FS: Dimensions~ EPILOGUE and NOTE @65 on 12-02-2017 ~~COMPLETED~~ - Page 34

Epilogue next week... if possible i will update sharks of my life too... i am done with half of the chapter

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BRACE YOURSELF

I'm wondering how should I even begin this comment with...
You're very much daring to write such an update and not expect me to go gaga over it 🤣
I've read the update so many times till now, before actually being able to comment about it. So it's Friday night and there's no better moment to write this comment 😆 You know, FSD premiere everywhere today so had to be related in a way. If it's not, I'll make it related in a way 😉 You must be updating on Sunday, but I can't take any risk so I'm writing it right now! :)
You can't even imagine what I feel whenever I read your stories. I know it's also because you're so special to me and I love you ❤️ but you have your way with words and you make me forget what the hell I'm doing in that specific moment and just focus on your update. 😆 Which happens to be out of this world! 😳 I'm just letting your fictional world messing up with mine and Voila 😆 And seriously, when two one-of-a-kind minds meet, trust me baby, there's just so much fire going on 😳☺️😆
I'm actually speechless and a bit confused right now. Should I be happy or sad? And yeah, I miss you like you should never know how much 😡😭 but it happens, it happens... *control, idiot, control*😆 Ufff, I tried so hard to hide my own tears in the introduction but couldn't when it's about my feelings 🤣 it's just so annoying when you can't hold yourself back but ermm you love me anyway 🤔😳😆
Sorry for the delay in writing the comment, even if you won't see it till the day you update 😆 lekin kya karu, stalking you takes time too... too busy stalking you 😆 But if you feel I'm too much, you can suggest me to stop doing that... I won't listen to you though 😉
Sunday is now my favorite day of the week I guess, cause I get updates... and when I get updates, I get you here so we can actually talk for few minutes. 😆 Even watching you replying to people makes me happy. Truly need you baby 😳😳🤗 And yeah if that means I'll stalk this thread till you update even if I have to wait for hours I'll do it ❤️ I think you don't even realise how much positive energy, good vibes, feels (you know what kind of feels☺️) you bring with you *hayyyeee* and what you're doing to me... 😆 Sorry for my long love letters but words are not enough to describe it... ❤️ Your PI-D loves her PFbiA so much 🥺
And please don't make me think I'm silly by writing all these... 😳 I'm just getting emotional, okay? 🤣 Should I continue with my intro or simply go to the update part? 😆 Well, I know you can always understand me 🤗 (please don't ask "Baby, why so many mood swings?" 🤪 cause you are very much responsible for everything 😆😆😳) so don't say a word! ;)

Okay, so I should get back to the update before you decide I'm MAD, totally MAD 😛😆🤣 You know what, I always feel I can be myself (matlab MAD) when I'm around you 😳😉 People do that when they are feeling safe with certain significant other people... 😉😆😳 I don't wanna spoil this beautiful thread by adding any of my crazy ideas but then... 😆 you need a weirdness dose everywhere 😆 For that, always count on me, baby ❤️
Definitely didn't say much about the update so far, but this is the last part before epilogue 😭😭😭 so I would just enjoy writing for you ☺️☺️😆 Geet's life is such a roller coaster! Actually, Maaneet's life and this story proves yourself as a writer. ❤️ Your "Dimensions" are in my mind all the times. You know, even writing this comment is pretty hard as I'm trying to convey my feelings in words. And I'm doing it for you, so it must be easier for me because you always understand me 😳😳 I'm just trying to imagine what that means for a writer. Baby, I'm very proud of you for whatever you do 😳❤️ Like... I have to write just for you, and you already know my likes, dislikes, whatever it is going on my mind but as a writer - As a writer, you have to convey the feelings to so many people and you make it possible so easily. 👏 It is hard to please even one person. One likes that, the other one doesn't. One thinks that would work, another one doesn't. All you can do is being able to actually convey all these, post it and wait. And then - BOOM! When you can make so many people enjoy your writing, it means you are blessed with huge talent 😳❤️ This is not just me fangirling, I'm just saying I truly appreciate what you do and that you still get time to do what you love and give us joy even being so busy ❤️
You accomplished this "mission" in such a beautiful, memorable and heartfelt way, it's hard to describe your work in words. They fail to represent the true beauty of your every story ❤️ Gosh, I feel I'm sometimes acting like a complete Drama Queen and I need a reality check. I am dreading letting this story end. 🥺 I'm trying to put off my tears as long as I can 😆 cause... Actually, this one is eternal in my lil' heartieee and will always be like that Your stories just give me all these, I get back to read them all the time... going through them makes me believe I have a pretty good life and I shouldn't complain much or overreact regarding certain moments or events... 😆 And I'm just so lucky I can still feel, hear, see the beauty of this world. ❤️ I hope I'm not becoming too dramatic here but this is how I feel... :) Thankful enough for everything. 😳 I've set my heart on being positive... it is all I can do whenever I'm feeling low. 😳 Oh, that - and talking to you. 😳😆

Everybody gets high sometimes, you know
What else can we do when we're feeling low? 😳😆

Okay, okay - enough about me, let's talk about serious stuff right now 😎😉
CAN I SAY HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU? Can you actually feel I'm screaming? 😳 Cause you my love - you have to know that, okie?🤗 But even if you don't, I'll make sure I remind you that 😉 Again... and again... and again...
First of all (this sounds so odd after all those previous lines! lol)... what's this gorgeousness? 😳❤️ Don't you know it's illegal to write such stuff and play with my lil' heart? Do you think the fevicol is gonna work every time, darling? Cause no, it doesn't. 😳 C'mon... 🤔 Are we into illegal stuff or something? 😲 This story literally left no corner of my mind unexplored. 😆 And I mean it... I'm counting the days till you post an update. 🤣 I've lost it, but I don't regret it And you have to agree something is incomplete if I'm not writing my review on an update, naa? 😳😆 *just joking here, but not really joking* 😆
BRILLIANT! Brilliantly done and depicted story here! And it's even more satisfying to know this is my baby's story ❤️ So many shades, so many dreams, so many moments, so many emotions and feels. Like I'm actually living all these or noticing their life. Must be so great to write it. And I hope you don't mind me drooling over it 😳😳
I knew the previous fabulous update is gonna lead to such an impactful one - but damn, you always make it better and better. Personally, I don't even care if I sound like I'm so crazy 🤪 - I'm in love! Makes sense
No emoji on that cause I don't know how to end that line. Leaving it for you to guess it 😆😳
As for updates, never actually like predicting something - I love it more when you surprise me and won't tell me what it's about, it's way better going in blind and getting a very powerful reaction. 😆 I trust your choices ❤️ Even I am one of them... 😉😆

It's always so funny when I finish an idea and then realise I didn't actually focus on it. 😆 Just look at the previous lines, I said I'll talk about serious stuff of the update and ended up talking about it but adding my own touch of loveria into it, which I'm really proud of. 🤣
Okay, I promise. 😳 I'll stick to the update now as I have a lot to say. I'm expressing my thoughts more now because we had just one part left so I need to do that, please, PLEASE 🥺 God bless you always for writing this and not only ☺️ My heart just melts. Oh, sorry... moi just said I love this story? Never in a million years! 😉😳 I'm not even thinking and writing about it, nahiii 🤔
The update starts in a very lovely way, which just makes me fall in love with it more. ❤️ Maan is becoming more and more responsible, his actions speak volumes about how much he cares for her and her well being, trying to find out everything about her and her needs being there for her, filling with care, love and attention all those years of pain, unspoken words, when both of them were suffering in silence. Silence hurts the most. Unspoken words ever MORE. Just the thought of separation hurts 🥺
But... 😳 Seems destiny has another plan for them, They won't stay apart anymore. After all, they are true soulmates and their love is gonna win. You can't just stop all these. Time passes by, but does it really make all those memories end? Cause we all can clearly sense how much these two have missed each other, literally craving for each other. This won't go with time and thanks baby for proving it again... Oh, bless my poor heart And exactly - you've described it so well -for Maan, it is NOT LATE. As long as her heart is still beating and recognises his own heart, as long as their heartbeats are dancing to the same old and memorable song, they are gonna have enough time. Time is still patient with them, even after so many years. The same old song and those same steps. If they are just following the same steps, they won't miss a thing. 😳 Feels like their life is a dance competition in all these. Lights. The public. Fears. And same old pair of dancers with undeniable chemistry. In the end, they just can't fail ❤️
I absolutely love how you chose to bring back those memories in Maan's mind and compare them to the current situation There was a time when she used to remind him everything about his vows and look at him now - he is different, just slightly different kind of love A love which is no longer afraid of expressing, but it is afraid of losing. He's not gonna repeat those past mistakes which is indeed so lovely and feeling relieved reading all these 😳😳 Thank you so much for playing with my feelings in such a beautiful way 😭

Maan doesn't disappoint and continues fulfilling all of her wishes, I'm just so happy I'm gonna cry 😆
He has his heart on his sleeve now. Cross my heart, I'm getting so many feels with your writing! 🤗 Take a damn cookie and you may take my ice cream too... ☺️ Nota bene: I don't share my ice cream with anyone but you
Love chocolate but... Vanilla pretty much?😳 It's the month of love and not only 😉
Thanks Maan for the eating part too. Geet needs it. Never mess with the food, I tell ya
Awiee for me Thailand = you ☺️☺️😆
Another thing I enjoyed was Maan taking Aman with them. Like it was so sweet of him 😳 Truly speaking, I guess he would have enjoyed the time alone with Geet anyway, 😉😆 but I know he feels Aman deserves appreciation and that was the right way to show him that 😳😳 I am also truly aware of the fact that Aman is a good baccha, he gave them enough space for themself ☺️🤣
For me, it is very important to know that Aman trusts Maan so much now and he feels he can take care of Geet completely. As a person who always cared for Geet's well being, Aman's point of view in all these is very important, so well hightlighed in the story. No one could have put it better than you. So glad you chose to talk about it, baby 😳👏 You always know what to do 🤗❤️
This is so unique and special. A bonding like no other. Never ever read such a story where I get to read about such an overwhelming and strong friendship.
GUARDIANS. Just love it. You always choose the right words. You described everything so well in just a single word. There is this soft and assuring side about this word. On the other hand, there's the protective and strong side, this word perfectly sums up their whole story and all these years of selfless and pure love for their little Geet ❤️ Who knows better than them how it is to watch her suffering every day, learning how to deal with her own fate, living with the consequences of her own decisions, accepting the silence even if her inner self was screaming in pain... 💔 must have been so difficult for them to watch her dying every day. But Oh Lord, how nice it is to see the ray of hope in the end

You're so sassy 😆 😳 I literally couldn't stop laughing reading about his office work and this man's antics 😆 The audacity! 😲🤣 The line about Adi's entry was so adorably cute, love how you've written it. baby 😆
AWWW! This can get even better than that kya??? Maan bringing Geet to his home and reading the reactions of his parents were just so heartwarming and precious, made me cry 😭 True, sometimes the best and loveliest people get to suffer the most. is it because someone thinks they can bear everything and overcome all these obstacles? Is it because destiny had other plans for them? It is even fair? They get to a point when they can't even dare to hope for a better future or something to forget their pain, it's just so sad whenever this happens. 😭 Geet entering his room and acknowledging all his achievements with pride was so damn touching, the cherry on the top being Maan's words: "I will have more of them only with you by my side" ❤️ Beautiful, so beautiful... Maybe Geet thought that Maan is her strength. But the truth is that - if Maan is her strength - she is also his strength, his motivation and the reason he is still going strong ❤️ I think they would never bear another separation. 🥺 Gosh, these two are made for each other...
You've got a wonderful point there, baby. And an awesome intuition, just keep it up and keep spreading maaagic 🤗 Geet, the eternal beholder, how true she is about the changes displayed by Maan! She's getting new shades of him, absolutely in love with that 😳😳😳
I think the fact that he asked the permission for the kiss speaks volumes itself. Just look at him, how much he cares for her wishes :) He is not gonna touch her if she doesn't allow him to do so. He's just so afraid of hurting her. Aww Gizzz, loving it... though... he shouldn't ask before doing it 😉😆

My sheets are already all over your bed and I just got to the flashback... 😲😆 Already big one. Aww baby, please don't hate me for this 🥺🥺😭
Talking about the flashback, you already know how much I love the flashbacks in your stories. 😆 I'm thinking that they always reveal so many things and I love the details as I have a keen eye for them 😉 Always so compelling, reviving memories, changing destinies, restoring faith or making it disappear forever, they are always a pleasure to read. I have to directly state whatever I'm feeling, so be kind enough to touch my sheets. I mean... to read them 😆
THE FLASHBACK ☺️☺️☺️ You know what 's on my mind, right baby? 😆😳
Everything in this flashback is pure love and I seriously want to just... do it too... I mean 😳😳🤣 Ermmm nvm... 😳😆
From Geet's instant reaction and inner thoughts to Maan's hesitation, everything falls so naturally into place, proving the sensible approach of your storyline. ☺️ Haha, this girl geet and I have so much in common... 🤣 Especially showing nakhres and pouting cause Hellooo, we just want more 😳😆 You go girl, Geet, I totally support you 🤣 Make him go maaad 🤣😈 The whole kissing scene was so hot and sexily cute too I couldn't stop smiling like an idiot - which I am! How do you get it so right?
The reactions of both of them were hilarious and loved your parallel 😆 On one hand, there's this girl Geet and her audacity to get more. On the other hand there's this Maan having a Billu-like inner fight with himself and he's afraid of kissing her... properly 😆 He must have been so shocked 🤣 Geet's facepalm was hilarious, dammit... 😆😆 I'm still laughing... I don't know upon which reactions should I laugh more... Geet or Maan? 🤣
Geet is taking the lead and plays the Dom and the best part si that he enjoys it ☺️☺️ I know you can read your baby's mind right now... 😆 Ummm so cute 😳😳 Maan got the euphoriaaa of the moment but he's still so protective and ends up still holding her like she was a doll and his every touch could damage ❤️ And if I thought this couldn't get better, she is listening to his heartbeats... <3
End of flashback 🥺🥺

Gosh, how can you be both so sMexy and cute? 😆 From the way you described Maan fulfilling his every responsibility towards Geet till the "absolutely free" part of Aman and Geet's parents everything is just so adorable 😆😆 Loving the part of his dilemma, very well written, my baby
Awwie, things are finally better for Geet and she is enjoying her life by his side. 🤗 And of course he loves the bossy side of him, this will never change 😳😳 Awww he proposed her 😭

Flashback 🥳🥳
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LONG FLASHBACK 😲

... OMG, the flashback ❤️ bless my poor heart in these moments!
You hit the nail right on the head with this, baby 😆😆😳

I'm loving this plan of taking her there and surprising her, who wouldn't? Beautiful, beautiful part, my heart skips a beat ❤️ What a way to wake her up ☺️☺️ And the words you used, my heart can't take this anymore, awieee So you ❤️
And Gosh, I'm loving the built-up here, this was just so perfect 🤣 Jumping from a supposed bed to knowing that they are in a plane was so hilarious, totally imagining that 😆😆 Damn, he wanted eye contact when she was scared... that was so romantic! 😳😳
There are some particular thoughts you added here which are brilliant and so true 👏👏 It's indeed so true, it depends a lot on the people. And you can surely recover faster when you have the people you love by your side. ❤️ When the realisation of it hits Aman, the whole scene becomes so serene and mesmerizing. And Aman trying to make the whole thing lighter just adds to the beauty of this scene <3 You have captured every relationship perfectly, leaving no doubts that I should re-read this a lot 😆 And when they woke up in that bed, just WOW 😆😳 "Let me sleep" 🤣🤣 Oh Gosh, he loves his sleep so much just like SOMEONE I know 🤣❤️ Never disturb her sleep awwwieee 😆😳 So you 🤣🤣 And seriously, Geet pouting and both of them cuddling ☺️ So us... do you want to kill me with this part kya? 😆😳

Another thing I love - Aman walking keeping distance from them. And it's not about the fact that he keeps distance, it is about the fact that this shows how much happy he is for them and how much he trusts their relationship and he's now relieved watching Geet with Maan by her side, he knows he's gonna make her happy again 😳 What a beautiful moment for a proposal, totally touched my heart. ❤️ Great symbolism too - the colorful lights may mean their new beginning and their new life together, the b/w of the past couldn't touch them now... wonderful, my love 😳
Maan searching for Aman's support in those moments was also very touching. So many awesome details that make everything even better, when I thought it couldn't get better ❤️
His unique way of proposing - just so many feels right now, better if not confessed But thank you so much for their pure bliss... 😳🤗😆
Instant reactions coming from Geet, as expected. She is so right to doubt - not him, but her actions, according to her character. 😳 You see, she is selfless, she always thought about making him happy while taking decisions. But she knows many of them led her to huge pain. She's afraid she's gonna destroy her life but little does she know her presence in his life is literally his lifeline... ❤️
Obviously, the Soju touch of the stories - I love it so much 😆❤️
Loved the silent approval and her instant funny answer regarding the Europe tour. 😆 Awwwishhh 😳😳 But Maan is also no less, by God, you cracked me up baby 🤣🤣

This story is not only presenting the love life of Maaneet, but it also describes so many wonderful relationships, unforgettable bondings, heartfelt events and life changing decisions. ❤️ Even if you usually don't focus on the side characters in your stories, let me tell you you did a fabulous job in this one and you explored every single relationship beautifully, making me go lalala 🤪 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Soju.

Epilogue next week... if possible i will update sharks of my life too... i am done with half of the chapter

Epilogue? 😲😭😭 nahiii😭

I am done, you are simply the best. 😳 ❤️ How do you manage?
I take a lot of time even writing a comment for your updates cause I can't find my words, imagine writing them 😆 I guess loads of talent and practice 😉❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Soju.

PINGU

🤣 Awww 😆

reminds me of my pinku drink ❤️😳😆

I didn't know that I was starving till I tasted you 😆

😡 Are you trying to make me go Jlo? 🤔😆

you know I can't resist and I'm showing it off 🤣🤣

Edit: Just realised I am spamming this 😆 imma stop 😳

unres'd the previous one 😆
have to go out and I don't have my lappy with me

do take your time 😆 if possible don't even read it... 😆😳 I care about your time 😆😳

Nice update

Geet is recovering fast with maan by her side...
LOVELY update dear

Wilb waiting for next

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

Proud to be yours🤣

later edit: pity you, you got an awful stalker naa😭😭

edit 2:

Me*showsstalkervideo*

me: deffo not me...

S: its u
S:❤️

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This update is so so long can't stop blushing or hiding my excitement baby ☺️
The tissue box in the beginning cracked me up 🤣 Like I could already feel that was surely for me, you listened to my advice 😆 that was defo for you only love, you said once give us warning before or mu advise to keep tissues ready comes handy 😆😆 I'm sure others must need it too after reading this update 😳 But I need it more 😳 ❤️ I am so so emotional 😆 Upar se it is purple and pink 😆 muaaah ☺️ ❤️ OMG you are obsessed with me and i am loving it 😳
Your gifts are always fascinating 😳 Am Ai just drooling over a tissue box? 🤣 😆 Oh Lord, bless me 🤣 tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta ha ha ha 😆
Okay, so I know the things happened in the previous update and I'm sure this one is gonna be hella emotional for the night is dark and full of terrors 😆 But I know you are gonna make it brilliant by adding your own style/ touch like always... 😳 Hmmm I prefer your touch omly for me tho 😉 😆 i touch you everywhere lol this is just a fiction 😆 I don't know, I feel like reading your stories gives me so much joy I can't even express it properly 😆 Like I need my daily dose of you and us ❤️ And I am getting it even if you're not available, understood? Aarhasso 😆😉 😆 Okies so I should come back to the update before I make my love letter too long... 😳 ❤️ Well, even if I stop writing about this you know how much I love you ❤️

Now coming to the update , let me tell you how much you made me cry, like I can't even properly see through my teary eyes... so it is kinda difficult for me to join some inner forces in order to comment about this outstading 😭 This is so not fair 😭 😭 It is your longest update here and I think it is also the best one ❤️ Thank you and yes longest update i have ever updated 😲😲 Well, waiting for the next one to see if I'm right 😆 no no this one was the longest 😆 But so far this is the best thing ever ❤️ ❤️ You have this power to make me feel so good even if the update was damn emotional 😆 I am telling you, you are really special and... you make me try to be a better person ❤️ And when you find such people in your life keep them close to you, they are real gems. ❤️ you know on Zindagi channel Descendants will come OMG... oottooke???? 😭😭😭 ok i got carried away...
While reading this update I was going through so many different emotions, impatient to find out what happens next and how they will manage to overcome all these obtacles in their life I'm saying life and not lives because in your stories I am always identifying them as a single soul, living the same life ❤️ And to be honest, even if they were away from each other I still feel their life is the same because they were united by the same pain, same dreams, longing to have each other, dreaming about each other, fighting for each other, living in silence for each other Gosh, this silence is the worst! It may give you peace sometimes when you want to feel alone but when you need someone and the only thing you can do is accepting their silence it HURTS! Just so much you feel like you are suffocating, the unspoken words are the one we usually regret the most not saying 'em when needed 😭 And Maan and Geet were going through the same situation... When you spend every day of your life with the person you love and suddenly one decides to disappear from your life you just can't express the pain... poor them 🥺 Watching them walk away and you can't do anything to bring them back. And five years are too much What I love is that people do move on with time but here... here it is so different ❤️ After spending five years away from each other they are still missing each other, longing for each other, loving each other, caring for each other and so on ❤️ It just shows how true love never dies even with time passing by... You can't stop but you can make memories last forever... yes thats what true love is... its so us... i am suffering from lab and you always wait for me but you know about my disease 😭😭😭

Oh Gizzz wrote so much and didn't even properly started discussing the scenes individually 😆 Please forgive my excitement, my love 🤗 But you know me too well 🤣 And I'll totally understand you if you won't read this damn comment as it is too much 😆 Well, at least I'll try analysing less so you won't have my sheets all over your bed 😉 Oh, this sounds so ☺️ actually... 🤣 in this whole thing i just read sheets and i went like ☺️ 🤣
Baby I lala love you 🤗 ❤️ I really needed this!!! Not because I'm a sucker for pain or emotional stories but because your writing heals me 😳 So whenever you post something now I'm always there to read it 😆 I need more and more... Well, I should really start talking about the scenes because they got me so hooked ❤️
As we know, the news about Geet having cancer reached Maan's ears and he feels so much right now... pain, anger, disappointment, insecurities, he feels useless actually, because they didn't even told him about this, it just happened to be close to them and hear their talks 😭 I can totally understand what he feels right now 🥺 yes... Geet though was close to Maan she chose to keep him in dark giving somebody else that place 😭😭😭 When you feel you're not needed there, that others don't even feel like telling you such an important thing :'( but little does he know Geet went through the same pain all these years and she was helpless 🥺 Everyone's reactions, from Maan to Karan were just so on point, Oh Gosh!! ❤️ You just nailed everything and here I am in awe with you I am feeling bad for Karan in those moments Poor him, he just listened to Geet's wish because he knew going against her wish would make her feel even ore vulnerable 🥺 Maan's reactions speak a looot about his feelings! I thing there were so many unsaid thoughts all these years so now he felt like he could relieved still he just stopped with one punch not to hurt those people which Geet trusted blindly I just loved the realistic touch of all these scenes ❤️ through Maan's instant reactions. And Karan understanding him was even more touching... as he felt he would have reacted the same way if it was in his shoes. And you just melt my heart the moment Maan's legs stopped listening to him and he felt so weak, so lost... It was something that made him feel weak but also preparing him to face the cruel reality Maan threatening Karan, showing his care for Geet, going crazy... just outstanding, baby! Ufff how much I enjoy reading you 😳 ❤️ So true. The truth was hard to digest and he felt it in every lil' part of his body. Oh man, if you feel like that just imagine your Desi girl and what she went through all this time, not even having you close to her But he was right to think the opposite as she made him feel unwanted. There are so many reasons for that tho 🥺

Karan is just so sweet, I love how you made Geet have the support of such amazing friends. ❤️ Still they couldn't replace Maan but they were always supporting her and taking care of her like she was their little sis 😳 So adorable, the dynamics of every relationship are perfectly depicted here, my love Karan hesitating to tell him everything and Maan's poignant gaze added to the intensity of the scenes <3 Moi loves every line you wrote in this... ☺️ I still can't believe I am reading this again and again 😆 You should try too... gives goosebumps 😳 this one i wanted to show about relation among best friends, though at the start Karan and Geet were not close, but for Maan, Karan took Geet's responsibility 😳
When he found out and started connecting the dots was simply brilliant. He realised he wasn't actually the reason of their separation. He felt the possibility of another chance, a new chance to redefine their love story I know in that moment he must have felt only her pain and stuff and I taking this too far but my artist-like soul tells me to add it in my comment even if I may not make sense for you 😆 But you know how to handle me, baby! ;)
I love how Karan told him that she needs him so he should go and stay with her ❤️ But seriously... the way you choose every line for the characters is just perfect :o ❤️ It strikes me like damn, so much! Maan's outburst when he says about the fact that Karan didn't think Geet needs him all these years was the cherry on the cake. Stop using your magic wand, i have so many of them 😈 don't you dare leave such impact ☺️ 😳 I am telling you 😎 😆
Everyone is right in their own way. 😆 Situations are what make us helpless that is what dimensions are 😉 and we have to react according to what's best for us. Though Geet reacted as if it was the best for Maan... in a way, yeah that was right for him but that pain of being away from her hurted him like no other 😳 So trying to get rid of his pain, she actually has awaken another one which I bet was even harder. Not to say the regret he mist be feeling now for not being able to help her all these years 😳 But Geet loves him more than she loves herself ❤️ She knew she'll be lost without him but she wanted him happy. Ummm, so many mixed feelings here 😆

The moment he entered her room and watched her lifeless on the bed was so poignant ❤️ Gives so many feels 😭 He noticed she tried hard to cover her outside pain, even if it is nothing compared to her inner one. I guess time may heal this and his presence in her life may bring her back to life... ❤️ I see there's already an improvement in her reports after Maan returned 😳 The light touch of his hand over her pale skin was too much to handle. ❤️ The way he started caressing her skin was overwhelming and I had this sad smiley on my face reading this part... He couldn't stop and even cried watching her in this state. I hope he brings her back to life and the coldness he felt while caressing her skin goes away with time... Beautiful, so beautiful... so much love 🤗 ❤️ he did 😛
Emotionally so very much attached to the part when he says he'll cure her, he'll heal her. ❤️ He wants to forget all these past 5 years when he was nowhere near her, taking care of her or even guarding her. But he is glad she had her own guardian angels :) His efforts on trying to get the best doctor for her made him discover that her friends already searched for the best one and he felt relieved ❤️ So good he is now understanding them a bit more... 😳 😳
Your "wounded lion" part was fantabulous ❤️ Couldn't get a better definition of Maan right now... :) You know, even love is a lioness 😆 A young lioness ready to attack. She moves faster than you can think and bites your face. 🤣 She makes sure you are not prepared for that. She's too clever, I swear. And she can be tamed only when she gets the love back ;) Ugh, I should stop remaking the jungle book now! 😆 Jungle book 🤣
Your details are so delicious ☺️ 😆 Seriously when I think the story can't get even better you need to prove me wrong! And I'm loving it

Also, loving Maan's efforts in making Geet tell her parents everything. He knows it the best the feeling of not knowing something so important for so many years. Loving his concern ❤️ Isn't it amazing how Maan made Geet change her mind and realise she's being wrong trying to hide the cruel truth anymore from her parents? You have your way with words and makes me so happy, baby 🤗
The fact that he wants to redeem himself was so touching ❤️ I love this part so much in stories, I bet you love it too 😆 😳 Everything from Kareena's scene to Get finally recovering and watching Maan near here were awesome-sauce ❤️ Oh Gosh 😆 Maaneet in the hospital last part was so very emotional and absolutely loved it baby 😳 ❤️ Like I already said, it takes someone really special to write the way you do... I hope I'm getting you now cause I wanna cu-cu-cuddle 🤗 ☺️ because you are so sexily adorbubbles 😆 😳
Seriously, Geet's parents k reaction was such a realistic approach. ❤️ Especially her father's words that managed to reach my heart completely... ❤️
The cherry on the top with lots of vanilla ice cream 😆 was that last part with that fab song ❤️ I love it so so much... Both of them are finding their own haven in each other's arms... ufff ❤️
glad you liked each and every part baby 🤗
On the whole, before I bore you to the core, which I know I did 😆 Trust me, I skipped talking about so many parts just because it was getting too long 🤣 Sorry, but you said you want long comments! 😆😉 Let me end this by saying that I not only appreciate your work but love it to the core 😳 🤗 ❤️ And you are a real inspiration, especially for your clumsy and lost baby. 😆 inspiration hmmm... i am still waiting for the OS 😳😳Never forget that okay? 😳 Thank you so much for everything haan 🤗 And I wish someday my comments won't sound so boring like they do now 😳 And I also wish I could find different words to describe you as I'm running out of them when I'm talking about you 😆 😳
Keep up the brilliant work you do, I know you put all that love in every update... 🤗 I can feel that. ❤️
Love you so so so so so so so so so so ... [...] much baby 😳 🤗 ❤️ lala love

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