Master Mashai |Short Story| Ch-4,5| Pg 19|

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Posted: 7 years ago

#141

Thank you Taahir for your wonderful feedback. You've expressed the essence of the chapters quite succinctly.

It's so nice to see you here. Hope you like the rest of the story too. 😊

Originally posted by: taahir004
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Maanik meets the young lady that captured his attention , he had thought her to be chaste but the moment she calls out to him as Babu he feels repulsive at her advances
she follow him almost begging him and just when he decided to give her a rude reply he notices her lips are trembling as if in fear while she carries nervousness around her and he knew its her first time
but been a matured man he could not even advice her to help her out instead he runs away
making his nights restless as he thinks and dreams about her
until eventually he meets her probably she has left that very night and decided to start her little business of selling flowers

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Posted: 7 years ago

#142

her innocent mind and innocent question ..he didn't expect those from her ..is that mean she did manage to capture his attention ?
we only expect from those whom we care or say deeply thinks but again she is only a stranger for him again it say simetime one moment is enough
let's see

Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#143

won't lie I enjoyed his condition and his happiness too
seeing her safe and sound he was so content I can feel it
no word for your writing ..its feel like everything happening before me ...