Reposting separate in life 17/16 part 9/10 on page 6

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Hi my first story Prologue I have come with name if it been used for this story please let me knowHi guys I going start my first story soon of Manneet this go to start when Manneet separate 4 year ago when Mann asked geet to leave when he lost his Memory there got an divorce. Now he has his memory back two year ago and been look for geet since but no luck he was sort of forced to get in enaged to samera (she nice person in this) because bussiness geet Met an old friend prem (who got construction empire in newyork) after her divorce and he offered her job to help him run his business which she accept and ow she an ruthless bussiness lady and partner.But the big catch his that geet was pregnant with Mann child at the time which he doesn't know he sweet little Armann kapoor you find why he surname different in the story.Prem and Mann signed deal together for big contact for indian government but prem doesn't no geet was married to Mann and this were Mann and geet will meet.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi welcome back! hw r u? thanks 4 reposting! will defn like 2 read again! update soon! Will u post u ur SS as well! U left it incomplete! ! do pm wen u do update!
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi welcome back! hw r u? thanks 4 reposting! will defn like 2 read again! update soon! Will u post u ur SS as well! U left it incomplete! ! do pm wen u do update!



Hi wil be starting my ss meri jann mera dil in April
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Hi wil be starting my ss meri jann mera dil in April

thanks ...will b waiting! pls do pm wen u update!
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Welcome back. Storyline seems interesting. Add me in ur pm list😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting prologue..
Maan has come out of his partial amnesia..but life has turned upside down in these four years for them both...

though I did not not like the memory loss track in GHSP serial, I found writers on Geet forum using the theme wonderfully..with different perspectives, tracks and going in to the depth of the feelings of the leads for this situation in their life..

so, waiting for the first chapter..:)

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nice to read it again and happy yhat u starting ur incomplete ss too
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Mann Singh khurana. And his family Vicky dev nadnani and dadima were attending lavish party in Delhi which was host by the khurana family it was joint deal with an famous construction bussiness man Prem kapoor who has company outside in Newyork usa.
Both company were doing joint venture for the indian government which was worth million for both company it was contract that prem had asked mann do with him in indian, he know that Mann is number construction company in indian so with his help and knowledge of indian it felt right to prem to ask him and Mann accept because of the design were amazing he never seen anything like it want to meet the architecture who had design these plan so and party was plan for this contract.

Dev and nadnani were greet the host and the party, dadima was with Mann and Vicky wait for prem and his business parter to turn up. Vicky could see that Mann was very tense and ask him bro wat wrong mann replied I don't no but I feel has geet is he in this hotel around me I feel her aroa around me.
Vicky hold Mann shoulder I know bro watt your feeling but we been looking for geet 2 year now and there no sign of her all detective agency have been look too but nothing . Vicky went back in the past remembering how his brother had suffered since he got his memory back and looking for his Jaan wat he put her threw when asked for an divorce and she begged him not to do this but he didn't listen to her once she pleaded with him and explain wat there love was to her he was her life she was his Jann and junoon but no he was Mann Singh khurana after all he got watt he want in life and that was for leave his house.

Dadima new wat Mann was going threw after he got his memory back and wat he did to geet all he does his work 24/7 or go to do his Thai chi, One of dadima old old quaintance asked for Mann ristha for his granddaughter sameera she was very highly educated and would match Mann stands.
Mann refused at first then dadima got ill that doctor said one more heart attacked will end her life so mann accept the proposal due his dadima health all she want was for him to settle down in life and she new geet would want that too .
Dadima went back into the past thing want geet said to her ,
Dadima I know I am leaving Mann and this house but promise me you will alway be there for my Mann and stand by him no matter want come in his way please marry him again so he can have happy life at least one of us will be happy in life ( both were crying together as geet said all this to her). I will moved on with my life too but even if Mann get his memory back I will still never come back too him because are love was not strong for Mann to understand watt we had and want we went threw to be together in life he was my strength for society .
See geet I have kept my promise too u I hope u happy were ever u are in this world has tear drop from her eye thing about her Vicky new want dadima was thing and gave her pick hugs and clean her tear way Vicky was strength of these two people now.

Samera and her granddad walk in to the function She was wearing long black gown with long loose black hair she was studding any Man would marry her but she was engaged to Mann such to keep her grandfather happy she had no feeling for Mann but never said anything to nobody to keep her honour of her family she kept quiet and got in engaged to him.
She touch dadima feet and got blessing in return and said hello to dev nadini and Vicky and walked over to mann to was with other work associate she tap his should and he turn around to see and gave an weak smile and polite said hello and asked how she was and how was her degree at uni she replied back say she we'll and doing good in her final year and then there hugged Mann excused him self to see prem coming in she nod and looked him go well she watch somebody she had fall in lover with has tear came down when she turned around to wipe them.

Mann approached prem and shook hand with smile so did prem and said honour to work with him.
Mann took prem introduce him to his family he touch dadima feet and she replied back give him an blessing Live long live and then he shook hand with dev and Vicky who he know and met nadini and sameera too the buhu of khurana family.
Prem said Mann you lucky yo have lovely family mann thank him
Waiter were handing out drink too everybody now and then mann asked prem we're the guest of honour for the party kept for prem replied she should be he soon
Mann asked she yes said prem my fianc and parter who design these building for are company she amazing women and very committed to wat she does in life.
May I ask her name Mann said yes her name is?prem phone rang and he excused him self And apologised for phone call mann nod and smile he under stood it bussines.

Mann was so curious who was this lady and why did his heart beat so fast when prem talked about her why did he feel he know her as if the soul connect together he had this anxious feeling inside has if his Jann his geet aroa was around him Vicky asked him are u ok Mann he replied no why do I feel geet present Vicky as if she near me I can't explain this feeling why
Vicky said the because geet in your heart body and soul mann she your aroa were you go u will feel her around you come bro let go and meet the rest of are guest well were wait for are main guest as There went to leave mann turn around and see an shadow coming at the entrance it was quiet dark the hall with dim lights and candle he felt somebody present and silently shout out geet.

Geet entrance in next chapter 2 on page 4
Sorry guy for any mistake I not good write but will try hard next time will upload character too soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 reposting! superb update! well written! Maaneet separated! Maan gt his memery back! he was shattered! Geet made dadi promise! Maan getting enraged 2 Sam 4 dadi! Maan senses Geet around! Prem talks 2 Maan abt his fiance! update soon
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nice to read it again
maan force to engaged sam's and she not in love
with maan too
geet too engaged

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