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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DLS Part 16
Beautiful part..
Maanveer ki taunt sa geetanjali angry hai and vedji ko apna kam karna ko bolta hai par medicine sa bahut pain hota hai maan vi tense hai geet ka liya vedji ko koi aur ointment lane ko bolta hai par wound infect naho isiliya wo jaruri hai and maan apne body sa geet ko move nahi karna deta aur baato sa distract kart hai.. Maan apne soldiers ka saath wo place choad deta hai and journey start karta hai par strom heavy rain ka karan move karna vi muskil hai and jisa place ma hai wo bahut hi dangerous hai and aditya ko kuch danger ka pata chala toh sab alert hai maan apne soldiers ko alert rehna ko order dekar khuad alert ma hai and lalita aur geet ya sab 1st time experience kar rahe hai and maan ka behaviour dekha rahe hai uska wins ka karan socha rahe hai.. Ya sound kaisa hai koi trap toh nahi hai na un jungli mens ka inha harm karna ko..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 15 and 16


Geetanjli was worried it is alright and i can understand the guilt always comes first... Maanveer orders her not to roam and she obliged too...
Well anybody will does looks like Maanveer is not a type who will tie her up he after sometime he allwoed to but then also she end up in danger... Crocodile oh god... Really firstly i was also scared your DLS will be coming with new idea and sensitive topic of a handicapped girl... but vedji really brushes the scene and maanveer was relieved... this really shows his caring nature...

Really maanveer was able to dissuades from the medicines... love that scene...

Precap is scary...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm 4 all updates fro DLS...commented on blog! waiting 4 Aadat, Mishty Doll, Innocent Doll, Dulhan, Haq, Waqt 2 and of cos Suniye ji 😃

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