Longings #3|| Maneet FF || Last Prt +Epilogue @ 138 || 2/9/16

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#301

Maan geet ran from their but geet get injured with bullet which just pass her skin

and blood is flowing but she unknowingly told she loved maan who was not

drug smuggler nor he drank now maan try to concentrate on her words

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#302

very interesting!!!
geet saved maan and maan saved geet...
geet confessed her love for him and he was in shock...now he got that geet doesn't like new maan..

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#303

Awesome update

maaneet saved each other

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#304

Geet just reached Maan in the nic of time to save him. But in this fight she gets wounded and she kills someone Which hits her that she killed someone. But in her anger she lets out her feelings to him.

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#305

WOW ! That Was Action Filled

I liked it very much

Geet on seeing Maan in that condition did anger her as to think that these goons are beating him and now want to also kill him .

I enjoyed his little sction of attacking these goons but Geet killing one of them she was shocked as she believes no one deserves been killed

Maan wanting answers from her and she was silent maybe in shock still

Geet bursting out and telling Maan she wants her old Maan back the one she loves and he is surprised .

I'm eagerly waiting now to see how they both will sort out their issues

and there is still so much they both needs to tell the other .

I'm waiting for Maan to find out that Tara knew all along about his parents house and her parents got it sold

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#306

full of action!!! time for the misunderstandings to be resolved ...waiting for the next ...but who is this rathod??/

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#307

Nice update

Waiting for next update

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#308

Wow lovely omg thud thud update..te way my maaneet trying to save eachother putting their in danger no words needed to show wat they meant for each other and they unconditional love..te way geet ki shock for killing some one but my maan was worried for was lovely..te way my maan became numb hearing her cinfession his geet belibgs to him te thought give breathe to his deadless soul..i love te update so much yar

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#309

Interesting update. Geet saved Maan but killed someone and that shocked her too much. Maan heard her yearning for her old Maan and now maybe he will change himself again and sort out everything.