PREM YAA MRIGTRISHNA, Th.2, EPILOGUE 2 & 3 Pg. 92 **24/10/16 - Page 30

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Chapter 55

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!

Location: Rajkumari Gayatri's room ,ROYAL PALACE, VALLABHGARH



Maan and Geet entered Geet's room to find their four cute babies playing lying on their stomach on the carpeted floor. As they were now 6months old, they could slide on their stomatch in order to move themselves.



The moment children saw Maan; Sam and Mannu at once slid on their stomach towards him saying "Pa..pa..Da...da" and held his trouser's leg one on either side making Maan have tears in his eyes as last time he met them they had not developed any form of speech. Amy and Avi rushed on their stomach towards Geet saying Ma...ma...Ma...ma and started pulling her saree. Seeing her children's response to Maan and her she realised that her decision is not 100% correct but in present circumstances its the best solution! Little while later, hearing gurgles of happiness and laughter coming from Geet's room everyone ran for her room. The whole family witnessed Maan and Geet laughing and playing with their children. Maan and Geet were lying on the carpeted floor with all four children sprawled over them and being tickled by their parents. Geet's head was on Maan's shoulder and Maan's muscular arm on her waist. Giving privacy to the young family, Savitri Devi indicated everyone to leave. But Vicky could not prevent himself from taking the picture of the happy family!



Once everyone was in family room, Savitri Devi said,"Aap sab abb chinta kar na bhool jaayiye! Maan aur Geet kabhi bhi vibhaajit (seperate) nahi ho sakte! Ho sakta hai bas thoda samay lage inke kareeb aane mein! Magar jo hum sab indono ko kareeb laane ke liye kuch nahi kar paa rahe hain, Samaan, Armaan, Maanvi aur Maansi karenge. Yeh bacche anjaane mei apne Maa-Baap ko kareeb laayenge!" (You all don't have to worry any longer! Maan and Geet can never seperate! Though it may take time for them to come close to one another. But what we all couldn't do, Samaan, Armaan, Maanvi and Maansi will do! These children unknowingly will bring their parents close to one another!)

Seeing their still glum faces, Savitri Devi continued trying to boost the family's morale, "Swarna, Prithvi beta, Sumitra, Ranjit, Chitralekha chaliye abb hum sab shaadi ki tyaariyaan karen!" (Swarna, Prithvi, Sumitra, Ranjit & Chitralekha, come let start the wedding preparations!) Hearing about upcoming wedding, the whole family's mood turned jubiliant except Brij, Veer and Yash! The three brothers left from the room to make a phone call. In the family room, Rajmata at once said, "Prithviraj kewal duo saptah (The wedding was postponed for two weeks because of Geet's displeasure!) hain vivaah ke liye aur itne karye shesh hai." (Prithviraj, only two weeks are remaining before Maan and Gayatri's wedding, and so many arrangements are still pending!)
"Maa, chinta matt kariye, sab sakushal ho jaayega!" (Don't worry Maa, all arrangements will be taken care off !)

After some time Maan, Brij, Veer and Yash arrived in the room. Seeing all youngsters gathered, Savitri Devi decided to have some fun. "Bacchon abb aap sabko dekhna hai ki pheron tak Maan aur Geet mil na saken!" (Children I have a request that you all have to see that Maan and Geet don't meet each other alone till their wedding.)

"Dadimaa, yeh kya naya rule hai?" (Dadima, what is this new rule?)

"Jawaai-sa, judaai ke baad milne ka mazaa aur hi hai!" (Son-in-law, absence makes heart grow fonder!) Rajmata also started pulling Maan's leg!



Maan was extremely upset as one Geet was not behaving with him properly and now this Dadimaa's curfew!



"Brij Bhai aap, Veer aur Yash abb Maan bhai ko kya bulaayenge?" (Brij bhai, what will you, Veer and Yash call Maan bhai now?) Vicky asked trying to distract Maan.



"Kyun Vikram beta? Sab hi "jawaai-sa" bulayene?" (Vikram everyone will call him as son-in-law!) Maharani Sumitra said.

"Nahi hum Mr. Khurana ko naam se bulayenge kyunki woh aur Gudiya humse umar mei chote hain! Veer aur Yash unhei "jeeja-sa" yaa "Maan bhaiya" bula sakte hain!" (No I'll call Mr. Khurana by name as both Gudiya nad he are younger to me. Veer and Yash can call him Brother-in-law or brother!) Brij said in his royal attitude.



Just then Geet entered in her practice outfit and said, "Hum kuch samay ke liye Rani Mahal jaa rahe hain!" (I'm going for sometime to Rani Mahal.)



"Gudiya, aaj Rani Mahal jaana sthagit kar dijiye, kal karvaa-chauth hai! Iss liye aapko tyaariyaan bhi karni hai." (Gudiya, can't you postpone going to Rani Mahal as tomorrow is Karva-chauth?) Padmini reminded Geet.



"Padmini beta, Geet jaccha hai iss liye usse vraath karna varjit hai. Jab har swasthiye sampoorn ladki ko karva chauth vraat ke samay thakaan hoti hai toh Geet toh abhi chaar chote shishuon ki maa hai! Waise bhi Geet pichle duo saalon se vraat karti aa rahi hai toh iss samay woh pooja karke chandrama ke saamne sirf jal chadha sakti hai!" (Padmini, Geet is nursing mother, hence she is excused from fasting. When even a normal young and healthy girl feels weak and tired while doing fast then Geet is a mother of four small babies! Anyways Geet has been fasting for past two years on Karva-chauth! This time she can do the pooja and offer water to moon at night.) Everyone was surprised to know about Geet's fasting especially Maan.

"Kintu Savi..." Rajmata objected. (But Savi...)

"Nani-sa, aap please Geet ko vraat karne se rokiye kyunki woh pehle se hi kamzor hai. Waise bhi vraat mere liye hai toh iss liye mai manna kar raha hoon toh kya pareshaani hai?" (Grandma, please stop Geet from fasting as she is still very weak. Anyway the fast is for me and I'm asking her not to fast.)

"Chahe kal hum vraat rakhe athavaa nahi, kintu hum avashiye Rani Mahal jaayenge!" (Whether I fast tomorrow or no, I'll definitely go to Rani Mahal today!) A determined Princess Gayatri turned and left!

Maan was extremely curious to know what his Geet does in Rani Mahal, as Geet's brothers were not willing to talk to him so he decided to go to Rani Mahal stealthily. He knew that in Rani Mahal no man is allowed so he cannot enter the Rani Mahal by regular protocol, but he still wanted to see his Mishty! So he climbed on a Banyan (Bargadh) tree from the balcony in his room and slid down to the branch of a very old Banyan tree (about 100yrs. old) which was growing inside Rani Mahal and reached at the trunk of the tree and then quickly slid into the room next to the tree before Lady gaurds could discover him!



Location: Secure prison in Delhi

Rahul, Sasha and Dev were sent to a tight security prison as they were officially declared as terrorist. Although Dev and Sasha did not have any record of terrorist activity but as they were captured from deadly terrorist and defector, Rahul Malhotra's camp so now they were called terrorist. Rahul was sent to extremely tight security prison which was meant for terrorists & hardened criminals i.e. murders, sharp-shooters, assasins etc. Dev was sent on medium level of secure prison. Sasha was sent to women's secure prison. When Sasha was being booked by police, all her expensive jewellery, watches, bracelets etc. were being removed and were given in police custody.



She noticed a Lady Constable looking at her designer watch with greed and Sasha immediately started making a plan. Sasha was not going to leave MSK whether he was married or not and whether he was a father or not? After few days in prison she got to know the Lady Constable's name, Kaamini Chopra. So Sasha started her first phase of plan!!



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Edited by LM1991 - 9 years ago
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