Love n Uljhan (Part#7, pg.38) updated! 19/3

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

beautiful subtle update..
she showed her anger..and it did affect him, though her felt it is for the food he said sorry..
then she instantly calmed down after the sorry, and was concerned for him..and him getting overwhelmed by the trust and concern shown by her..

and in the present, the guilt is one reason that he wants to search her to ask for forgiveness.
but there is something more which he himself is unable to name the feelings..

I am loving the way both the characters and the bond between them are being developed.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 8 years ago

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
This is turning really interesting and something different and unique !!
detailed comment thodi der mein..

Glad you found it interesting😆

Details ki zarurat nahi hai... But if u insist...😳

Thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: myrahluvsk
Awesome update

Thanks for reading😃

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: jasika08
Nice update
Waiting for next update

Next.. ummm... Socha nahi..

But thanks for reading😊

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
wonderful update! superbly written

Glad u liked it😊

Thanks for reading

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spoorthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
beautiful subtle update..
she showed her anger..and it did affect him, though her felt it is for the food he said sorry..
then she instantly calmed down after the sorry, and was concerned for him..and him getting overwhelmed by the trust and concern shown by her..

and in the present, the guilt is one reason that he wants to search her to ask for forgiveness.
but there is something more which he himself is unable to name the feelings..

I am loving the way both the characters and the bond between them are being developed.

Oh tho details aa bhi gaye...

Sach me u are loving it😲

And I'm finding this whole story strange...

Na geet geet lagti hai and maan tho subhan alah🤔

Guruji if still wish to continue reading this one

Hum aap ki atma ki shanti k liye prarthna karenge🤣

Thanks for reading😃

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

arrey nahi, I am not finding it strange..
I am seeing this Maaneet as something special, something different from the usual norms.
there is a depth to the two characters as required for this story line.
and I always like it more when Maaneet or the bond they share are different from the usual one.

I have guessed the end (not sure though)..but looking forward to the experience that it will give till it reaches to that end..

I know less comments or likes could be disheartening and demotivating.
but it has come out very well..so keep the tempo, depth to the story...and keep updating it if you have time and wish to do it..