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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana

Nice update

Beautiful narration... I loved the whole update❤️the budding equation between pinky and Adi is beautiful and interesting.
Raji's carefree attitude... Just superb !!
The whole scene you described in Geet's room was wonderful...
Geet's one smile made Maan's day... And something about Geet struck right at the center of his heart😳which straight away got lost seeing the innocent beauty...
So handas approved Maan... But what is Brij's problem?
Maan's parents were impressed too with Geet's beauty, simplicity...😳
Now eagerly waiting for Maan's approval



Thank you Neelanjana
Brij is just crossed wired 😉 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

Lovely update the way Raji was answering it looks like she is the bride haha i really liked Adi poor fellow trying on a tough nut hmm Maaneet's like each other best thing is that his parents also like her atlast Dadi's choice is best nice part thnx 4 update



Dadis choice has to be the best 😉 after all it's Geet
But Raji bride 😆 imagine that
Nah that's scary 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream

Maan blown away by Geet's look.

It was more than Maneet meeting. Pinky and Raji are talking the most. And all Maan is doing is niharofying her and Geet blushing.

Every Khurana admires her. Rishta pakka.
Ab Brij ko kya problem hai ???



Brij ka problem woh yo Brij knows 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: doll.12

Part 6...

Both.. maaneet were floored by each others looks and features... maan was thinking that it's not a very bad idea of marrying at 25 at all.. hehe .. chalo .. now he is on right track.. geet was all shy shym. Blush blush... most of the talk was done by rajji from gets side and pinky Adi maan's side... all were happy and surprised to see such a beauty ... all were contented with the proposal ... it was really good to see that the family was asking for geets opinion... and she shyly said yes... hip hip hurrah... but whats wrong with this brij ... ??? Can't he just stay away from. Their matters... hope he doesn't do anything wrong.. update soon



Btw what do you want Brij to do 😉 I'll incorporate it in the next 😆
Whose that in your DP Doll, I'm intrigued 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: payal.gupta177

Fantastic update. Maaneet see each other and are blown away. Raji and Pinky were amazing. Something brewing between Adi and Pinky. Both families seem to be happy with the proposal. Beautifully written . Loved it. Waiting for next.



Should there something between Pinky and Adi, hmmm 😆

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neasya

I read your story in a go and loved it a lot...
maan was stuck between both his mother's and father's choice either of them he don't like is is not interested...
then he opted a way to escape by choosing dadima's choice which was not in option currently...
but when maan met dadima's choice I,e geet he was left speachless and is of course interested in taking the relationship further...
but dadi was expecting a very bubbly and jovious girl for maan but geet toh is silent and shy types...
looking forward to the next part dear please update soon



Welcome Neasya 😃
Akhir Geet hai 😃 so it's expected for Maan to be all fida
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

part 1

i totally love ur style dear sophie. Wonderful writing with a great sense of humor.
i know am going to love this story.
one, two, neither would do! Ahh the pampered rich kid that he is, its tiresome to be a single kid at times (i hve no idea abt being a single kid though, lol) but i can very well sympathize with all the attentio being zeroed down to him.
after all, he is a free bird, like he believes! And i am eager to knw what this dadi's bride does to this free bird😆



You do 😲 and you think you'll love it too - that's it, it's official I shall hide underneath my duvet forever so I font get a chance to ruin it 😆 thank you for the huge compliment ❤️

Nor do I, I fall slap bang in the middle so being a only child would have been ideal for me 😆 I don't really know what Dadis bride can do for him, it's more what he can do for her 😉

Thank you Kawaii 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

<font size="2">Part 5

oh.oh..Geet is scared of the spooky thoughts created by her own mind with all the what if s..old man..model and what not...but the first face to face meeting and somewhere she knew that the fantasy is coming true for her..while Maan is enjoying the fun loving atmosphere of the Handa family different from what he had imagined...Titu's swap offer..😆
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Honestly Geets scary ideas has been inspired by me 😉 I've always been overshadowed and protected so when I moved to high school on the other side of town everyone in my family freaked out mostly me 😆 I just knew i was going to get kidnapped 😆 but thankfully my sister offered to drop me off before work on most days in year 7 Snd by the time I was in yr 8, I was quite the rebel 😆 oh I miss being young 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

<font size="2">Part 6

Adi Pinky story is on right path..abhi takrar aur phir pyar.. him trying his luck hard while Pinky is not giving any heed about it..
loved the rendezvous between Maaneet and the rapid fire round played by everyone else on behalf of the prospect bride and groom..and finally she did voice her opinion..
why is Brij unhappy...does he have his own choice for Geet's groom like Raj and Anita had for Maan..</font>



Oh I love the last line unfortunately I didn't think sling those lines yet, but never say never 😆
Hunt is official on for Geets groom 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nihatri

This brij needs a 3rd degree relaxing in jail



3rd degree torture 😲 why so 😆
That cracked me up Nihatri, thank you for making me laugh 😃

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