Love n Uljhan (Part#7, pg.38) updated! 19/3 - Page 18

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

pls update soon

kaha kha se sab khod k nikal leti ho tum😆

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy

Oye ladki humko update maangta hai

Part#5

Maan... How are you.. she asked but I didn't know such a simple question could be so deep was she asking about his life or his job? Or was it his well-being which was always been her main concern... or... was that question about that night all those years back... before he lost himself in the memories of the past she was here to make it easy for him

I hope you are doing well... kailash said that you were looking for me? I also heard you lost your job... the pause she took there made it clear of her disappointment in him

God her voice was as soothing as ever, it reminded him of all those days he spent under her roof working learning and growing up... then she said something which broke his trance...

You cannot meet me Maan... I live too far away...

But...

No... I don't like what you are doing with yourself... Go back to your city... stop enquiring about me... you are no longer that young boy who needed guidance... go home and think... But this time from my perspective... None of your self-loathing is going to give you answers...

Wo... umm I was... can I... wo...

He wanted to ask her if it was Ok to be in touch with her... to have any sort of communication between them ... he wanted to express himself letting her know he was feeling rather alone in such a big city... but he also knew A sip of honey flavored tea wouldn't be his Dying wish!

There was a deep sigh on the other end which was followed by silence

Maan... you have changed a lot...

Take care of yourself...

As the call ended he could easily hear her unsaid words as always but today he felt there was something more that she wanted to convey other than just asking him to take control of his life like she normally does...

That night packed his belongings and got on to the train which would take him back to his home... and may be luck was in his favour he got a seat this time... This time around he would be the stronger one... Coz he knew she would be back and now it was just the matter of time...

After all this years how would she look... did she still have her dark maroon Cotton saree hidden in her wardrobe with she treasured as a prayer... did her hair grew longer than he last saw which would often bring a frown upon her face when her long plait fell in water while she watered plants... will her eyes still flash red when he accidentally used foul language... he laughed at the memory when she asked him to wash his mouth with Dettol Quite literally... now she wasn't nave it was her way of chiding him that it was something wrong to do..

Memsahib was and always will be the light in his path irrespective of his failures...

Flashback...

2012

Radha leave me I think she needs our help Janede mujhe... my words were more urgent and struggles too week to get free I still had alcohol in my system which wasn't making it easier...

Khurana Memsahib apni ladai khud ladna jaanti hai.. and who will help her You did you see your condition... you can't even stand properly... She has enough on her plate don't add to it..

He could hear loud swearing of some women and voice of a Man who said something once in a while He stood in the backyard were Radha stopped him while all the commotion was going on in the house...

It was almost evening when everything stopped and even he was sobered... Radha asked him to help her in the kitchen when that vile women stepped into the kitchen

Oh, wah Bhabhi! I see you are grooming your toy well... she said roaming her eyes all over him...

He was about to retort when a man came from behind

Meenal... have some shame... Being a woman how could you speak such things... the stranger hissed in a low tone...

Oh, come on Kailash I know what I'm talking... Ask her to stop her Drama of being well cultured and all I know what she does behind these closed doors... and stop defending filth like him...

Meenal!! The man tried to hold her wrist which she freed herself taking a step back

Oh please tell her even I don't like seeing her face... sooner she agrees on our terms faster we close this drama... Sukar manao ye sab Bhai k kano tak abhi pohoncha nahi...

Flipping her hair, she left the kitchen and exited the house shutting the main door with a loud bang...

The man who stood with a tired and frustrated look on his face turned towards Maan trying to comprehend his presence while Maan who was bursting with anger pushed the vessels out of his way and walked out of the kitchen...

Losing his temper was not new to him but he was quite frustrated with himself that he was of no used to the kind women who feed him when he was dying from hunger... while walking out Maan heard a little of the guy and Radha's words which were enquiring about him but he was left with Zero tolerance to stand and introduce himself more politely...

Present

He was jerked awake from his thoughts by the passing Chai seller offering him some tea... taking the cup from his hands he gave the boy the little change he was left with... he leaned back in his seat taking a sip from the steaming cup...

All those years he spent under her roof She lived a life of a married women she did have few visitors and was always lost in some work on her computer... the only time he saw her husband was that fateful day!

What was a women so young living alone away from her home...? If Meenal was her SIL where were her in-laws? Was She in some kind of trouble.

For some strange reason, he didn't want to address her as he was used to... maybe she would be... Sahiba...

To Be Continued...

she is there..😃
Tera Chehra song in last part was giving me some different doubts..🤔

she asked him to stop searching her and he complied...why did he go back, when he had almost reached to the last step of his goal..but then he would always listen to her.

what was she trying to convey, why not come in front..there is mystery around her..or something she does not let anyone to know..neither her whereabouts nor her feelings..

hope to see a door opened to her heart to know her perspective towards her own life where she lived as a married women to a man who never lived with her..and also her feelings for Maan whom she cared for and had been the guiding light..

and the story has altogether a different bonding and complex relation that Maaneet share, which I like the most..
loved that memsahib to Sahiba...

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

she is there..😃
Tera Chehra song in last part was giving me some different doubts..🤔

she asked him to stop searching her and he complied...why did he go back, when he had almost reached to the last step of his goal..but then he would always listen to her.

what was she trying to convey, why not come in front..there is mystery around her..or something she does not let anyone to know..neither her whereabouts nor her feelings..

hope to see a door opened to her heart to know her perspective towards her own life where she lived as a married women to a man who never lived with her..and also her feelings for Maan whom she cared for and had been the guiding light..

and the story has altogether a different bonding and complex relation that Maaneet share, which I like the most..
loved that memsahib to Sahiba...

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

great update! she told him nt 2 look her n he agreed!

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

I want to say something here but let me shut my mouth and let the story speak😆

But haan u thought wo ludak gai hai na🤣

Thanks for reading!

phir kya..story serious types hai, so was thinking in that mode..😆

I do not know, where it will lead the story for Maaneet, but I do not see something like happily ever after type storyline for them.

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

phir kya..story serious types hai, so was thinking in that mode..😆

I do not know, where it will lead the story for Maaneet, but I do not see something like happily ever after type storyline for them.