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It's shocking. Geet has lost her whole family in just a moment. She was broken and wanted to see them for once. Maan was also broken seeing her condition but he was also helpless. finally geet got free from allegations but from which pain geet is going isn't easy to over come. Though maan is taking care of her, geet's misunderstanding stopping her to think logically. Waiting for next dear

hi thanks 4 updating! sad update! well written! Feeling 4 Geet! she lost her family! she is shattered! Maan in pain! he seems helpless! Geet is proved innocent bt she angry with Maan! update soon

very emotional n sad update

Bad update geet they did not let her saw family last time
I wish it no geet family but akshat he deserves that not geet
But how geet address maanav as maan is she knew about him

saddy update. geet lost her family & she was very angry on maan , she thought maan is responsible for her condition . maan proved her innocent through adi . he promised himself that he will take care of her. he took her with him to her house & geet broke down after seeing the garlanded pics of her family .
waiting for next

intresting but confusing, so geets mother and her twin sibling dies in same building collapse but she was living in some slum rea no?it was very old building than how come geet involve in supplying wrong material to build to the same building where she is already living?maan being msk why he kept quite as he came to knew main culprit of the scame? so many links are missing, even in fiction some normacy requires ,i am not critisizing you as here all are imature writer so many mistake can happen and i am pointing at tht to just let you in future when you write just give attention to details as some logic sould be kept to keep intrest in story.Thanks for pm and i dont know what other idendity you are talking abolt?

Originally posted by: idunno

intresting but confusing, so geets mother and her twin sibling dies in same building collapse They are not in the same building... but in the coming update i am showing how her mom died... but she was living in some slum rea no?from the starting of this story when i introduced her family she is in the hospital i think it was you who missed the parts in between i mean i got a pm from someone... i forgot it was very old building than how come geet involve in supplying wrong material i think you should read the part 3, 4 and 5... it will get clear... to build to the same building where she is already living?she is living in slums i did not said she is living there... maan being msk why he kept quite as he came to knew main culprit of the scame? his identity is hidden but in the future updates you will come to know the reason... please have patience so many links are missing, even in fiction some normacy requires ,i am not critisizing you as here all are imature writer so many mistake can happen and i am pointing at tht to just let you in future when you write just give attention to details as some logic sould be kept to keep intrest in story.Thanks for pm and i dont know what other idendity you are talking abolt?

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Ye kya kia ??

sad part
geet was broken ..aftr hearing about her mother n twins death ...wanted to go back to them but could nt
maan gave fire to her mother's body n promised to keep geet happy
waiting fr geet's reaction