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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 58

Geet was doing something when she heard a knock on her room's door, she looked up only to see dadima at the doorstep
Geet- dadima u..why r u knocking please come inside.., she got up and moved towards her while dadima stepped inside..
Dadima- I thought u might be upset because of Maan.. but Geet cut her in between
Geet- yes dadima initially I was but apart from him I too was at fault... I spoiled all his hard work in my carelessness.., feeling guilty Geet said..
Dadima was awed to see the matureness in Geet..
Dadima- hmm..but still Maan shouldn't have shouted on u like that...
Geet- what's new in that dadima.. being angry is his birth right...he can be angry at anytime, anywhere ,on anyone..sometimes I feel his digestion process is not completed without yelling at anyone..sometimes its nakul, sometimes its Vicky and today it was me..geet was going on and on ,dadima was surprised to see this new side of Geet..the Geet who always used to be silent and shy in front of all can speak so much was a sweet surprise for her..she was really happy to see this side of her and somewhere felt proud of her grandson too who's efforts were finally showing off..coming out of her thoughts she looked at Geet who was still blabbering something.. this brought a smile on her lips..
Dadima- bas bas Geet..I understood what u r trying to say..anyways what were u doing??
Geet- woh I was revising the details of a project..from tomorrow I have to join office na..so I should be aware of all the new developments..
Dadima- what's the need..Maan will himself brief u about all the developments in the night..as soon as these words left her mouth she realized what blunder she did...
Geet(confused)- how..but before Geet could complete her question Dadima diverted the conversation somewhere else... as she don't want to be caught by her grand daughter in law that she nowadays was shying on her children ...no never...
soon they heard another knock on the door and this time it was driver
Driver- Geet mam ,Maan sir has asked me to pick u up by 7 pm..
Geet- ji..I will be downstairs by then.., after getting geet's reply driver left..
Dadima - thank god ! I thought Maan in anger will avoid to go out with u..but if he is ready to go then why not he himself came to take u..., Dadima knew maan's reason for not coming but to just know geet's thoughts on this she said that but geet's reply surprised her yet again
Geet- his boiling anger must have cooled down and now he must be feeling guilty for shouting on me and would be finding it awkward to face me..I tell u Dadima ur grandson sometimes behave like a complete different person.. shrugging her shoulders she said.. and then selecting one of her dress for cupboard she left to change
Dadima(looking at the retreating figure of Geet and thought)- u have started understanding Maan so well Geet..after me its only u who understand him..this realization brought tears of happiness in her eyes..u r perfect for my Maan..
Few minutes later, Geet left with driver to her destination..during whole drive Geet's mind was busy in recollecting the memories of their previous outings..which brought sweet smile on her face..she was still lost in those memories when the jerk of the car brought her back to the real world..
Driver- mam we are there!
Geet looked outside, only see a grand mansion in front of her and nothing else..
Geet- which place is this??, while coming out of the car she asked
Driver- this is the farmhouse, sir asked me to drop u here...sir is waiting for u in the lawn..saying so driver left with the car leaving behind Geet..
Geet looked around herself,the eerie silence scared her,uff ye Maan what kind of place is this..inhe koi restaurant nahi mila aaj...the silence was not enough that now the winds too became strong which added to geet's fear..
Geet- Geet curse Maan later first find him!,with quick steps she moved inside...
In middle of lawn ,Maan was checking everything for one more time...
perfect dinner date table-check
candles and flowers-check
geet's fav masledar Punjabi food-check
music system- check
Maan- hmm..so everything is well in place..hope all this is liked by Geet..., Maan glanced at all arrangements done by him and felt proud of himself but soon the strong winds blew off the candles..
Maan- these winds!!, hope they don't destroy my setup, cursing the winds Maan moved forward to light the candles again...
as he lighted the first candle, he heard her stop footsteps..
Maan(st)- she is here...,he titled his head in her direction and saw her..there she was ,dressed in cream coloured chudidar having an angelic charm on her face she was walking towards him...
Both pair of eyes met, one having a relief to find other while other was full of appreciation for his love..
with slow steps she was decreasing the distance between themselves while he was drooling on her.. but looks like god had some other plan altogether that it started raining suddenly.. the raindrops brought Maan back to his senses and he immediately ran under the roof to save himself from getting drenched.. shrugging the waterdrops from his crisp white shirt he looked at his arrangements which were completely spoiled..
Maan- aah these rains...I so hate them!!!,frustrated with rains ,he got to see another thing to frustrate him more and that was Geet..who was currently facing the sky with open arms as if she was the one happiest soul to welcome rains
Maan- phele mujhe lagta tha ye mere pyaar mei pagal hai..but no I was completely wrong..ye sach mei pagal hai!!, this girl she has lost her mind..aise koi baarish mei bheegta hai kya??, for few seconds he kept looking at her but when it got out of his control he himself stepped in front and went to her..there Geet was fully enjoying her drenching session when suddenly she felt a jerk on her arm and soon she found herself under the roof..
Maan ( in anger)- Geet tum..what should say to u..sometimes I feel tumhe kuch kehna hi bekaar hai...do u know why ..because in the end u will do what u like..last week only u were suffering from cold because of ur this stupid habit of drenching in rain..at that time only I told u not to repeat this act and today again!! , why don't u understand at once ?, he blurted out all this in anger but when he looked at her face he realized what he did..and in regret he closed his eyes!
Maan(st)- u r gone Maan!
on the other hand all the sweet sweet thoughts which she was having for Maan were gone after facing his anger but this time she didn't answer back or spoke anything to increase his anger like before and kept listening to him until he completed and when he was done..she averted her gaze from him and in same tone as him she said- sorry!
Her sorry brought him back from his regret zone ,he looked at her, she was facing in front rather than him but her clenched fist plus the stiff posture of her body were conveying her state of mind to him
Maan- a..woh..a.., Maan tried to ask for sorry but nothing appropriate was coming out from his mouth ,in between his gaze landed on her wet clothes
Maan(st)- if she remain in these clothes then she will surely catch cold again.. Maan sorry baad mei kehna first make her change these clothes!
Maan- Geet come with me..,holding her hand he dragged her along with him..surprising Geet
Geet- Maan where r u taking me??, but he didn't reply, not having another option Geet has to follow him...
climbing the stairs they reached to one of the bedrooms..
Maan- change into something dry..
Geet- no I'm okay in these clothes!
Maan- Geet change or u will catch cold!
Geet- u don't have to worry!
Maan- Geet tum!.. but controlling his anger he said... Geet please..hearing his please Geet said.., I haven't brought an extra clothes with me!
Maan- change in my clothes!
confused Geet looked at him
Maan- I mean I few have few pair of my clothes here u can change into them...he went and brought out one of his shirt and track pants and gave them to geet..
Maan- change ..I will come back within 10 minutes! , saying so he left, as he left Geet mimicked him
Geet- change..I will come back within 10minutes...ye Maan I don't understand him if he care so much then why this anger ..shanti se bhi toh keh sakte the lekin nahi bina chillaye inki baat kaha puri hoti hai!
meanwhile she looked at the clothes in her hands..chal Geet beta now wear these clothes...
she changed into them and then looked at herself in mirror.. the oversized shirt plus pants were making carelessness I spoiled them..and now u were not at fault..u shouted because u were worried about my health while I was too busy in enjoying rain that I forget about my health.. so in both cases it was me who was at fault..but I want to suggest u something.. sometimes try to convey ur worry in soft tone too instead of shouting... ab har baat ke liye chilna..doesn't look good na..
Maan- but..
Geet- I covered everything in my long speech right???, to which Maan nodded his head..good now can we please close this sorry saying session ?
Maan- hmm...
Geet- good!, saying so Geet moved close to window..
Geet- its still raining..
Maan- u love rains right?
Geet- a lot!..u don't like them?
Maan- I feel mutual..
Geet- matlab ?
Maan- for me if its rain then its okay and if it doesn't then also its okay!
Geet- oh...
for few seconds silence covered the place..which was as usual broken by Maan..
Maan- today I thought this silence will not come between us
Geet- why so?
Maan- few minutes back u were going on non stop that's why..I thought u will not allow this silence between us..to which Geet just smiled...
Maan- by the way I planned to say sorry in bit filmy way like they show in movies but this rain spoiled everything..,all arrangements , ur fav dishes everything..
Geet- really?? I mean u really planned a romantic set up?
Maan- yeah I tried to but nothing went according to my plans because of this rain..
Geet- in life mostly things don't happen according to our plans.. so its better to flow with life rather then making plans and then getting depressed if things don't get done as we wanted them(lost in her thoughts she said)..anyways now what?
Maan- nothing!
Geet- but I'm hungry..and I even asked Dadima not to make dinner for us..
Maan thought something and then said- I have a solution!
Geet- what solution??
Maan- chalo ..holding her shoulder he brought her in living area and made her sit on sofa..u sit here and watch something on television tab tak I will make something..
Geet- u know how to cook?
Maan- not everything but few dishes I can..
Geet- impressive.. all rounder MSK..I too will help u..
Maan- okay..u can chop the veggies!, to which Geet smiled..
Soon Geet got busy in chopping veggies while Maan boiled the pasta, as Geet was done she moved to Maan..
Geet- so pasta..ur fav!
Maan- u remember?
Geet- a..hmm.., veggies are done now what should I do??
with that both maaneet with each others help prepared the pasta..after it was ready they served it in a bowl and went to living area to have it..
Geet- mmm..tasty..
Maan- thank u!
Geet switched on the tv and tuned into a music channel where the old melodies were playing, she enjoyed her dinner along the with songs , on the other hand while listening to songs an idea came into maan's mind..he looked at Geet who was enjoying herself.. boosting his courage he kept his bowl aside and got up..clearing his throat..
Maan- ahem..(forwarding his hand in front of Geet) may I have a dance with u beautiful lady?
Surprised Geet looked at him...
Maan- please...
Geet(smiling)- yes.. , she gave her hand into his..
Maan pulled her in his arm..he encircled his arms around her waist while geet's arms went on his shoulders..
both slowly swayed to the beats of the music..
Maan- so finally I fulfilled ur wish!
Geet- wish?
Maan- wish to have a dance with me?, smirking he said
Geet- when I said I have this wish?
Maan- u didn't but ur eyes did!
Geet- when? ,unknowingly she moved closer to him
Maan- whenever u go out for dinners, ur eyes look dreamily at dancing couples as if u too want to dance..so today I fulfilled ur wish..
Geet(with smirk on her face)- accha toh u already knew what I wished that times but if u already knew then why didn't u ask at that time only?, Maan was trapped..
Maan- woh..woh..h..
Geet- leave it Maan..don't give any silly excuse because I already know ur reason!
Maan- reason?..what reason?
Geet- yahi ki all rounder MSK feels shy in public!
Maan- no!
Geet- yes u do!
Maan- what nonsense!
Geet- like u can read my eyes I too can read ur inner thoughts behind ur hard facial expressions Mr.Khurana ,with that she patted his cheeks and as she did she realized what she did..she tried to take a step back then realized she in locked in his arms..feeling her awkwardness Maan released her from his grip..
Geet- a..my clothes might have dried I should change..saying so she left to change...
after she was done maaneet left to km...
Vicky was roaming in his room in his own tension when he heard the horn of a car ,he went to window and saw Maaneet coming out from the car...
Vicky- bro and Geet.. don't know how they will react tomorrow after knowing about nishi..oh god please sab sambhal lena...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Stupendous update..
Dadi came to talk to geet about maan's behaviour but her replies surprised Dadima! She was blabbering continuously and that was new for dadima..
She was really happy that geet has started understanding maan 😊
Maan set up perfect dinner date for him n geet but much to his displeasure rain started pouring out and ruined everything..
He saw geet enjoying in rain and became angry seeing her neglecting her health..
They both again started chanting sorry to each other!
Maaneet prepared pasta and relished every bit of it..
Woww their romantic dance was like cherry on the cake ❤️
thanku for pm
continue soon
Edited by chaudhary_kajal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update dea
Daadi was happy 2 c new side of geet
maan plannd a romantic dinner bt rain spoild everything nd he again shoutd on geet
bth spent sm quality time tgr
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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awsemm loving the understanding between maneet
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update ..but
I wanted to see more maaneet moments and little bit romance 😳
I m surprised to see how well geet understand maan ..she is maturely handling things now .
maan did the magic ...he brings out the actual geet ..who can talk non stop and crazy .
maan planned a romantic dinner for geet but the rain spoiled all his hard work & plannings but koi nehi ..geet is happy to spend her tym with maan ...and they spent their time beautifully ...
Vicky is planning to tell maaneet about nishi's truth ..why so soon ? let them enjoy little time more na *greedy me* 😛
thanx for the pm dear ...continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update... maan tried to apologize to geet and for that he made romantic arrangements in farmhouse... but everything got spoiled by rain... still they managed to come a little closer in understanding each other... dadima is happy that geet understands maan very well...
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a nice update date bechaare maan ki date ka faluda bna diya I liked the way geet understand him and they had a romantic date too i lied the way geet told dadi ma and removes her worry... and I liked their dance too...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Dadi came to talk to geet about maan's behaviour but her replies surprised Dadima
She was really happy that geet has started understanding maan
Maan set up perfect dinner date for him n geet but much to his displeasure rain started
He saw geet enjoying in rain and became angry seeing her neglecting her health..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update.
must say worth the wait.
Geet started understanding Maan and his feelings.
finally Maan tried for a romantic date
Rain spoiled his plan but Geet did not mind it.
Finally they had sort of romantic date with dance
wat will happen next when Maaneet will get to know about Nishi.
waiting for next

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