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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome Back I'm eager to read this story again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A Fabulous Start
Maan was forced to get Engaged to Sameera as his Daadi got a heart attack
while she too just got Engaged for the sake of her family
but it does seem like the person she loves is also at the party
Prem meet Maan and his family and when Prem talks about his business partner and fianc Maan feels it is Geet he feels that Geet is present at the party
looking forward now to see what will happen
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wonderful start..

Maan is living soulless life filled with regret and sufferings..but what else Geet would have done when he himself had gone to the extent of pushing her away from his life. It seems Geet did not want to go, but she had to take a decision which she did with what felt appropriate at that situation.

good that Sameera is not in love with Maan, and like Maan has agreed for the engagement for the sake of her grandparents.

waiting for the Maaneet meeting, would be interesting when they both have moved on in their life now, but of course not in their hearts..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Geet. Came out the car as the driver opened the door she had felt very nervous since she came back too india after 4 year she had promised her self that she wouldn't bring her old memory back with her she got her self together and moved toward the function which she was invited too .

Has she approached the venue her phone rang it was her little Man Armann her main reason to live he was only one who bought smile to her face in the past 3 year. She had become and she
Ruthless women in last four year in her life nobody messed with her she was very strong willed and serious about want she did in business world and in her personal life too.

Mamma were are u as Armann cried I no like nanny sia she want me go bed I don't want to go night night mamma, come to Armann home pleass I want cookie and choc milk please no night night nanny sia very bad hain to Armann mumma she no give me snack I not tired he said crying.
Geet asked him "kya hua y my strong baby is crying making him calm with her word mumma miss u baby will home soon with papa when he heard her voice my champ is big boy na no crying beta ok mumma, ok then champ pass phone to sia then he hand the phone over to is nanny and say mumma Gus's with sia upset mumma champ
Hi sia why Armann crying so much geet said. Sia replied I think his missing usa and you new place and people and with u and prem gone. To this party he feeling alone with out you two and I will give him milk and cookie and then settled him to bed . Sia handed the phone back to Armann so geet spoke to him champ mum will be home soon sia go give u choc milk ok beta then you go sleepi ok I love u champ love mumma 1 2 3 night mumma good boy she said and put the phone made her to the party smiling how stub her son was ( like somebody we all now he he)

Geet he said when he saw her at the door was it her or an luscious no it was his geet wearing white sari and her hair up in tight bun she looked like angel coming down the step every looked shocked even dadima was about to faint nandini got hold of her and asked if she was ok dadima nod yes well dev bought glass water Mann faced said it all to Vicky when he saw him that this was his Jaan and Vicky babhi ( Vicky hadn't seen picture of geet Mann burnt them all when she left him because he hate her at that time with memory loss) she looked like angel how dadima described her.

Mann start to move toward her slow make sure he was not dreaming geet notice everything had gone quiet in the party and she felt an aroma in the room she felt his present in her soul she new he was here and then her big brow eyes Saw him from the door a small tear drop from her eye such as she start to move somebody shout geet!
Prem saw her coming in while he was on his phone and excused himself from the phone and called her. She looked at prem with smile when he approached and hugged her with kiss on the cheek
Mann stood there looking at both them he got so angry and was ready to punch prem for touching his geet dev stop him and said no bro not he this an party your question will be answer by geet her self please bro! He looked at dev and nod his head and walked away, geet faced such drop when she saw the whole khurana family here why !
Prem said to geet come I will introduced to are new business partners as took her hand toward Mann she walked with him like dead soul and in shock.
Prem said Mr khurana meet by parter and the lady who design the building Plan geet Handa and of course the lover of my life my fianc he said, Mann was ready to ripe this guy apart how dare he call my Jann his life I going kill him fought Mann but strayed calm such looking at geet face.

Geet put her hands together and said hello mr khurana nice meet you mann was shocked that she didn't even shake hands with him does she hate him this much for wat he did to her and excused himself prem introduce her to rest of khurana family she touch dadima feet she said kushi row and smiled and hugged nadini
Asked how she was nandini I very happy di prem was shocked and asked how do u know each other geet replied that nadini his her massi daughter so there are sister and prem smiled meeting somebody from geet family because she never talked about then and he didn't want to ask about her past because it upset her so much she was strong women now. Sam Was standing there watching want was go on and then dadima said this Mann fianc sameera there shook hand and smiled geet thought Mann has moved on too why does she feel jealous inside no geet you strong remember your promised to yourself.

Mann was at the bar watching all this having an drink he wander if geet was feel jealous about sameera and how would she react find out that Mann got his memory back he want to talk to her alone hug and kiss her feel her did she want the same he had to get alone and talked too her his Jaan it was killing him inside that prem was hold her shoulder while he was introduce her to people.
Vicky came to Mann and said I can see why you fell in love with her she is an angel bro Mann had tear in eyes which he wiped before somebody saw them.

Geet was feeling his eyes on her she new he got his memory back the way he looked at her that junoon he gad in his eyes for her. Geet thought she moved on now so she will stray strong
She said prem why didn't you tell me the contract was with khurana family he looked her and he replied he want to surprise her with the news that there were doing business with number one company in India she such nod her head then her phone rang it was newyork office she excused her self from prem because it was too noise at party take phone call.


She such finish her phone call in the lobby when she bump in to Mann her whole life came flash in front of her, Mann saw walk out and followed her looking that nobody notice his leave this was his chance to speak her.
Hello Jaan he said while look at her she did responded too him such stare at him, Mann went to touch her face with his palms but she stop him no mr khurana don't touch me as she went to move back to the party.
He grabbed her hand and pulled toward his chest and dragged toward quiet corner in the lobby and said Jann please listen to me such once let me explain please as he touch her face and pushed his body on her she felt like she was in heaven Jann he said while kissing her forehead a tear drop into his hand from her big brown eyes and he slight his hands down to her waist bring her close then she came back to her sense she pushed him off and said mr khurana 4 year is long time so I've have moved on and look of it so have you I am not that geet anymore do u understand so don't ever touch me again and stray out of my personal life and I stray out of yours too were he to do an business deal so let such do that do make myself clean mr khurana, and as she walked way! by the way Congrats on you engaged to Sam she look like nice girl best of luck and walked off leave mann shocked .
Edited by k1k1k1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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terrific update! well written! Maaneet meet! Geet treats Maan like a stranger! she says she has moved on! they will only discuss business! she congrats him on his engagement! update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maaneet separated due to Maan's memory loss
that attitude singh khurana didn't hear geet's pleadings
now when he got his memory she is not with him
and he is burning in hell without his mishti..his Jaan
Geet moved on...with her cute littler ArMaan
Amy calling prem as papa!!??
After long they met..but geet's behaviour is killing Maan
Should Maan be blamed??or the fate...

plzz continue soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 3
Geet walked away Mann such watched her disappear in to the venue he punched the pillar and his knuckles were bleeding but the pain was in his heart not from the hand, why does she hate me this much for want I did too her no Jann you can't such give up on us like this you got to let me talk to you I love you more than anything in this world and this Mann does not exist with out his geet.
Vicky was looking for Mann and then saw geet coming back in to the party he new by geet face she was with Mann so he made way out And found him in the lobby lost bro what happen to your hand it bleeding Mann replied Vicky I've such lost the lover my life forever she moved on how can she do this when know she mine Vicky I can't see her with anybody Vicky, I possessive of myJann I know now my love wasn't strong enough when I lost my memory Geet used say we one soul we feel each aroma we didn't need word for are lover are soul said everything what we felted for each other and mind new what we were thing too I lost her Vicky as tear came down Mann eyes she right I should have know what bond we had when I lost my memory that time if my love was strong like hers I wouldn't have not be alone in the world like I feel now. It would been better if we never met like this at least I would of thought my Geet still waiting for me in this world not with somebody else has he walked away in pain.

Vicky looked at his bhai walking away! No bro I will bring bhabi back to the km and back to u that promise from me to you and I need talk sameera about this she will understand mann problem and I know Sam marrying him for her family happiness and are business merge plan to help her grandad sam know Mann is divorced and never asked about is past she doesn't want to ask him by upsetting him about his ex wife . Mission manneet start now smirked Vicky .

Geet walked back in with tear in hers eyes why did she let him kiss her and touch her like that she want too kiss as much he did she still loved him even now after watt happen 4 year ago she still felt his touch even after all this time which made her shiva thing about him I cant go back I made an promised to myself that I have to stray focus and do what we came here to do and go back to usa with prem and armann and continue our life. Prem approached geet everything ok geet yes she replied such pari sorting out appt for the office he nod and smiled hold her shoulder.

Dev and nandini were on stage and asked his bro and family with Sam to come on stage and then called prem with geet too sign final stage of this joint deal which there did in front the press everybody clapped in the party Mann was stare at geet all along he did like prem been near her she could feel his eyes on her but didn't looked at him once has geet was coming down the step her sari got court in her heel she went to slip but somebody strong arm grabbed her waist and arm she had closed eyes she new it was Mann that touch was know to her she looked up saw him(have mahi moment) and he whisper are u ok jann ! Prem ran up to her geet are u ok I'm fine she said let go of Mann arm Thankyou mr khurana she replied that pinched his heart when she called Mann buy his surname prem phone started to ring and he excused him

Vicky nudged dev and his babhi too get the party moving.
Dev said now the deal signed let party music please he took nandini to dance floor and Vicky suggest to Mann take Sam for dance Mann looked at him with is angry eyes, Mann took Sam on to the floor we'll staring at geet wanting too know if she was feel jealous she about to walk away when Vicky asked Ms geet will you give me the pleasure of this dance don't worry I'm nice guy he smiled she smirked at his sense of humour and nod yes he took toward dance floor.

Next Song playing tum bi ho from flim Aashiqui 2
As slow music stared geet was about excuse her self but Vicky came near Sam and Mann said let switch partner he quote Sam smiled at Vicky and looked at Mann he nod to her it ok and then Vicky pushed geet toward Mann and winked at him to say go bro! Mann smirked at Vicky tactic geet got very annoyed and was going to walk away when Mann took her hand
With press standing there he said don't make an scene the press are watching he took her waist and start to dance with her she looked him very angry. Their dance to song so close to each other geet was get weak from his touch when tear came now geet eyes he saw then wipe with his thumb ( it quite dark on the floor and song tum bi ho Lyrics Were upsetting her) Jann please talked to me let me explain since I got my memory back I been looking for u please believe since the day u left I punished myself let u go please give us an chance he whispered in her ear I love you Jann .
She bit her lip look angry at him were was your love went you ask me for divorce I begged u Mann not to do this did u listen once no your big ego wouldn't let u I cryed and even said u let me stray here I won't even ask you to be your wife I stray as servant but you told me u hate the sight of me in this house I married you for money and statues not love those your word Mann why are u asking me come back now because got memory back remember wat we had together no mr khurana u should know we were one soul you used say we can read each other's Mind word were not need to be set isn't that wat you used say Mann talked now she said he such looked at her in believe she was right there were on soul and he didn't feel that when he threw her out his life. Geet please i can't change past but we can still have future together I love u Jaan come back to your Mann or I will die with out you in my life I live for you geet he was saying all this while there still dancing.

Geet quote what furture Mann you my past now I have life with prem in the usa I moved on with life that geet his dead and gone. I don't love you anymore and there is no Mann Singh khurana in my future do you understand me. Stop lying Jann I can see it in your eyes that u have feeling for me geet and that you don't love me swear on my life he said too her she looked at him with tear Mann replied you can't can you geet because I see the love in your eyes for me even now when u saw today you want run into my arm and hold be forever . No Mann I promised by self that I will never let u hurt be again I hate you do you understand I hate you he pulled her closed to his body and kissed her like there kissed the first time geet responded back too him his tough was in her month licking her lip she pushed him away and slap him hard on the face everybody the heard the slap the whole venue stopped how darn u touch me I hate u she replied. Mann said if u hate me so much Jann why did u Kiss as well that tell me you still have feeling for me don't you! Shake her shoulder she pushed him away saying No I don't mr khurana stray out my personal life do u understand I despise u Mann and ran out before look at dadima saying sorry.

Mann put his hand threw his hair pushed it back looked every body in the party and when too run after geet but dev and Vicky stopped him let her go bro she need time please Mann pushed is brother out of the way and went thought the back door
Sorry ladies and gentlemen party is over everybody start to leave. Prem saw all this happening when he was coming back from the lobby and was shocked he saw geet running out and followed her geet he shouted she looked at him and said why did we come back to india prem please I want such want to go home to Armann has she cried he took off his jacket put around her and called the drive to take them home he didn't want ask her anything because she was very upset and he trust geet more than his life he will wait till she ready too tell him about her past.

Mann left there and drove like an mad Mann thing of geet word I hate u she said no he thought getting angry he stop the car by the cliff and screaming geet you can't hate me arrr he said and then land on his knee screaming geet I love u.
Edited by k1k1k1 - 9 years ago
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Chapter 4
As prem and geet got into the limousine geet had tear coming down prem wiped them way and looked her geet are u ok she nod and put her head on his shoulder he new Mann had something do with her past but want her to tell him everything he trust geet more than his life, he would wait till she ready to talk about her past to him. Geet new prem had lot of question but wouldn't never ask her anything. Her thought went back to the slap and kiss why did you do that Mann after all these year u still have power over me and I responded to the kiss was it my faulty too no geet you can't go back to Mann. Mann was your past and prem is your furture I will be more strong in front khurana family I not weak as I used to be Mann you will have to move on like I have with prem and Armann are my family now soon we do this project the better so we go back to New York.
As there reached the mansion the driver opened the car door and let them out there went into the mansion prem replied geet are u ok she looked at him and said I fine. I thing we need to talk geet what happen today with mr khurana , I know prem give me hour to change and see Armann then I meet in the study ok he replied softly I love you geet she smiled at him and gave him hug. Go get changed prem said to geet. Prem asked the sevent to make him coffee and bring it to the study for him.
Sia was coming down the stairs and said evening miss geet hello sia how Armann fast sleep or still up no madam fast sleep he had the hot chocolate and we read his favourite book then he fell asleep. Goodnight sia geet replied goodnight madam.

Geet went to her room and grabbed an towel from the cupboard went to bathroom and ran the shower and got undress went under water and shouted out Mann I sorry I love you I lied I don't hate you but too late know I moved on so have you so have you she sat under the shower and cried so much say I'm sorry I'm sorry.

She had her shower and came out and sat at her dressing table remembering Mann word 4 year ago when he lost his memory and had been home for three month now and still did not accept geet as his wife after the accident he asked her to leave km and want an divorce she begged him not too do this and give it an chance to work but Mann was Stub and said geet I don't love you and have no feeling either so why stray in relationship that not go no were for both of us I never been marry kind since by heart was broken by roop ( this women broken is heart before he met geet that why is so hard core with attitude ) and I don't trust you why wood I marry middle class girl like who has no grace at all and I thing dadi properly forced me to marry u no Mann she didn't if u listen to me I can explain everything to u how we met and fell in love and got married! Look geet I not interested such sign the divorce paper and leave my house but Mann I have something to tell u please let me stray has servant if you don't want me to be your wife I will never come in front of you. For dadima sake please I beg u Mann no geet I hate u and can't stand been in the same room as u leave now I said Mann shouted.


Mann dadima shouted how dare u talk geet like that and wat make u thing I will let her sign the papers dadima she as no choice or I will leave km and move to England for good No Mann don't leave dadima and your family need u Geet said I will sign the divorce paper as you asked I will not stand here and let u talk to me like that to me Mann you will one day regret every single work you said too me but dadima I swear I will never come to Mann or km again in this life no matter what ever happens"
Geet please don't say that beta how will I live without u you made this mansion happy place again and now u leaving me sorry dadima she snatched the paper and pen off Mann and signed them and threw on the floor and walked off to collect her thing to go she had tear coming down her cheek dadima saw geet tears as she walked pass her but she didn't look back at dadima why Mann have you done this you will never forgave your self if she go Mann stop her before it too late
Dadima I never regret any in life let her go as he walked off .
Geet came down with her bags dev and nandini heard everything from dadima wat had happen the ran to geet to stop her please don't go di geet looked at nandini and smiled at her look after dadima and dev this house is your responblilty now nandini and I know you will make good wife and bahu there both cried hugging each other dev please look after everybody special Mann he nod his head and said sorry geet I couldn't save your marriage. Geet walked toward dadima hold her hands and say make me an promised you will never blame Mann for this dadi otherwise anywhere I go I will not be happy promise me please she looked at geet crying I won't you have my word beta Thankyou . Geet smiled said I will promise you dadima I will be ok but will never come back in Mann life again has she walked out of km somebody standing on balcony listen all the conversation.

Geet came from the past and wiped her tears and went to Armann room she opened the door quietly and looked at her son he was the reason for her living now her champ geet sat next to him and touch his cheek and came down and gave him an kiss on Armann forehead and looked at him with love.
As she was moving away Armann opened his eyes and said mumma I wake now Armann want cuddle with mamma please she smiled and him and hugged him so tide luv u 123 mumma me too champ!
She looked at him while he went back to sleep he looked like Mann every day she thought and Stubbed too if Mann find about Armann he will try take him away from me I can't let that happen my champ is my reason too live I need talk prem and tell him about my past! Geet gave champ an kiss and left room to talker to prem.


Mann made his way home parked the car and went into km Vicky said bhai as he came in not now Vick please has he walked toward his room.
Let him go Vicky dev said Mann need time you know what he like when he angry dadima got up and said dev right we need give him space after what happen today I don't no how Mann will ever get over the fact geet is engaged to somebody else and watt the future hold for both of them I don't have an clue said dadima kismet has separate them and maybe there kismet will bring together thought Vicky I will make that happen dadima you will see and i need talked too Sam about this too everybody went there rooms.


Mann got changed in to his track pant and vest and went to his gym excise like mad Mann punching the bag and kicking it too and thing geet word I hate u Mann I hate Mann that what kept on thing and getting more aggressive kick the punch bag his hand were bleeding now but the pain he gave her was nothing to the pain he had he punched for an while and went down on his knee. Geet please don't leave me like your mann need you come back my life nothing without you geet please back too me I will do anything please babji
Dadima shouted Mann when she saw all the blood are u mad Mann looked your hand beta nankul she shouted get the first aid boxes now no dadima I need suffer this pain now the pain I gave my Jann is nothing compare to wat she had too suffer I lost her dadima she hate me u heard her word didn't u and she engaged to somebody else. my geet loves me till death does us part that was the vow we took do you remember on are wedding day she looked like and angel how happy I was that day why did this happen me dadima have I not suffered by loosing my parent now geet How will I live without her he shouted crying in his grandmother laps she my life and soul that I live for if she leave me Mann Singh khurana will die help me get her back please cryed Mann
I promise u beta I will bring geet back to u Mann your Jann will come back to you my beta Vicky heard all this at the door and bought the first aid box from nankul and went toward his bro and looked at him and said bro I promise angel will come to us Mann looked at him and said Vicky will geet come back do really thing yes bro kismet will bring back yo km and you wait and watch.
Mann was in his room now look at geet photo on his bedside draw Jann I will bring u back because I know wat I did to u was wrong and I pay for the rest my life but you still love me I saw in your eyes today I want you back by hook or crook that Mann Singh khurana promise he kissed her photo and picked up the phone spoke to person on other side and I want to know what geet Handa been do in the last four year in one hour do u understand he put the phone down and went toward the picture on the wall of geet I coming get u back my Jann.

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Edited by k1k1k1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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2 updates..wow!!
Geet is firm so is Maan
The slap was unexpected😲
Hope Sam understands and move out of Maan's life
Maan spoke such words to Geet
Will Armaan and Maan meet???😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for reposting
I have read before... Happy to read again
Can u please make an index on pg1

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