MG Mini SS- A Prey Of A Random Experiment, COMPLETED !

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

awesome update ...
aag toh dono taraf barabar lagi ..
but geet dar rehi hai kbhi bhi maan bore ho sakta hai yea soch ke .
nashe ki halat mei geet ne apni feelings samne toh layi ...I think ab Mr. msk ki bari hai 😉

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

hi thanks 4 da pm superb update! Well written! Geet falling 4 Maan n he has accepted his feelings 4 her! its the farewell party! Maan outs the alcohol in a cooler n assumes nobody wld touch it! Geet arrives n Maan bowled over! She is shy at his gaze! Geet unwell! she says she came as he wld trouble her! Geet has the alcohol by mistake n is drunk! Maan takes her away! he tries 2 handle her! she reveals her feelings n kisses him! update soon

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poojitha96

@poojitha96

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Awesome part loved it. Waiting eagerly for the next part.

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Wonderful update dear , geet is drunk eagerly waiting for next update

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ..Maroon..

Woh bhi jald hi milega...

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..Maroon..

@..Maroon..

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

LAST PART

Lying on bed Geet was lost in deep thoughts of previous night, regretting about the happenings she closed her eyes and cursed herself

Geet(st)- u r big idiot Geet, how could u behave so vulnerable in front of Maan..u did a grave mistake.. even after repeating so many times that Maan is not ur kind of guy u still fell for him..how can u let ur be so weak to fall for him..but now enough is enough it has to end here!

she took her phone , switched it on and typed a message for Maan , saying "it's over" and sent him..

Geet- now it will end one and for all..

Next Day

Geet was back to her normal routine, she was going towards her department when out of no where Maan came in between her way, ignoring him she tried to go away but he stopped her

Maan- what was that Geet?

Geet- what??

Maan- that message in night??

Geet- I think we spend a lot of time together as u wanted to..5 months are enough for ur random experiment so let's end it here and move on in life! now..leave my way..i'am getting late for my class!

saying so she took a step to go ahead but Maan held her wrist and brought her close to him..

Geet- what..

Maan- u can't go away like this..u love me right??, then..but Geet cut him in between

Geet- who said I love u?

Maan- don't act Geet..that night u urself..

Geet- that night I was not in my right senses..whatever I spoke was all nonsense..

Maan- nothing was nonsense.. whatever u said was the truth, they were ur inner feelings which u were trying to hide and let me tell u a person speaks the truth when he/she are not in their senses!,looking directly in her eyes he spoke while Geet averted her gaze..

Maan- don't hide it from me..I know u love me!

Geet had enough now it was getting unbearable now..

Geet- so what Maan..its my problem.. I will handle it myself.. u don't have to worry!

Maan- if u love me then why are u leaving me... be with me..

Geet- yeah right be with u with a fear inside my heart that one day when u will get bored with u ..u will come and say "its over Geet, I'm bore let me be free" then what will I do Maan??, she mocked him, while Maan kept looking at her

Geet- u don't have any answers right??, but I might not be able to handle myself at that time so its better we end it here!

Giving him one last glance she removed his hand from her wrist , taking a step back, she turned around to leave the place when suddenly she felt the tunes of a light music

Tujhpe meri hai daavedariyan

Tujhse hai dil ki saajhedariyan, saajhedariyan..

Tujhpe meri hai daavedariyan

Tujhse hai dil ki saajhedariyan..

Teri bin saansein loon to jee na sakoon

Ab tu hi bata kya main karoon

Kya karoon, kya karoon...

Girl i need you

Never leave you

Girl i need you

Never leave you

Geet- Maan ye..

Maan- finally my random experiment is over Geet..as I found my kind of girl..its u Geet..u might say that u r like other girls but for me u r different.. what I feel for u is different.. what I feel around u is different.. I know u r the one with whom I want to spend my whole life with.. trust me once Geet ..just give one chance and I promise never to disappoint u..

Geet- leave it Maan..today u r saying this later ur feelings will change..

Maan- I know why u r saying so , u r scared of my Casanova image right, but Geet tell me from the time we are together have u ever felt that I cheated u...

Geet- no but..what's the guarantee?

Maan- I can't give u any guarantee Geet but just a promise to never leave u, trust ur love for once..for urself..for me..and for us...please.., he pleaded

Geet- Maan I..

Maan- we will take our relationship slow..till u not trust me enough u will not get married but till then give a chance to develop that trust in ur heart..

Geet looked in his eyes, his confession, requests all seems so genuine for once she wanted to listen to her heart rather than her brain..she wanted to give into her feelings..and she nodded her head in acceptance..

Geet- I'm ready Maan...

her yes left a big smile on his face..

Maan- sachii

Geet- yes..

Maan- oh Geet I love u so so much..thank u ..out of excitement he hugged her tightly, Geet too was happy when suddenly he remembered something and separated himself from Geet

Maan- I totally forget about this.., searching his pant pockets he said..finally he found it and brought outside..

Maan- actually I thought to propose in dreamy way like they show in movies and all but u changed the whole scenario anyways..this for u..he brought a small diamond ring for her.

Geet- maan ..

Maan- I know its not that big but my budget allowed this only..

Geet- but Maan..

Maan- Geet I didn't spend my father's money for this actually I forget to tell u from last few months I joined our company I mean dad's company as a part time employee and he paid me..so basically this ring is from my money only..u can accept it right??

The realization brought tears in her eyes..

Geet- u did this much for me.. in chocked voice

Continued below...

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..Maroon..

@..Maroon..

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Maan- now why are u becoming senti like normal girls, he cribbed which made Geet to chuckle

Geet(wiping her tears)- I told u I'm a typical girl..

Maan- but will always remain different for me..

both had a brief eyelock then Maan asked the permission to make her wear the ring for which she nodded..

after putting the ring on her finger , he said- u know Geet , this time I became the prey of my own random experiment as I lost my heart to u..

Geet- then in that case even I'm a prey too as I too lost my heart too u!

Maan- that means we both are the prey's of this random experiment!

The End

Phew!! Completed it finally!

This OS turned into a mini as, but if u all enjoyed it then its worth it, haina???😳😆

Like and comment for one last time please..

Do share ur views on this..

Criticism and appreciation both are whole heartedly welcome..😊

Eagerly waiting for them😊

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Superb update dear, loved it, finally maaneet is together

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tania90

@tania90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

such a lovely atory
finally maan found his girl with whom he can live his life nd he do get a ring for geet with his own money nd he too fall for her
loved it