FF- DESTINY OF TWO SHATTERED SOULS- Teaser on pg 52(10/09)

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! well written! Maan misses his wife so much! Pari upset at Maan! Ashmita speaks 2 her! Pari teases them! Sia has a nightmare! Maan realizes Pari is upset! he has 2 manofy her! Pari insists Maan accompany her 2 the orphanage! Maan had promised her! update soon! thanks 4 the note n clarifications!

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swapna.p

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

nice update..
waiting for next update..

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ammu5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Lovely update ...loved bhui n pari moments

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fict

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Just started reading this story. Emotional and painful beginning. Both Maan and Sia are broken. Maan is missing his wife Sameera badly and Geet is having nightmares about past encounter. Pia is cute and hopefully her demand will have the effect as desired by Ashmita.

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Cynthia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Finally got time to read the update...

Maan n Geet both are enveloped in their past so deeply that they are not letting themselves to come out of it...

One step taken by Ashmita by making Pari on her side on the pretext of punishment is something that can get HIM back..

This Pari is so cute.. But pata nahi Papa cutie ke sunenge ya nahin...

Geet ne phirse sleeping pills li...

Waiting for the past to reveal n Maaneet to come face to face...

Fantastic update...

Thanks for the pm..

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sss333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

I just read chapter 1 and 2 together. Seems really interesting. U portrayed everone"s emotion very well.please add me for PM too.feeling bad for maan &Dia. Poor Paris too suffering without mom.update soon dear