~*~O Re Piya~*~ - MaanEet OS - Epilogue Page 3 - 21.06.16

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Lovely epi beautifully written really liked the past and present connection finally they got married geet got her dream wedding loved it

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Very simple yet uniqe OS!
A smooth love story without any villian or twist... Still it was beautiful and something positive for a change, different from usual.
And epiloge was best!!!
Though it was nothing new in the rituals and all. But they way it is written...it felt fresh..!
Amezing work...hope to read many more.. :)

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

hi there! thanks 4 a beautiful OS! wonderfully written! stupendous epilogue! superbly written! It was different! loved hw u incorporated the past! Maaneet getting married! they r so happy! Teji teases Maan! Maan js stares at his gorgeous bride! Geet wanted a grand wedding n gt it! Darji takes her to the later n did her kanyadaan! Darji n Geet share a wonderful bond! he is emotional n recalls the past wen a 12 year old Geet says she will nt leave wen she gets married bt will make her hubby stay there! Maan thinks his convo with Geet regd their marriage! she tells him abt their wedding plans! Maan outs sindoor n some falls on his nose! Maan abt to wipe it n she stops him! he knows y n thinks abt hw Geet asked her mom abt this n the answer! Maaneet married! Geet n Maan understand each other's thoughts n feelings! the elders bless them! lovely end! really enjoyed this OS! keeping writing n keep us entertained! 😊👏⭐️

Edited by khwaishfan - 9 years ago