MG-SS_Aan Milo Sajna_Epilogue2 pg34 on 25/06/2017

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

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me first...
I knew it! I knew this is exactly what was going to happen. he would find a donor and be back hale and hearty. Lovely one.

But the best part here was your writing...beautifully written. Just too beautifully written... esply about his doubts and dilemma... his conflict between giving up and holding on...perfect!

I loved everything about this update... her care, them talking and esply the engagement ring scene...so heart touching yaa! And they finally did it! Together! They were back.

The entire story for me was well balanced. You know it started with geet having her own insecurities, her own troubles and it took a hell lot of him to bring her back into the light. And then it gradually shifted to maan.. his army endeavours to his bravery to his battle with death... it was like a full circle. And hence, so well balanced. Totally loved that thing about you.

The ending conversation...his pranks, her anger and then the proposal...oh so cute! i could feel their emotions reaching out to me... like i said, beautifully written. But you know I expected to see maan really biting her dimples on their first night. 😉
Epilogue is coming right?

Ohh what am I asking... it IS coming!!☺️

Update soon!😃

Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

last part

chalo dekhte hain mera comment aata hai ya nahin😈

Umm maine socha comment de hi deti hoon

tum badi besabri se wait kar rahi hogi..hai na?😉😛

anyways mujhe to koi note nahin dikha mere liye😭😭

maine socha kuchh special bolna tha mere liye.. chalo ab comment deti hoon

Lol I m scratching my head😆

itni asaani se donor mil gaya???😲😲😲

maine socha koi twist- wist hoga..par yahaan to kuchh bhi nahin tha seedhe donor ko le aayi tum😆

I liked the update but it was little straight as compare to your other updates of this story.😳😳 aisa mujhe laga..😳😳

Maan got a donor and everyone knows that he is going to get well soon as soon as possible with geet beside him always..

Geet requested him to give engagement ring back to her..Though Maan was little reluctant but geet was not ready to let it go...Finally he surrendered to her wish..

Family too stood strong beside him . Though his confident was little low but Geet was more confident that babaji will not do injustice to them... she knew that he would be back to her for ever.. and he had to come back to the world where his family specially His Love...His Geet was waiting for him.

maan improved with each passing day and he and geet were ready to live a blissful life together ahead..

Nice update pooja..

so this was the only story which i was reading yours.. let's see ab kab milte hain tumhaare threads par.. See you..Byeee

ab jaldi se epilogue bhi do... 😉😉

Edited by Rashmi... - 8 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

like pahle hi hit kar diya..ye mat sochna ki padhne ke baad hit kiya🤣

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

waise mera phone kharaab hai do din se issiliye gayab hoon

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Sundari

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Rashmi...
waise mera phone kharaab hai do din se issiliye gayab hoon

Achha... Kya hua phn ko?

Arre yaarrr.. 😆

I have a note for u in the start of update 😉

2 line bcha hai, ek conversation add karna hai par fit nahi ho raha😡

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Sundari.

Achha... Kya hua phn ko?

Arre yaarrr.. 😆
I have a note for u in the start of update 😉

2 line bcha hai, ek conversation add karna hai par fit nahi ho raha😡

soeaker kharaab hua😭

really Note for me? is there something special?

chalo theek hai Note padh loongi😛

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Rashmi...
soeaker kharaab hua😭
really Note for me? is there something special?
chalo theek hai Note padh loongi😛

speaker??

how abt this?

Note- I don't know what gave u impression that I will make a sad ending maybe because I mentioned crying, but read on fearlessly because I won't disappoint you that way at least.

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Sundari.

speaker??

how abt this?
Note- I don't know what gave u impression that I will make a sad ending maybe because I mentioned crying, but read on fearlessly because I won't disappoint you that way at least.

haan speaker

theek hai ye

waise tumne sach me sab ko dara ke rakh diya heart disese is not something to be digested easily😆😆

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

haan speaker

theek hai ye
waise tumne sach me sab ko dara ke rakh diya heart disese is not something to be digested easily😆😆

🤣

well u see i have seen someone with this tyoe of disease, n he's living his life normally, there is need for precaution but otherwise its fine

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Sundari.

🤣

well u see i have seen someone with this tyoe of disease, n he's living his life normally, there is need for precaution but otherwise its fine

yeahh I know

par precaution is better na..issiliye sabne socha ki kahin tum Maan ko maar na do tosab darr gaye issiliye advance me dhamki de di maine bhi😆