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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi there! lovely prologue! Maan loves Geet n only Adi knows! terrific poem! Maan writes 4 his lady love! wonderful cs! Khuranas n Handas knw each other! Geet is an actress! will b waiting 4 updates! do pm me, thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi there! lovely prologue! Maan loves Geet n only Adi knows! terrific poem! Maan writes 4 his lady love! wonderful cs! Khuranas n Handas knw each other! Geet is an actress! will b waiting 4 updates! do pm me, thanks

thankuu so much dear 😊
dhire dhire story will move ahead 😉
but I promise u all will enjoy it
pls book mark it,as m using cell,its not possible for me to send pms 😔
or if u want u can check on fb,ill update links on my page 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ns.1

Congrats for the new story. Very interesting concept and CS eagerly waiting for the story to begin😊

thankuu dear 😊
will start soon,pls bookmark the thread dear,as I wont be able to send u pms,m using cell for writing 😔

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Prologue is Simply Beautiful
Seems like Maan is in love with Geet and writing beautiful romantic poems to her
and he does not want anyone to know
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful prologue and cs. Maan is a shayar.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1
Today in handa Haveli,everyone is excited,each and everyone there is enjoying this moment,waiting to see their princess GEET being brought home back after her birth with rano. The whole handa haveli is decorated in such a way like,any passerby would say, 'Is it diwali'?
As soon as the horn hornked, Reena Singh khurrana,walked in with aarti thali to welcome the new member of the family. 😊
As rano entered in,with mohinder,Reena did aarti,placed the tikas on both of them. As soon she was about to enter,our small Maan of 4years [MSK] in full style,pulled rano's salwar. She moved down nd asked him,"Kya hua maan beta?"
Maan-"Choti Maa yeh meri princess hai,ise mujhe pehle dikhaiye,Important kaam toh baki hi reh gya".
Everyone was shocked,thinking,which important thing was left,not getting any idea. Rano placed geet in Maan's lap. Maan niharofied his angel,his princess.
Just then he removed out a small box of kajal,added a small dot of it on her upper left side of forehead.
And then he said in whole MSK style with love,"Choti maa,ab important kaam pura hua.Ab meri princess ko kisi ki buri nazar nhi lagegi."
Everyone was just so surprised to see this side of maan.
All were happy,rano kissed his forehead,asking him "Betaa tumne kya naam socha hai apni princess ka?"
Maan was silent for few seconds,and then he proclaimed in a proud way, "Choti maa I have decided my princess name would be 'GEET' MAAN KI MEET-GEET'."
Every one did applaud him for his choice.
Rano said,"Yess indeed she is 'Maan ki meet GEET'.
As days passed by,everyone would take care of her,no one would want to see even a single drop of tear in her eyes.
Vicky too of his age only played with her,in their own way.
Maan use to give special attention to his princess.He just used to adore the way,she smiled,the way she glared at vicky for taking her toys.
At times he would laugh at the weird faces she would make.😉
Maan[st]- Yeh toh pakka shaitan ki khala hai,actress zarur banegi 😉
[My thought-Wahh maan bachpan main hi parak liya geet ko 😉 ]
Soon it was geet's first birthday,everyone in the handa haveli was planning how to celebrate it.
Even our dashing chotu maan,was thinking of his princess first birthday,how to make it unique for her 😉

Precap-Geet's first birthday party,maan's unique gift 😉

Pls do ignore grammatical mistake,m writing my frst ss,so m trying my best to stand upto ur expectations 😊
Love-Almina 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
awesome prologue ans s seems maan loves geet its his secret adi knows abt it but geet is unaware he even arranged a director for his secret angel loved part 1 when small maan is so caring and considerate for his angel he named her geet maan ki geet all r amazed with maans love fir her his care for her how cutely he put kala tikka on geet so that geet ko naza na lage
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Lovely update. Maan named baby as Geet.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi please mention on thread that u posted part 1 on which page or will nt knw u update! terrific update! well written! Maan eager to meet the baby! he admires her! n names her Geet! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Maan meets Geet when she comes to her home after birth...😎...He names her as Geet...👏👏👏...He is possessive of her...😛😉...waiting to see what Maan gifts his princess......

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