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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 16 - priya was shocked to see geet there. She wanted to slap her but maan stopped her. geet was confused why she was behaving like that.

Oh...she will kill geet again. It means she already killed her earlier. What relation she has with geet. ? Was she her younger sister.?

So priya killed geet, her sister and maan's wife. That's why maan felt so much love for her. What happened to her doesn't she remember anything.? She was confused why maan called her his wife.

Now maan feared that priya will again harm geet. He requested dadi to make geet stay there for her safety.

Part 17 - she was feeling bad that b'coss of her maan was having problem with his wife. She don't want to be reason for breaking their marriage. She wanted to know whole truth but nobody was telling her. all said that maan only can tell her. She tried so many times to reach maan but failed to talk to him. Mansi was missing her dada in midnight. Liked the way she went to her dada. Now geet was determined to get her answers from maan. Who called him.?

Part 18 - geet fainted in over thinking. Maan was like he will loose her again. But soon she got conscious but she was angry and glaring at maan.

Naughty mansi stole laddus of Prasad and ran behind the curtain to eat away.

Geet told in firm voice that she will go home but possessive maan stopeed her by kissing and showing his right on her. she was helpless but what will she do now.?

Part 19 - he too was angry listening to her talk but then he made her understand that if she will go out then priya will kill her. hope that this time geet will listen him and sty at km.

Maan's past was painful. His memory with his mishty were so lovely.

He recalled this memory when his mishty wanted to go for pooja with her jija. That's when the accident happened all three were dead.

Part 20 - so painful past. It was sad to read how he suffered without his mishty and took care of mansi & dadi. His one wrong decision made whole family suffer. Meera was a good change entered as mansi's chichi cum mother.

So he found his geet as per munshi's letter seems geet got saved and asked to him to take care of her. he was in dilemma that this geet is his wife only.

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Part 21 - good that mansi naughtiness was back. She always made run all family members. All were trying her to come out but as soon as she listens her dada voice she automatically comes out from table.

Masni wakes up maan as she was hungry. There geet also comes and smiling seeing both father & daughter. Then she plays with mansi and this time maan admire their bonding. He again recalls how they were happy in the past.

Part 22 - lovely the trio enjoying their night food. Geet made it tasty and mansi eat relishing all.

Geet's past was so sad. She suffered a lot b'coss tayiji & brij. Glad he came on time to save her. All his misunderstanding was cleared and he cmae to know hse was his geet only but now she lost her memory. Thanks to munshiji who saved her and did so much for her.

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Part 23 - the suspense behind name was also cleared as it was written on her mangalsutra. He saved her from them and brought her with him. Glad he already told in house and office about her memory lost so all were behaving normal in front of her. he now determined to bring her memory back and meet mansi so that the mother in her can bring geet out. Oh...he also came to know that priya was behind this accident.

Oh...again search party started searching. But his time mansi was there in front of them only. oh so little devil was the theif who stole all those things to play with. That was very cute.

Part 24 - mansi was not ready to give pen drive and maan again scold her. but mother could not see crying mansi and scolded back to maan. Maan was happy to see her mother reacting now he only want his wife back. For that also he has plan.

He talked to dadi & adi and told them his plan. They were happy to know that geet was alive. He very well planned everything. Hope soon her memory comes back.

Part 25 - how much he is controlling himself. He finally made her agree to come to the party and act as his wife and mansi's daughter.

She was having faint memory after seeing her mangalsutra.

Mansi likes pampering for her mother & chichi and maan came and disturbed her relaxing bathing time. She was annoyed and maan had to bear her anger.

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Part 26 - so pami came back to take revenge from khuranas that dadi threw her out of mansion. What she intend to do.? Priya talking about whom.? Mansi's naughtiness was increasing day by day. Loving her cute antics.

Part 27 - maanneet moment was nice but broke when maan put vermilion and magalsutra. He had to lie again for the act.

So finally geet entry as mrs khurana in front of all media. All were shocked to see her. priya also came there for the party.

Part 28 - at least now geet should have understand after listening reporter's question him about her death and being alive again.

Maan was possessive and jealous seeing geet talking with arjun.

Geet was hurt with his passionate dance and above all priya was glaring at her.


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Part 29 - maan tried to understand her that was part of their act in front of all. it was hard for him to go near her, hurt her and then go away from her. She again accused him and he was hurt again. He took mansi to sooth his pain.

So prithvi was his best friend and has one daughter who was friend with mansi.

Liked how maan insulted priya in front of mr Andrew.

Wow...mansi poured all drink on priya's head. She got the reward for sitting beside maan. she did the mistake and doesn't know what mansi can do. Good job mansi.

Part 30 - maan was annoyed to see pammi there but he masked his expression and met her as loving son. She was fooling him but didn't know that was trap for her. so pammi trapped his father but his father made maan heir of their whole property and didn't give anything to pammi. Pammi was back b'coss priya told her that geet was alive. So pammi too was there in crime of accident along with priya. Maan & prithvi both planning against pammi & priya. Prithvi told geet how to behave in front of pammi. The car scene was lovely. Dadi was not happy that maan let pammi stay at mansion.

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Part 31 - flashback was dreamy. He broke all her 49 waist chain. Maan was happy to see geet there in his room. Maan was sure that he will get his mishty with his love. Smart mansi. She fooled yash so easily and went to maan. Poor yash...had to listen from all on his foolishness. Geet was admiring father-daughter bond and thinking that she was wrong in thinking that maan was bad person. May be priya did wrong with him that's why he was asking her help.

Part 32 - guards altered him about pammi's arrival. And he started his plan b. he instructed everyone about their acting.

Group hug was awesome. Hope all were be happy like this.

Guard kept pammi there waiting in sun.

Loved how mansi welcomed pammi. Oh...she was acting so sweet in front of maan but all knows that. She tried to shagun to meera but meera was brave & smart. She gave money to nakul and asked him distribute sweets and told him that what her standard was. Same words as pammi told to geet when she gifted some shell necklace

Part 33 - nice plan to torture pammi. Pammi was furious to see all lovey dovey maan & geet. Then maan explained her that pammi was there at door. All decided that they will tell her to make dinner and they will go for hotel. But geet was possessive about mansi who instantly refused to let eat pammi made food. Flashback was cute.

Part 34 - geet took care of tiya as ger daughter. So prithvi was thankful to geet. That's why he was so attached to this family. He took both girls to ice cream parlor. Poor pammi. Got punishment from mansi for taking her from her dada. She pinched her eyes so hard that she had to ask maan's help.

Maan knew that pammi was mastermind behind geet's accident but they don't have any proofs. So they decided that they will take her confession which would be full proof to give her punishment.

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Part 35 - maan as trying again to bring his wife back but this time too she accused him when he showed their married pic. His heart again cried that she still doesn't remember anything about them. He showed their all pics and then she came to know why mansi was so attached to her.

Security guards didn't get anything from pammi's bags. They were sad that their this plan go in vein.

As decided all went to hotel leaving furious pammi. She cursed them all and that got recorded without her knowledge.

So maan lied to priya that their marriage was fake and he lied to all, just to make her to take wrong foot and contact pammi and they can get some proofs against them. But all four scared of furious maan. Lol.

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Part 36 - hope that what all thought about their plan will be successful & pammi get caught in their plan. Maan & prithvi friendship was awesome. Maaneet past was beautiful. Was mansi not well.?

Part 37 - so pammi warns her men to remind priya that what could she do if she goes against her. in the past maan was trusted blindly on pammi and even fought with geet to fulfill pammi's wish. maan-tiya-mansi moment was sweet.

Part 38 - god...this mansi was a real trouble maker. She totally messed pammi's room by throwing all her things and took key chain which attracted her and ran away. Geet & meera tried to snatch from her but no avail. Maan smartly took from her by giving chocy.

Geet burn the dresses pammi gave for them to wear for party and she finally made him wear what she had chosen for both of them. Lovely maaneet moments.

Part 39 - lol. Pammi was shocked to see messed room. Maan came to know that that key chain was belong to pammi as she was badly searching it. Oh...so that key chain has a chip hidden in it. And again mansi got it while crawling. Maan got that from her and prithvi was happy to that chip. Oh...they got the most imp proof against priya which pammi had recorded and used against her. All were happy with this sudden success. Hope soon they will get proof against pammi also.

Part 40 - all were started making new plans. Maan already had plan to trap priya. This time he only wanted prithvi. Maan telling her about his married life with his wife. The flashback was hilarious. Maan going in vest & boxer for the party. Finally both wear clothes which were prepared by geet only. oh...mansi was not well. And got hospitalized.

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Part 41 - oh...mansi has high fever and suffering from typhoid. Oh.. They have special furnished ward for khurana family. Geet was shocked seeing the ward.

Omg...pammi planning to kill mansi so that whole family will be shattered & broken. She again blackmailed priya to do as she wished.

Part 42 - both were worried for mansi and taking good care of her. so priya came and tried to kill mansi but geet came on right time gave tight slap to priya. Maan came with police from behind the hidden place and saw what she was doing. Geet got panic seeing the doll instead of mansi. She was hysteric and slapped maan also. He shown her that mansi was safe and he was worried for her brain status. Maan called geet's doctor for check up.

Part 43 - maan was teasing geet for her slap to him. He told her punishment to dance with him. She was confused with seeing him playful mood. Maaneet moment was lovely. He almost confessed his feelings. But that time mansi started crying and she again got fever.

Part 44 - mansi crying b'coss of her pain. Doctor told her to massage her legs frequently. She hided this from maan as he will over react and would take whole hospital on his head.

Pammi was worried that no news from priya. She was tensed that geet will harm her and would make maan against her. good to see geet warning pammi in flashback.

So maan trapped priya and she now was ready to get proof against pammi to prove her innocence.

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Part 45 - as planned maan sent all to farmhouse and left pammi all alone in km. they sent priya to play her game. So they got what they wanted the confession from pammi. She was shocked to see maan there and put gun on him. She blurt her all sin in front of police and shoot the gun. Good that bullets were replaced by yash but with the shoot geet got fainted.

Now geet was going thru the brain surgery. Maan has gone mad seeing her lifeless on hospital bed. Hope that pammi got deserved punishment.

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Part 46 - annie also came back. Oh...geet's brain got damaged. Too painful to see maan crying for his love and little mansi wanted to play with geet. He was so broken that he took mansi and went away. Where he go..?

Part 47 - he went to govardhan for 56 bhog puja for geet's safety. Here geet was sinking and all were praying for her. maan came back and was sad to listen doctor's words. Omg...geet went into coma. Maan was pouring out his anger on geet's lifeless body. After mansi's trying geet gave some sign and doctors were doing to get back her.

Part 48 - she was alright now but b'coss of surgery she lost her memory forever. now geet is plain slate. Glad that she believed what doctor and maan said about her. she was asking so many questions to him. Maan was again broken seeing her so distant. Prithvi was there to handle him. Now had to start from afresh.

Part 49 - she was asking so many questions to maan. She was sad that she doesn't know who she was. She was finding herself from maan's talk. Mansi met geet scene was so touching and beautiful. Mansi was so happy to come to her mom. Omg. She bit annie for not letting her go to her dada.

Part 50 - geet was asking she was having outside milk. She was shocked to know that her milk got dried. She started crying. Miracle happened and she now can feed mansi too.

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Part 51 - all were happy to know this good news. Dadi declared to give two times food to poor children. They announced to give one month bonus to their employees and would start hospitals for poor. Lol..mansi stole chocy from maan which he wanted to give geet so that she can eat hospital food.

Part 52 - all gathered in hospital and enjoying their Sunday. She saw her reflection in mirror and got shock to see herself bald. Maan told her that they need for head surgery. Maan decided that they will go to farmhouse till she was alright to meet others.

Part 53 - maan was complaining her about her and saying that she was devil, chunt and prankster. She still could not digest that she was his wife. She can feel about his desire for her. she knew he was keeping himself in control. Mansi's natanki bupp was cute.

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Part 54 - geet and mansi were playing and while playing mansi was about to fall. maan caught her on right time. But he scolded her very badly. She was sad and confused same time with her feelings.

Part 55 - maan was guilty for scolding her and said sorry also but geet was still upset with him & her state. Oh...she wronged in judging his patience of love and assumed he was showing pity on her. in anger she told him that she want to live alone away from him. She wanted to free from him. What she was asking from him. She just needs time and maan was also understands this. But leaving each other was not a solution.

What...maan leaving her in farmhouse with mansi as she needs her mother and left from there in the night only.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Adat hai tu meri part 5
Nice update dii. Maan felt guilty and tried to change her mood but failed. It will take time for maan to undestand her. Poor girl she was feeling out of place in his friend circle and new surroundings. Adi is such a nice and humble guy.

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